《Eternal lord》A slap
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BOOM
a resounding explosion occured and the sound it make traveled into every corner of the world. After the explosion occured a large black cloud that spanned over million upon million of mile appeared, inside the black cloud there was a man and a woman but their face was blurred and nobody can see their face clearly, the man body was made out of a golden lightning and the woman body was made from silver lightning.
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Under the center of the black cloud was a man with six arm growing on his back he looked to be around 30 years old but all of his hair was already and on his face hung a malevolent smile, this man was one of the ancestor of the asura divine valley his name was kong min and right now he was undergoing tribulation for immortal primordial realm. Kong min looked toward the swirling black cloud and the pair of man and woman then he laughed.
"Haha haha haha.... if l can succed this tribulation the world will be mine..... haha haha..."
Not long after he laughed the pair of man and woman inside the black cloud become a sthreak of golden and silver lightning, the tribulation officially started.
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81 days later the tribulation stopped and the result was not known to anybody, but 11 days later the asura divine valley issued a war declaration to every race and power in the world. Around 3000 years later the asura divine valley conquered more than 70% of the world and all the other race and power that have been defeated or those that was not yet attacked created an alliance and concentrated all of their power in the ETERNAL sect as the last defend wall and base for counterattack.
Inside a spacious hall in the ETERNAL sect many race in a heated discussion about wheter to counterattack or defend again the asura divine valley but before they can reach the conclusion a big explosion occured. The many race that was before in discussion vanished from the hall and appeared outside.
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BOOM
CRACK CRACK
The protection formation of the ETERNAL sect was cracked and was on the verge of being destroyed, outside the protection formation kong min stood proudly and looked toward the protection formation coldly and behind him was a large army amounted to a few trillion and infront of the army was a few billion of people from many race the people ranged from young to old and from male to female and all of them was shackled and all of them was injured and the lightest kind of injury was a crippled limb.
When the people inside the protection formation saw the shackled people all of their face become pale some of them even on the verge of tear yet they did nothing and merely looked looked their patriarchs and sect leaders waiting for order. The bunch of patriarchs and sect leaders looked at each other and they can see the determination each other hold, when they readied themself to give an order to attack a blurry figure suddenly appeared and waved his sleeve.
BOOM
all the patriarch and sect leader was thrown including some few shadow, all of them was thrown and coughed a few mouthfull of blood. The patriarchs and sect leaders looked toward the shadow that followed them and become aghast when they found out that the shadow was their ancestor and the ancestor body was badly mangled, then they looked toward their attacker and become even more aghast because the one who attacked them was kong min.
Kong min looked toward the ancestors that have defended his sneak attack and snorted, then he flicked his sleeve again and a tremendous power gushed out toward the bunch of patriarch and sect leader also the incapacitated ancestors suddenly a blinding red light appeared and stopped the attack and from the red light appeared a puppy. Kong min looked toward the puppy that stopped his attackand laughed.
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"Hahahaha... eternal dog oh eternal dog you know what you did was futile, if it was in the past maybe we are a match but now hmph you are merely a normal dog in front of my eye"
"I know it was futile but atleast l can give you a few bite before l died hahahaha"
"Hmph just what you expect from a street mutt, DIEEEEE"
Kong min then punched the eternal dog with all of his power but suddenly something that he never expected happened a man around twenty with a normal feature than can be more normal appeared and dissipated his attack with a wave of his sleeve, after the attack was dissipated the young man was gone and appeared in front of kong min.
PAKKKKK
he slapped kong min and kong min body was thrown so far that his body can't be seen anymore, all the people was dumbfounded by this turn of event and looked toward the young man only to become even more shocked because they can't feel anything he was just like a mortal and if not for the fact that they saw for themselve how strong he was they will think he was a mere mortal. The young man turned his body and looked toward the eternal dog before he sighed and vanished.
"You're still to weak breakthrought the hevenly immortal then l will come back and bring you to visit the forbidden ground and the whole universe"
His voice sounded from the void, the eternal dog who was on the verge of tear previously become energetic again.
"Yes father"
Then the eternal dog vanished and entered a sealed cultivation, after he vanish all the people was still dumbfounded and don't know what to do.
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Outside the world in the stary sky the young man appeared and in front of him was kong min with his face disfigured. The young man looked toward kong and asked him a question.
"Do you know what you did wrong?"
"I l l don don't know"
Kong min answered and watched the young man facial expression, but the young man was still calm and tranquil. The young man looked toward kong min and answered.
"Hah, kong min oh kong min you shouldn't have attacked yong yong"
"Who who who is yong yong"
"The eternal dog"
"WHATTTT"
kong min was shocked and knew he was in a deep shit.
"Bu bu but wha why?"
"I was the one who grow him and teach him, so what do you think"
"Yo yo you youare the rumoured eterna-"
Before he was done talking his body was pulverished and his soul was destroyed. The young man looked at the place where kong min stood and shaked his head.
"A taboo"
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