《Error 69》𝐂𝐇𝐀𝐏𝐓𝐄𝐑 𝟑𝟒
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"There are guard's in the entrance." Victoria mumbled beside me.
We were in a dark alleyway right in-front of the so called club but what I realized minutes ago is this is a club. Women of all ages dressed in lingerie walked in and out the club and by what im seeing they had some sort of card they showed the bulky men in black suits.
Valentino hadn't shown up yet, he called Victoria explaining he had to do something first and he hanged up quickly leaving Victoria desperately confused.
"We could seduce them?" I volunteered looking at all of them.
"Yeah, we could do that." Victoria said taking my side, her hand moved to her hip as her hip tilted to the side.
Kai rose an eyebrow and he stared at both of us, "I don't think Valentino would approve that." He stated, he checked the watch on his wrist that read 10:46pm.
"He isn't even here." I said walking forward pushing back the slight irritation. "Plus, i don't think he'll mind."
Before Kai could come up with another excuse, I came into the guards view. I made sure to sway my hips side to side. My frown turned into a sickly sweet smile as I tilted my head. I stopped right in front of him as I put on a thinking face.
"I was told to come at this club...am i in the right place?" I innocently asked giving him my best wide clueless eyes.
He looked down at me. "Unless you have a card, I think your not in the right place." He responded. His breath hit me like a truck making me smile falter for a moment and I slightly looked away taking a sharp breath of air.
He looked at me in confusion for a moment before his face lit up making me confused. "Hold on...arent you one of the strippers tonight?"
My eyes widened for a moment and I swallowed my laugh. I smiled awkwardly feeling my ass spill out the tight dress. "Yes, thats me..." I gritted out.
Suddenly I felt him snake his arm around my waist and he pulled me to him as he dragged my body to the door. My eyes widened confused but then I felt his once tight arm around me loosen, his body stumbled for a few seconds as I stared at his legs.
I rose my gaze slowly to his face seeing his mouth hanging open gasping for air as one side of his head was rapidly oozing out red thick liquid.
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My mouth went into a thin line as I sighed.
"If someone touches you. Tell me."
His voice repeated in my head as I slowly looked towards the dark alley seeing the shadowy figures which were supposed to be three but now I could see four.
Fuck me.
I bit my tongue as his figure walked out of the shadows. His jaw was clenched tightly as his now green eyes were turning dark in anger. I swallowed and I tried to put the most convincing smile on my lips.
"Wow, I didn't expect you to be here Vale-" I tried to say but suddenly he grabbed my hair slightly hard and he dragged me behind the building.
I looked behind me one last time seeing Victoria, Kai and Leo walk out the alley and inside the club staring my way. My cheeks turned red in embarrassment and I looked away.
My mind started wondering why there was no one out here if minutes ago it was filled with men walking in and out, the same going for the women.
I couldn't see anything as it was so dark. There were no light posts behind the building. I could only feel Valentino's fingers digging into my scalp making me wince repeatedly.
I was about to speak again annoyed but my back was pushed against the building wall so hard that I almost, keyword: almost doubled over with the loss of air.
His hand snaked around my throat keeping me pinned. My eyes narrowed trying to see him and I slightly could, only his figure in the dark.
"What the fuck did I tell you?" He growled out from heavy breaths. His voice sent a shiver down my spine making my legs slightly falter.
I stayed quiet, this is probably is bullet to my ego but I will admit. I was afraid but it was exciting at the same time and I blame my lower region for that.
He took a deep breath before letting out a chuckle that made my face drop and my stomach do cartwheels.
"You want to be like this?" He paused making sure I understood every word, "Alright, thats perfectly fine...Just know that ive had it with you." He said calmly.
My eyebrows rose in confusion but they went higher in realization when I felt a cold metal press again my upper thigh. The metal ran up and down and his hand went tighter on my throat not letting me breath that well.
My heart thumped in my chest with the fear that I couldn't see anything.
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"Sir, the coast is clear. We made sure no more guests would show up to tonight." A male voice faintly said. It was one of the vigilantes that made sure no unexpected guests would come to the club right now.
Valentino didn't even respond but what I did notice was how his hold on my throat slightly loosened and he stepped back a bit which gave me the good opportunity to try and get away.
I lifted my leg with enough space and lifted it in hopes of kicking what I thought were his ribs. I heard him grunt and I swung at the air as his hand on my throat went away. My fist made contact with him a few times but I committed the error of lifting my leg in hopes of kicking him again.
I felt his rough hand harshly catch my kick and he wrapped my leg around his waist making me stand up with one leg.
I out of breath panted, "Go fuck yourself Valentino fucking Romero with the rest of your shitty ass cre-"
"You never learn do you?" He whispered as he grabbed my other leg softly and he wrapped it around his waist pinning me to the wall again. He rubbed small circles on my thigh caressing it with his rough long fingers.
"Lets try again. What did I tell you, princess?" His other hand traced my jaw. It felt like the words were melting on my tongue. His touch was so harsh yet so nice making shockwaves all over my body.
His head bent down to the space between my neck and shoulder. His breath fanned it driving me insane.
"You said to tell you when someone...touched me, Valentino." He words tumbled out my mouth breathlessly.
His soft lips teased the skin as goosebumps rose on my skin but he suddenly bit down unexpectedly making me cry out and arch my back in pain.
His hand wrapped around my throat and he moved towards my ear, "Try again."
I didn't know what to say. Wasn't that what he told me?
"No, your wrong." I boldly said, I was confident with my answer. That was what he told me.
His hand tightened around my throat in a warning, "Oh really?"
"Cut the bullshit Valent-"
"How do you address me?" He cut me off harshly. It came out so strong that the founded confidence I had vanished. He pressed against me feeling his hard bulge under his black pants. It pressed against my clothed clit under the dress. My hands instantly went to his shoulders gripping him hardly as my chest rose up and down in euphoria.
My tongue felt dry all of a sudden. I was throbbing and I felt so hot. Sweat was gathering on my body and I felt so wobbly.
"I address you as Valen-"
"Your wrong again, Athena."
I went silent trying to think how else to address him but then I remembered what the vigilante said and my mouth almost dropped open.
Aint no fucking way.
"Sir?" The word felt weird on my tongue, uncommon.
I felt something wet lick all the way to my collarbone up to my jaw and my mouth opened as a breathless moan came out.
"Again."
"You told me to tell you if someone touched me, ."
I felt him hum satisfied against my neck. His fangs traced against my skin. I gripped his hair from the back of his hair as he kept working on my neck.
His lips traveled all over my neck not leaving a place untouched, he hungrily licked and sucked and with a every suck a kiss was place after it. It was like he was and .
I tugged on his hair feeling on the edge. The friction of his hard cock against me was too much. I couldnt quite get there, I needed more.
I moved my hips desperate to feel something more, something but he quickly put an end to it and he grabbed me hips and hold them still. A whine escaped my throat along with a plea.
"Please, I just need more." I panted out. He went back to my neck lowly laughing and my stomach turned as his laugh was mocking me.
"Your a little whore aren't you?" He whispered as he tugged on my ear lobe biting it softly.
Suddenly I felt something metal on my chest again but this time it came with a tear off clothing. My heart swelled in my chest in shock. He softly placed me down and my silk dress fell on my body completely ruined. The breeze hit my like a truck as he stepped back leaving me exposed.
"Then be one." He lastly said amused as he started walking away from the darkness leaving me almost completely exposed just with my red lingerie.
It took me a while to understand what just happened. I made out with him and now im in the night cold air in my lingerie.
My lips parted as I blinked.
Then before I know it im screaming in pure anger.
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