《A Promise To The Beloved (Completed)》A Question & a special note...
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1.Do you guys think my stories are less interesting because I write them in 3rd person's pov?
A. Yes
B. No
2. If I ever published the paperback version of my books which book would you like to read?
A. It began with a kiss
B. A Promise to the beloved
C. Both A & B
It's every writer's dream to become a published author so yeah I would like to hear your opinion 😅
It's not like I don't want to write in 1st person's pov but if I used 1st person's pov then my story will be limited to that character's assumption of situations while I want my readers to know what else is going behind the scenes and what and why the character is acting or doing what he's doing.
Let me know (in the inline comment here) if you have a suggestion for me regarding anything.
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