《Erroneous Quest》Chapter One= Start (God god, Victim thomas); set; Table = true;
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After knocking on the oak door, it creeks open to a messy room with various books, toys and food littered on the seemingly dirty brown carpet. Near the very edge of the bed, two feet are slightly visible.
“Is this …. heaven...?” As Thomas spoke loudly to the feet.
As quick as lightning those feet disappear then quickly out of thin air a boy sized entity appeared in front of Thomas. Greatly shocking Thomas as that figure was as normal as it can be but the mainly reason by the panic was that it lacked a face well more like it had a burry face. “Errh no this is my room…Who are you and why are you able to enter here?”
*Aeee* As Thomas screech and his face went as white as a ghost by unable to process what he is seeing in front of him. Thomas turned around to ran back out of the door, only to see that the door is now gone.
“Wait wait don’t run. Oh, it seems you’re just a wandering spirit you can’t perceive my existence. Sorry but wait a second,” with a wave of the boy’s hand some white particles floated from his palm toward Thomas head. gave Thomas an ability, Astral Mind.
Ability AcquiredAstral MindAllows the user to see past any barriers, protection and wards
Extra: No restrictions to any being.
Thomas entire body squirmed around like he got struck by lightning. After a few moments pass, Thomas regain his composure. “What did you do to me? “As the blurred face boy came into to focus to a freckled face boy.” Oh now I can see you. So how did I get here, the last thing I saw was a truck running over me. Did I die?” Starting at the boy waiting for an answer.
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After a long period of silence, the boy said,” Ah yes, it was my fault, I was playing a new game my father gave me. It’s called, Truck-kun Simulator, so I was playing on a new world I finally unlocked. It was called planet earth, which I found it fun as I ran over humanoid beings. Oh boy I did rack up the points which gave me a new vehicle, semi-truck. So after I ran over the last being who didn’t even move out the way, I received a hidden achievement called Final Destination. And this is how you met me.” As he is smiling with glee at Thomas, who’s face is turning bright red from the irresponsible of that boy’s actions.
“So can’t you just take me back to Earth. Please.” As Thomas pleaded with the boy. “Oh I can’t…well I can but earth is gone by now.”
Thomas with a puzzled face asked,” What do you mean by that and how is it gone?” The boy quickly responded, “Well there is a time difference from where you live and here. One minute of time here is about one billion years on your earth. The only thing I can do is send you to another world, since I was the one who ended your life I’ll give you a bonus which would make your life much better.”
Thomas is shocked that everyone he knew was long dead, heck maybe even the planet is gone as well. “So ok what type of world that you are going to send me to? Also what kind of bonus can I pick?”
“Not to be mad or anything am kind of lazy to explain to you about how everything works,” as he passes me a book. “The contents all that you need to know. Also you can obtain any power besides the power of god.”
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Looking at the god, Thomas then looked at the book as it lands in his hand only to drop on the ground with a hard thump. “You call this a book?”
Around a month passed, Thomas is diligently studying the massive book or encyclopedia. “Ahh…that book was crazy, so this is the world that I am going to… huh.” and give me a second to tell you my wish.”
World of VeritasThe Spring of LifeThe world contains fantasy creatures, with science and magic.
The world is governed by a system that is similar to a famous JRPG ” Dragon Quest”.
Placing his hand to his chin, Thomas proceed to tell the boy god, “For my bonus ability, I want the ability I want is to access the state of anything in the world. Well to simplify it I want the power to see hidden rules of the world and how they affect the entities of that world.”
The boy god was thinking as well trying to formulate a skill with those requirements. “Here is the next best ability I can muster up at this time. So I bestow to you, Thomas, Peerless Insight with this skill you can see all the potential of entities of the next world."
Ability AcquiredPeerless Insight IThis allows the user to see all the hidden potential of any object, entity or system.
Displays the information with detailed structure.
This allows the user to see all the hidden potential of any object, entity or system. Displays the information with detailed structure.
Thomas stared at the godly boy, then to trigger his ability
ACTIVEPeerless Insight
freckled face boyRaceEchoranClassGodJobSonHP2000/2000ERRORERRORStatsStrNULLWisNULLIntNULLStaNULLWillNULLDexNULLNotesTraits: Spoiled, Lazy, NEET15 years old (7.884e+12 Earth years)He is as dumb as he is lazy!!!
Ability Rank UpPeerless Insight I >>> IIIAdditional: Allows the user to store the information to recall later.
‘Huh…is this skill rude or what. What is a Echoran and why he has an Earth name’ As Thomas was about to open his mouth, he was completely cut off mid thought.
In a rush, the god told Thomas this, “Oh Thomas you have to hurry up my Father is coming home, he doesn’t like visitors so what race you want to be? Hurry up man.”
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