《Shadow’s World》mary sue
Advertisement
Mary Sue is a dirty word when discussing a character in mostly movies. Noone really cares about Mary Sues in other mediums. Which is fine, a movie is a different medium the book or video game. But no one can tell me a good definition of a Mary Sue and call all characters that are Mary Sues, Mary Sues. People have a real hard bias for Mary Sues for people they don’t like and don’t consider other characters that would fit their definition would be put in the same place. I also have another problem with Mary Sues, and that is is how people easy kick out characters for being Mary Sues. What do I mean by this? I mean, I don’t think a character losing or a character training means they aren’t a Mary Sue. The reason I am talking about this because it seems like a bad way to describe why a character/movie is bad. Saying a character is a Mary Sue means nothing to me, and it shouldn’t mean anything to anyone. From what I see, people only call characters a Mary Sue if they are women and they have no charisma. I know people would point out that these characters are strong, but then you look at other characters that are just as strong but have charisma and no one says anything about them. Look at Rey, a powerful female character with that personality is as stale as bread. Compare to James Bond. A powerful male character oozing with charisma. Now, I’m not saying you can’t hate boring character, my problem is that one is a Mary Sue, and the other isn’t. Even though James Bond is way more of a Mary Sue than Rey is. If we are just talking about powerful people. Now, I’m not saying Rey isn’t a Mary Sue. I think it is unfair of saying Rey is bad because she is a Mary Sue. Most action, sci-fi, and fantasy characters are Mary Sues. The reason being you need an over power character to live through these types of movies and people love over power characters. People love Mary Sue type characters when handle right. Wait before we go any further I will define what a Mary Sue is to me. You might not like the definition, but it is ok. A Mary Sue is a powerful character in which their weakness or strenght cause them to lose something they want, also it must be a personal weakness. What do I mean by this? I mean that a strong character must lose because of a personality trait, be it good or bad. Also, it can’t be a trait in which a hero should have. Like wanting to protect his friends. Example Luke losing to Vader because he wasn’t ready and wanting to save Han and Leia doesn’t kick him out of the Mary Sue category. I think that is just an easy way out and is boring. Writing Mary Sue characters in an action, sci-fi, and fantasy story is ok. No one wants to see a regular human fighting monsters and other humans with human limits. I know people cry about a random woman fighting a grown man and winning in movies calling her a Mary Sue but ignores when a guy beats 50 people in hand to hand combat one after the other. John McClane is a Mary Sue. He is a detective fighting super criminals all by himself. Compare him to a normal detective or heck, even a special forces marine. No way does a single train person can do what John McClane does in any of the Die Hard movies. But do we really care that he is an invincible super human? No, that makes him great. A Mary Sue by themselves isn’t good or bad. It how the character is written. To prove my point, the oldest story we know of is about a Mary Sue. The epic of Gilgamesh. It is about a half god doing crap. The start of the story is just about him doing anything he wants and doing anything he wants to people. The gods wanted to put limits on him, so they made him a friend. Yeah, I will not talk about the entire story here, but you get the basic idea. Let’s keep going the two most successful comic books is about two giant Mary Sues, Batman and Superman. Do I really need to explain why they are Mary Sues. Ok, let me do it just because. Batman with no superpowers can go up against freaks of nature. The Justice League are basically gods. Wait, no, they are gods. Well, they should be. Flash is so fast he can out run light, time, and death. Wonder women is part of the old gods. Aquaman is stupid powerful, and then you have superman. hahaha. Let’s not talk about that dude. But batman with prep time can beat them all. But he isn’t a Mary Sue. Superman is one of the few people that can beat Darkseid, and Darkseid is a god. Also, I don’t care about Batman’s training. Training doesn’t give you the ability to beat someone who can punch a god in the face and walk away knowing that the god will not get up. Yet, people give them a pass. I really don’t care about Mary Sues, and neither should you.
Advertisement
Advertisement
- In Serial21 Chapters
Artificial Selection: A Near Future Thought Experiment
Michael Livingstone is a literal intellectual prodigy born at an unfortunate time when artificial intelligence has replaced the human workforce, with the only exceptions of art, humanities, and AI development industries. Trust is deteriorating in society with the increasing frequencies of assaults, deception, and terrorism by and against the globalized national government. Michael always relies on his intellectual talent with space and perception along with some of his dauntless risk-taking spirit to escape danger in this society. However, Michael soon finds out that this situation involves way more players, variables, and conflicts of interests than he could calculate. This situation is so much more complex than a protest against unemployment, in fact it is a life-and-death matter -- the survival of humanity's civilization.
8 119 - In Serial13 Chapters
Taverns edge - A mercenary's guide to Ley Line traveling
The taverns edge is a fiction that centers around a pair of unusual friends. A mercenary that happens to be a princess of fae, but prefers to stay in a well-known établissement instead of staying in the Sidhe. Moira. Being half a dragon doesn't really help getting along with snobbish elitists at her mother's court. Like all sidhe she likes to strike a good deal... Which has led into many a disaster... Though she always tends to get by, especially when she gets home to the Tavern on the edge. The mentioned établissement is run by the formidable Barkeeper and jack of all trades Tora, who happens to have a very interesting past. Which involves more than one sinister secret... Now add to the mix a totally clueless elven girl - a mortal, not a fae- on the run. Lunara. She has unknowingly struck a deal with the devil - quite literally. Now unable to handle the consequences on her own she enters the tavern on the edge. An epicenter for magic and the only place where she might find help. She talks Moira into helping her out. A race against time begins as the deal's symbols appear on Lunara's skin. The journey leads to the dwarven empire, the sidhe and wherever the crossing leylines under the tavern may lead. This fiction belongs to the same universe as Ancient Blood. English is not my native language, so please don't be harsh. This story is an adaption of an idea, that we, a friend of mine and me, have developed over a few months while taking a break from learning. Some parts were written by Emberspark. Thank you for allowing me to work with your ideas and letting me publish this as a whole. Updates... I will try to frequently update both of my fictions... Well in case you are interested I post it on Scribble hub, too. I really don't steal from myself 😂
8 178 - In Serial13 Chapters
EvE oF EvOlVe
The story is about mythical beasts and the summoners(mages) who uses various types of grimnoir and warriors.
8 191 - In Serial11 Chapters
No Longer Human
It was the year 2020, a year which technonogy flourished and became the year of technological revolution . Humans, with the power of technology, tried to play god and an era of human experimentation was born. Our protagonist is a child that is sold to a human experimentation facility. For years he suffered in the facility, slowly having his body altered to become a killing machine. One day, the facility experienced a sudden blackout and was thrown into frenzy. Taking advantage of the chaos he stole a mysterious crystal from the facility and escaped. He was tracked down by the government and is now on the run. Eventually he was cornered and decided to take his life along with the crystal. Causing the facility to suffer huge losses of data. When he wakes up, he found out that the was reincarnated and given a second chance in life, even though it might be a little different than he expected.... This is my first novel so it might be rather rough. I am just an amatuer writer Critism is accepted wholeheartedly as i can use your remarks to improve my writing
8 117 - In Serial13 Chapters
Hidden
The girl was not the world's best fighter, nor the world's best killer. She was however the world's best assassin, due to her unthreatening atmosphere that allowed her to draw close to anyone without suspicion she had a 100% hit rate. One day the girl and her classmates were summoned to another world, what will happen when the world's best assassin hides in plain sight.
8 119 - In Serial9 Chapters
Levi's Sick Day
Who knew that some slightly undercooked meat could make Corporal Levi so miserable.
8 123

