《The Angel System: Outer Heaven》Chapter 9: The Evangelion System Pt. 5
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“Ufff” Neftali said shaking off the dust and rubble from his mane.
“Thats payback for earlier,” Lucius said smuggly.
“Not bad, Its been a while since I’ve been pushed this far, it seems now I am unable to use my claws,” Neftali said examining his frozen in gold apendages.
“My next target is those two heads of yours!” Lucius said “Judgement cut!” He yelled aiming the beam of his blade at Neftali 's heads.
“Angel Wings!” Neftali cried. He shielded himself with a ray of light surrounding his wings. “Your not the only one with defensive spells boy!” Neftali laughed.
“What? He’s adapting to my attacks? I’ll have to try something different, the only other attacks I have are Holy Arrow and Hammer of Light, both of which cost 50 souls. It will take a while to get that much!”
“Hehe are you going to give up?” Neftali laughed. His stange lion head bobbed on the back of his tail.
“I bet I can get 50 souls if I land a blow on the real Neftali's head! Now all I need to do is trick him, hopefully this system world to my advantage.” Lucius thought
“Alright Neftali ! Lets go!” Lucius said flying at him again.
With No claws to swipe at him Neftali surrounded himself in an orange aura.
“This is bad! Got to fall back!” Lucius cried
“Flame Plillar!” Neftali cried.
The entirety of his body was encased in flame, as a huge pillar of fire erupted from his skin.
Dodging out of the way, Lucius flew above Neftali ready to descend.
“Judgement Cut!” He cried slicing at Nefertum with a ray of light.
“Angel Wings!” Neftali said.
“Nows my chance!” Lucius said, flying high above Neftali .
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Dropping down onto Neftali, Lucius descended onto Neftali's third head ready to land a blow.
“Nice strategy! My main body is stuck in the Angel wing defense, leaving my main head exposed! But this head can also. do..." Neftali began
“Breath of Lions!” The third head yelled throwing out a gust of air.
Wham!
Lucius became trapped in a gust of wind, defensless.
“Now theres no way you can possibly,” Neftali said
“He” Lucian said grinning.
“Why is he grinning and where is his swo-"
Slice!
Lucius’s sword went straight through Neftali's head.
50/100 Souls
“O Holy light from above, purge this soul with your mighty judgement! Hammer of Light”
The sky’s above opened up as a huge ray of light began to focus in on Neftali. As the light intensified, a huge ray crashed down from the heavens penetrating Neftali's wings, and freezing his body into place.
“Alright time for another Giant throw!”
Lucius once again picked Neftali up slamming him into the collesuem.
And Now I have time for another follow up attack! Lucius said.
“Judgement cut!”
“Lucius sliced Neftali across his two lion heads.
“And after this freeze!” Lucius said. “I’ll use this time to strike your head once more!”
Lucius struck the lions head once again netting him another 50 souls.
100 Souls used, the Order form Pricipality has been acheived
"This power" Lucius said, "Its unreal"
His body began to transform beaming with light. His wings grew twice their size spanning out further as a golden crown appeared over his head. His blade order, completely transformed into a scepter, with no signs of the redish hint of chaos.
“Give up, I’ve completely subdued your body, The only thing left you can move is your tail with your head on it! Submit!”
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“You have done well but this is no victory” Neftali said. “It’s not over until every last part of me has been defeated!”
Neftali began to charge a great mass of energy around his third head.
The Scriptures of Revelation
And so the great Sphinx created a fiery storm of flame nearly engulfing the world in its blaze, but knowing the coming storm would be harsh, the hero purged his weapon calling forth the great Holy arrow.
“This must be the Evangelon system, so what I need to do now is call forth the holy arrow!”
“Embers of flame, engulf the earth in a neverending scorch, let the pyre of my will serve as the vessel for your path of carnage.” Neftali said
“Oh great light come forth, purge this world of darkness and peirce through the heavens” Lucius siad
“Holy Lance!” “Hellfire!” They said against one another
Letting out a huge cone of fire, Neftali released a huge hellfire that rushed towards Lucius.
Matching the flames with light, Lucius’s scepture turned into a holy bow that shot a laser arrow, matching the fires of Hell Neftali had released.
The Scriptures of Revelation As the two energies light and fire danced, our hero cried with Joy, as his light overcame flame purging the great sphinx once and forall.
“YEHHH!” Lucius cried as Neftali’s entire body begame frozen.
“You have done well chosen” Neftali said. “It is now time you progressed to the next floor.”
“It was an honor to battle you” Lucius said. "Hopefull the other floors are easier than this one."
“Every Ten floors there is a Guardian, I am the guard for the 70th floor, you won’t see another floor like this until the 80th” Neftali said.
“I see, what is he like? Is he even stronger than even you?” Lucius asked.
“He is an evil, a great evil that has been trapped here for punishment. When you fight him do not hold back, or even your evangelian system will fail.”
“Neftali, thank you for this “ Lucius said bowing
“Good job chosen, this is the first time I have been defeated in a one on one combat, you are a man worthy of that system.”
“What do you mean? Do challengers usually come in pairs?” Lucius asked.
"It usually takes a team of 5 angels to defeat me.” Neftali said “The only other to defeat me in hand to hand was the creator, and he weilded that same Codex as you do now.
“You mean Adam, the creator of Outer Heaven?” Lucius asked.
“No, I mean the creator of the realms, he has erased his name from all of our books, only your book the book of Revelations has the key to his whereabouts."
"I see," Lucius said
"So even this place has a creator?"
"Farewell Neftali" Lucius said.
"Goodbye chosen" He answered
“Lucas, Evelyn” Lucius thought “I’m one step closer to finding you!”
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