《Shadow- the solo sword master》some slight changes to some stuff (will be updated when required)
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Since i write as i go eventually without planning eventually some stuff will catch my eye and make things harder for me or wont make sense so in that case this is what the thread is for minor changes.
The only change right now is the currency system
The comment of how one gold equals 100 dollars is no longer valid, as when i think about it, things become messy due to buying power and different nations etc. Since every race is using this currency there should be no fluctuation in the overall price for an item (talking about different currencies only not about the location time etc nothing about the situation at the moment but rather the long run).. There fore the comment is no longer valid 1 GOLD DOES NOT EQUAL 100 DOLLARS.
The term average races, weaker, stronger would be changed as their ranking from the administrators system would be revealed they would be referred to their overall ranking such as a v- race or a g +
However i would give some kind of indication 10 copper is enough to buy the most basic form of nourishment for 1 day for the weaker races. (humans, plants, etc basically food and water enough for one day the bare minimum) . the basic nourishment for stronger races, average races, different races that gets energy from something else aside from food will be far more expensive than the weaker and basic races.
The description about the item of stronger than the average weapon from the average races means it is stronger than the typical sword created from a dwarf or so which is stronger than average weapons from the weaker races such as humans.. So the basic weapon series is actually strong compared with the far weaker races.
This will be updated when i see something needs to be fixed early on, or needs some balance changing i would also release a race list, power list, geographical content as well as the power owning the geographical content, etc.
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IF YOU ARE INTERESTED YOU CAN SUBMIT IN AN IDEA FOR A RACE, and if it meets the standards i would use it in the story with a ( insert creators name has helped created the race)
Something like this is by Andur
cuddles was the name used as a administrators race
Cute, little, furry creatures which live in big trees. Their society is focused on worshipping nature and they have a strong hierarchical structure.
While they are physically not very strong, they excel in plant magic and many of their enemies found themselves wrapped up in the grasp of a deadly vine.
They trade with seeds and agricultural goods.
With their huge innocent eyes they can sway the hearts of the greatest beasts and their long, bushy tails are perfect to hold onto something as a fifth limb.
basically i requre some basic description about the race, appearance, abilities etc.
heres an example from me
icarus- beings that attempted to fly but cannot, however despite many deaths and failures one finally succeeded he was the founder of the icarus and taught his own fellow race to become like him, this race instead of having wings has gliders membranes covering that arms like a hang glider with a small black spot facing downwards protruding outwards this is the things that creates the constant thrust, maneuverable. this race is quite nimble in the air able to change direction with ease, and having the ability to control their thrust, however to make up for this they require lots of food and they have rather normal - high strength, normal intelligence, high- extremely high agility, but very low population,
Author notes
lazy author that only releases fisrt drafts, with no planning write as i go type of view, currently undergoing family problems and so does not wish for negative feed back without substance. right now i am doing a side story to help clear some confusion about hte power rankings before doing the battle. it might be released today or within the next day. so either within 3 hours (its first drafts i only release so its how fast and bothered i can write or i will leave it to sleep and do it the next day)
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