《Witch's Psyche》Information on part 2: Hiding from the cold under stars of a long forgotten past.
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UPDATE: 6/12/22: So, I understand this series was never that great. It wasn't what I'd determine as 'well-written' even in the midst of the climax, although some things about it really impress me. That doesn't really matter, though, as I doubt this series would ever be capable of really making it on a web-novel site like this.
Though, to be honest, I wonder if it might work as a full-on book.
But enough of that -onto the update.
Will I finish this? Yes, I think so, but no, not in the near future. The second part is actually really hilarious and has so much potential to explore the characters far beyond what the first part managed, if only because I am far better of a writer than I was, though, not only because of that, as most of it was written directly after the write-a-thon. But I won't hype up something neither of us can have anymore. There are other stories of mine that deserve to be written more than this one, and...well, that's just that. Again, I will finish this someday, but I think we both know what someday means.
Not anytime soon.
I'm happy to have completed a full-length part of a story, and I think I ended Witch's Psychi off well enough for what it was. Someday, I will revise the first part(and rewrite some of it) and then begin production on part 2, but not now.
Currently, I have written up to chapter 34.
What to expect:
Basically, everything will be better.
Chapters will now be about 2.75k words on average.
There will be both more magic and more drama-y stuff, don't expect a hard focus on just one.
Better pacing(I'm trying to refine that)
I won't release anything for quite a while, but nonetheless, I'm trying to get a chapter done each day from now on. (Sorta, I'll obviously be a little slower than that)
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About 30 chapters, probably a little less.
More consistently good writing.
Taylor and obviously, Hailey, have magic. Though, this part takes place over a few months, so they won't have tons f time to get good.
More exploration of spirits and their role in the universe.
The introduction to Lulikan, the Joul family's father, side stories to explore characters' lives, and some other characters.
A greater focus on Kait and her character development.
A far more planned plot.
Exploration of Kait's past.
Dangerous antagonists
Hailey and Logica keep talking to each other.
A somewhat more grandiose plot.
-I forgot I was supposed to update this. Anyhow, I've begun production once more, and I think I'm making decent progress. Maybe the second part will be out for write-a-thon?
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