《Shadow’s World》30. elemental training part 3
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Eddy fell she was only able to hover for a few seconds. She jumps up for joy and ran back up on top of the roof. “did you guys see what I did I was able to hover for a few moments. Yes, that was amazing.” She runs up and gives me a hug then try to hug Erica. Which wasn’t a good idea Erica doesn’t do that touchy feeling stuff? While Eddy was trying to hug Erica, Erica summons wind and throws her off the roof once again. “oh, yeah you guys Erica doesn’t do happy emotions unless she is torturing a person. So, no touching be warned, looks like Eddy is the first person on our team that found her element. This is good let's see how long it is going to take the rest of you to learn as well.” Perry scoffs at my words. “She didn’t do anything special. Michael, Roland, Sasuke, and I all can control wind and I bet we will be able to do what she did even better watch. I thought you didn’t want to use our elements but now I know we can your test doesn’t seem so hard. Guys lets show him that we are able to hover like she did with ease.” “I wouldn’t do that if I were you. Eddy couldn't control wind until today and good jo for not using your powers because they are going to backfire hard. Learning how to summon them and using them in a fight is easy. Learning how to become one with your element is different. I have felt you guys use your powers and they are incomplete. You guys are not one with the elements and trying to use the elements in a nature that isn’t correct will backfire or you will be way weaker than what you should be. Michael’s fire should have burn hotter but because he is forcing the issue and not being one with fire it came out super weak. Hey, if you do not believe me jump and try to hover like eddy and see what will happen.” Perry climb to the edge of the roof and look at the other people he called up. “guy lets show this guy what we made off who is with me?” The people he was talking to put their heads down and didn’t move from their spot.
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Perry looks at them with disgust and says, “Cowards!” He leaps off of the building and everyone besides Erica and I rush to the side of the building to see what would happen. Perry flew high in the sky. “See I told you guys that this is no Problem.” My team starts cheering his success besides three people Erica, I and the last one is eddy. I could sense it, the negative feedback is going to be hard on him. “Erica,” I said in a hiss. She looks up a perry and says “He could die for all I care. You warned him and he must feel the power rejecting the use of his powers. Everyone looks at Erica with horror.” Erica” This time I said in a low voice “I cannot have my team dying on me please help. You do not have to save all of him. Let his arm break, that should be good enough for you right.” “You are a nice person Alex I would want both his arm and leg but for my little brother I would only take his arm.” A water ball was formed and it shot towards Perry. Perry with a surprised look on his face sees the water coming towards him and tries to dodge. I summon a fire wipe and grabs his leg, so he couldn’t escape. The water covers his entire body but his arm. Erica’s water ball stop Perry from using his wind powers and was able to direct the feedback into the water so it couldn’t cause any harm to his body, but his arm on the other hand. It starts to twist in an unnatural way. Not only that but everyone could hear the bones in his body break. Some of my team start to turn around and cover their ears. I roar “No this is what happens when you do not listen. Why don’t you think more of us don’t know how to fly but it is easy enough for someone moron to take into the skies? People refuse to learn the elements they think they can control them instead of being one with them. This is what happens when you try to control something you do not understand. What Eddy did was learn how to be one with the wind what perry have done is trying to control the wind. Well think of the elements as something living. Perry tries to take a monster and use a collar thinking that the monster is now under his control. Well, you see what happens when you do something like that.” We watch as Perry arm twist and turn until the feedback was finish.
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I went to the water ball and took Perry’s body. I took his broken arm and use it to drag Perry into the building. Before I left “Erica, watch over them and have them complete their training why I deal with this issue.” I drag Perry’s body through the building until we got into the nurse’s office. I had plenty of weird looks while walking through the halls. I throw Perry onto one of the beds. He fell unconscious while his arm was breaking into 100 different ways. The nurse went to Perry and looked at his arm. She didn’t say a word and starts working on fixing his arm. I sat and watch her. It took her all day long to work on his arm. It was dinner time and I was sitting here watching a nurse fix one of my teammate's arm. The nurse told me that he will make a full recovery and that Perry is asleep right now and will release him next week. Yeah, next week we will see about that.
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