《The Upgrade System》20th Step
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After breaking through to 100% (which is a sub stage) I could now handle 11th step and could get up with no problem.
I stood up on the 11th step and moved towards the 12th step.
I stepped on the 12th step and felt the 1000kg increase, this time I fell on my knees but could move very slowly.
I crawled towards the 13th step and tried to get on it.
My hands went on the 13th step and I felt that my arms became heavier by another 1000kg.
Now I couldn't move my hands at all and even though I couldn't move my hands I tried to pull myself up.
To get a better understanding of the scene
Imagine a 300-pound guy trying to do a pull up.
Trying to move up to the next I did some random movement with my body that looked very retarded to a normal person. This went on for a long time, without no rest I tried to pull myself up to the next step.
I followed the same movements that I did on the 11th step I climbed to the next step with a couple of small break throughs but I finally did break through the second stage of strength refinement.
Reaching the 13 step the cycle started again with me doing retarded movements to get to next floor.
i stopped thinking about anything and started to just try to glide to the next floor.
"fourteen step,.. fifteen step,.. sixteen step, seventeen step, eighteen steps, nineteen step... tween."
As i put my hand on the 20 step i felt my radius and ulna bones break the moment i put them on the step, without giving me any time the rest of my bones in my upper and lower body followed their lead and started to break.
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I couldn't stand the pain anymore and passed out, without even knowing what caused this to happen.
sometime later
Not knowing what happened to me I woke up to see the place that I was transferred to was gone and I was back in the last room of the tomb.
i looked inside the coffin and tried to pick the arm ring and the spatial ring on his right hand.
i stretched my hands slowly as i didn't want to be transported to that place again, my hand touched ring and the moment it did i closed my eyess waiting for any unexpected thing to happen.
But when i touched nothing happened, i guessed that i passed his test, that's why his not doing anything.
without a care in the world i picked the arm ring with the spatial ring and started to go back outside.
i didn't check the what was inside the spatial ring as i wanted to get out of here as fast as i could get out.
i ran towards the exit at fast as i could, as i was running i noticed that my legs gave more power and speed, at least 5 times more than normal.
I check my dantain to see that now it was 995%/5000%, i was wordless as i saw the improvement guess that suddenly feeling my body weigh more than 180000Kg did had some benefits.
Without noticing anything around me I crashed to the wall as I was distracted to much because of my break through.
The crush that I just went through didn't do nothing to me but what surprised the hell out of me was that now I was 2 meters deep in the wall of this tunnel. I pushed myself out the wall with my finger and landed on the outside of the hole I just made.
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After getting out of the hole, I bent down my knees and pushed myself up towards the tunnel that lead towards the exit. As I jumped up I could see everything that I was passing while I was going up with a pretty fast speed. I was going so fast that I didn't needed that much time before I reached the tree that I fell from and nearly hit my head on it inside but before that could happen I stopped my motion by kicking the wall on my right and jumped out of the tree when I reached the hole leading outside the tree and the tomb.
Not waiting for anything I ran back towards my house and reached in 2 minutes, I got in the house and before I could say hello to lucy, I saw that she seemed worried, so I asked her "why are you looking worried?", she jumped towards me and hugged me while crying. I asked her "why are you crying?", she answered "I thought you had died". I looked at her and asked, "why would you think that?".
"Well you were gone for a week and I thought you were dead", I was taken back a bit by hearing that I was gone for 1 week, I knew that I at least wasted 1 day outside hunting before going in the tomb. I concluded that while I was climbing the stairs my mind was only thinking about training and lost track of time without me even noticing.
I told her what happened and said sorry to her while doing a passionate kiss. Later I told her that I needed to give in the mission and so I picked every bag that had claws of the beasts that I killed and started put them in a bigger bag and putted that in my spatial ring and started to walk towards the city. I reached the wooden wall again but this time I wasn't stopped as the person remembered that I had a guild card, I entered the city and without delaying anytime I walked towards the guild. I reached the guild and saw the girl that put the mission under my name, I looked at her and started walking towards her with the huge bag on my bag that I had taken out before I reached the guild.
I looked at her and gave my guild card and said, "I have finished my mission", she looked at my bag and signalled for some people to come pick it, they came and took the bag from me. They slowly pulled the bag towards inside of the of the guild where they could count it.
10 minutes later they came back with 2 small bags filled with gold and gave it to me with my guild card, I took everything that I was meant and ran towards my house as I had decided to leave this place and go to the capital of this empire. When I suddenly ran from the place the people were surprised they couldn't even see me moving before I was gone.
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