《Betrayal of the Dead》1. -Death-
Advertisement
*CRASH*
Headlights.
The sound of screeching tires.
And then pain.
Unimaginable pain.
“Must have been a car…”
A quiet remark sounded in the Abyss.
-Death counter: 1-
An AI-like monotonous voice resounded.
-New passive acquired: rank 1 bludgeoning damage resistance-
“What the fuck is going on?!”
The human voiced a question which was completely ignored.
-Resurrection system activated: Deaths betrayal-
“You've got to be kidding me.”
The voice stared to get shaky
“I’m dead?”
“Wait, but this can’t be happening!”
Then the realisation finally hit, any denial in the voice completely disappeared.
“I just got accepted for my job.”
“SHIT!”
The human consciousness started to lament it’s fate.
“Why me?”
“The statistics clearly state that only about 12 out of 100000 people die form a car crash, that's less than o.o2%!”
“I guess most people tend to crash their cars rather then get hit by them so these stats don’t mean shit in my circumstances.”
“At least I'm lucky that I died instantly.”
“Judging by the sounds I heard before everything went dark I might have just broken all the bones in my body.”
If a consciousness could turn pale then the change in colour would have been like heaven and earth.
“Just thinking about the pain I would have been in sends a shiver down my…”
“Hmm down my what exactly?…”
“I clearly don’t have a body, and even if I did then my spine would be broken and I wouldn’t feel a thing.”
“I’ll just settle with shiver down my soul I guess.”
-Resurrection sequence initiating in 10… 9… 8… -
“let’s just hope I don’t come back as a bug or something.”
-3… 2… 1…-
*SILENCE*
“Wait… why isn’t anything happ-”
*BADABOOM*
Advertisement
-Welcome back to the world of the living… Isla McCall-
…
The sun was shining brightly, it’s heat beating down on Isla’s bare skin. He opened his eyes and asked no one in particular.
“Where the hell am I?!”
-Location unknown-
He was stunned as his question was answered.
“Who the fuck is this?!”
-Death's Betrayal personal AI-
The AI's answer was just as monotonous as the last.
-Host needs to gather information to determine world’s properties-
After getting up and looking around Isla saw what looked like an unending sea of tall grass. Something quite similar to the Mongolian Steppe.
-Body calibration complete-
Once again the AI chimed in.
-Loading host’s stats-
Isla McCall
Age: 24
Race: Human Male
Death counter: 1
Class: Na
Strength: 1
Agility: 1
Endurance: 1
Spirit: 0.1
Passives:
Offensive: Na
Defensive: rank 1 bludgeoning damage resistance
Auxiliary : Na
Isla let out a depressed sigh.
“Why do my stats look so shit this isn’t right.”
With a soft whine he started lifting up his shirt.
“I used to work out a bit so I thought that at least my strength might have been a bit high- MY ABBS!”
What greeted him was a flat stomach, his ribs were even slightly visible.
He collapsed in a heap on the ground, one of the only things that had made him feel like he had accomplished anything in his life was gone, weak sobs could be heard from the thin bundle of limbs.
Alas this didn’t last long as his episode of self-pity was abruptly interrupted by the AI.
-If Host doesn’t start moving in 20 minutes chance of death by starvation will go up by 68.73%-
*rumble*
Isla realised that he was actually really hungry. He propped himself up and looked around, then noticed a thin line of smoke in the distance.
Advertisement
“Smoke means fire, fire means humans, humans and fire mean smoke…”
-The host means food-
He was corrected by the AI.
“Must be the hunger, it’s making me delusional.”
Isla knew that in order to survive longer than an hour in this world he needed to get up and start walking.
Orange tall grass brushed past his legs.
As he was walking he felt a weird sense of calm as he reminisced about his past life.
Once again sighing he spoke out loud.
“I guess I don’t really miss anything from my past, well I guess I do miss my abbs…”
“Hehe”
“No-one is going to remember me. Or even care that I died. I didn’t make a life for myself, didn’t make any friends and lost contact completely with my family.”
He was getting very close to the source of the smoke, his voice only getting louder.
“I am a failure…”
Then a visible change came over him. He seemed to stand up taller, puff out his chest a bit more, lifted his chin, even his eyes had a strange sense of determination in them.
“The failure that I was dies today!”
“I shall show the universe that I am more than just some failed nobo-”
*Slash*
*Thunk*
-Death counter: 2-
The AI stated.
-You have died-
-Life length 55 minutes and 37 seconds-
“That was my head”
-New passive acquired: rank 1 slashing damage resistance-
Isla didn’t know how to respond. The universe clearly didn’t seem to agree with his previous statements.
-Beginning resurrection sequence-
The AI stated in the midst of Isla’s silence. His previous spirit was completely broken, he felt as though he had been cursed by the entire universe.
-Stats gained in world shall not be translated over into next life-
-To keep any stats permanently gain passives which give stats-
-Rank 1 slashing damage resistance added to permanent defensive passive list-
-Resurrection sequence initiating in 10… 9… 8… -
Finally Isla said something to himself.
“The way I died must have been a coincidence right? Right AI?!”
-3… 2…-
“Right AI?!”
-1…-
*SILENCE*
“AI!!”
*BADABOOM*
-Welcome back to the world of the living… Isla McCall-
...
Advertisement
- In Serial7 Chapters
Kazuri
Weird savior to a demon race is born. Is he the good guy, or is he truly evil? Migurigum, emotionless beings on the physical plane, feared as demons by all. Geltun Migurigum, persecuted children who 'awaken', becoming something similar to these creatures. Sanji is a boy with amnesia who wakes up to find himself in the Geltun Migurigum school. Here he is bullied and weird phenomena occur around him. Sico is the second boy of prophecy whose family was killed by the Migurigum. He goes on a journey with an indestrutable sword to kill them all. Part 1- 12 chapters, brings the two main characters together. What is the goal of the Migurigum?
8 190 - In Serial23 Chapters
The Eden Chronicles
Join adventure of Saffron, Shiso, Reva, and more on their way to the legendary city of Eden. Share their laughs and join their emotional journey as you read the story based off the game One Step From Eden by Thomas Moon Kang. The cover art is by the user Genusagi on the One Step From Eden Discord.
8 128 - In Serial15 Chapters
Mistakes Lead To Success
Mistakes were made and it led to the death of Natalie Freemen. Her soul was captured and cared for by an young god but such protection come with a cost. Instead of taking the original offer she decided to make a deal. She would rome the multiverse and steal the essence that thrives them. In return she could become a demigod. Updates at random Romance is not the focus but a major plot point. I will take suggestions and corrective criticism. *Important Note* This makes for sense as you read along. This story is created by the viewer but there is a twist. Some chapters are static, meaning that it is to propel the plot. Others have polls that will affect other chapters but without a question. This means you don't know what it effects or in which chapter. I wanted to added this effect to create a suspense, something I didn't feel as much in other reader interactive stories. Your vote could create fortune or misfortune for the main character. I know what it will effect because have a chart that tells me the possible routes. You just have to wait and see what your choice have done. I'll even write which poll effects the chapter in the authors note. Characters could die in the story and they won't be leads anymore. In comments you can ask for a detail chart for each poll but it will only be for one answer per poll. I will chose the most requested answer. I do not own the photo.
8 174 - In Serial8 Chapters
The Girl That Could | ✔|
After the death of Jessie's father, Makayla watches the slow disappearance of her friend. However, when a small note slips out of Jessie's locker promising the impossible, maybe there is hope for Makayla's closest and dearest after all.***Occasional strong languageFirst draft***🥈Lit Awards🥉Moonlight Awards🏅Punk Rock Awards🥉Ruby Awards🥉Mysterious Awards🥉The Aurora Awards: Frost Edition🥇The Butterfly Awards🥉Cosmic Awards🏅ACE Awards🥈Writer's Glory Awards🥇 LY Awards🥈Sunflower Awards🥇Adore You Awards🥇Pretty in Punk Awards🥉 Deli Awards
8 154 - In Serial95 Chapters
Renegade's Redemption: Dust
A recently-deceased human hero finds himself alive again as a god... and stuck with the vicious Sun Fiend who led him to his death in the first place. The past is gone, forever out of his reach. His future lies with her, but will it entail redemption or revenge? Updates every other Monday. Renegade's Redemption is a character-driven fantasy story. It observes several immortals and their world as both change over several thousand years.
8 213 - In Serial52 Chapters
Because Of The Journey.
"You got me fucked up if you think I'll be the other girl, I'm not about that life man. So kindly go back to your girl, delete my number and don't even look at me when you see me. Forget what happened yesterday ever did. You are Blacky's acquaintance and I'll strictly like to keep it like that. I should've known not to mess around with your stupid ass." By now her eyes were teary, shit mine too the fuck? I opened the door and asked her to leave, she looked at me and was about to say something when she decided not to.She likes me and I definitely like her but I just couldn't be the other girl. I've had girls being the "other girl" to me and I only called them up when me and my girl had gotten into a fight, only to relieve stress. Yeah I know that was low of me but I did it anyway.
8 145

