《Erroneous Quest》Chapter Nine.Two //Tutorial.bat
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Well I felt like writing more so I wrote the next part in like 30 minutes or so. Early short chapter. I Hope you like it.
In the space none can be found, Harris or Rain, looking further in the lodge house in the one bed rests, Harris under blue and green polka dot comforter. Towards the roof a small ball is slowly rounding back and forth, making weird sounds. Tossing a pillow at that object, “I thought you can’t sleep or get tired, fool”, said by Harris who is seemingly gaining a human persona. That pillow hit Rain with such force but did nothing as that previously dark outline, out stretched itself to swat that pillow down. “What the hell was that?” as Harris said in a shocked manner.
“Sir, would you kindly not attack Rain right now he is taking a forced nap. So I can help him understand what you told him. Please?” as a dark mist said in a kind but yet forceful manner. Unable to identify, who was talking to him, Harris spoke, “Are you Rain’s System[i]?” “Ah, no… well… I was until I finished my upgrade into a higher form. I guess you can say I became like you. A being able to indecently run on its own without orders from others.” As the mist traveled from Rain’s sphere body in above Harris. “Well my new name is AlterEgo or A.E for short. Nice to meet you Sir.”
Harris looking at A.E, just to grin a bit as he was thinking now at least Rain has a reliable companion.
5:00 time remaining
“Oi, Rain, wake up you only have five hours remaining until you reach your destination. Hey WAKE UP FOOOL.” Shouted by Harris at the dumb floating balloon called Rain.” Psst… Psst… Go away I dreaming of a nice party and I was playing that new game Overw*tch and I just landed a job in the new Power Rangers Movie. Don’t mess up my vibe….” Said by the snoozing Rain as he rolls away from Harris.
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Just as Harris summoned a rock to throw at Rain, A.E formed a hand waving “No No NO” at Harris. “Oh come on, A.E, at least wake up Rain. I still need to give him some more info and my last order.” Pleading with misty hand. Then the mist went back into Rain to force him up. “What the hell man. Harris what the big deal, I had like three days remaining, you didn’t need to wake me”, as Rain opens his non existing eyes to see Four hours and Fifteen Minutes remaining. Those same eyes bulged out in shock, “How come you didn’t wake me up.” Harris smacks his hands to his face, in this couple of days he grown tired and actually got grey hairs.
Floating down towards the ground and following Harris outside the log house.
“So the last information I will tell you is about your mission. You have to send me one hundred divine points before a celestial year or one hundred normal years. Or you would die a horrible death.”
After a quick pause, “Wait what… You never told me that I would die if I fail. That not fair…” Harris quickly cutting off Rain, “Ha ha ha… It’s a joke, you should look so glum Rain, It’s not death a waiting you more like you would be stripped of you powers and live a normal life. Not so bad right but then again, you would have no powers or skills, you’ll just be a simple villager.”
Behind Rain a dark mist is forming in a shape of massive head as it starts to pick up a nearby boulder. Harris is waving his hands for it to stop.
“What are you doing, Harris? Jazz hands…”
The boulder returns back to the ground then Harris proceeds to say, “Oh yes you don’t know this…” the hand are waving to stop “Well nothing. Let me finish with what I was saying every now and again you will receive notifications or in your terms quests from me about trending events that you may or may not want to complete. Which would get you my precious DP.”
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As Rain is contemplating about his choices and duties, he is wasting time rolling around the space.
5 minutes Remaining
“Oh, one thing, when you reappear everyone beside me will forget you. The other systems besides myself will not give you any favors. Oh and lastly…” as Harris paused then had a grin, “ah nothing.” As he is thinking of what Rain would land face first in when he returns.
A hole appears in the ground, this is the exit for Rain, just before he leaves, “Harris, thanks for everything”, as he jumps in the hole. Harris starts to laugh shaking the entire space and loudly shouting, “Watch out for that Poop… Ha… Ha… Ha”.
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