Thank you to those of you reading this book and providing feedback. I think it was too ambitious for me to work on two books while also having a career (Writing for feedback doesn't pay the bills). So, the reality is that I can either write two novels with low quality and high quantity or I can focus on one. Readers will get a better writing quality and I'll naturally get more feedback. With that being said, my other novel, The Immortal Mortal seems to be enjoyed more by the readers and I personally enjoy writing it more. I think at some point I'll completely re-write this as I like the plotline I developed but for now I'm putting this novel on hiatus so I can focus on my job, The Immortal Mortal, and moving apartments in a month. I appologize to anyone who didn't want this on hiatus and assure you that the other novel will remain being written until it's completed. Things are just to hectic on my end to write two novels at once.