《Magune: Let The Magnet Rise》Chapter: 2- the first pull/push
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CHAPTER 2:
Author notes: I will quickly answer a couple of questions before I start the second chapter in this novel.
First is going to be the point in which I explain the childhood of the main character Rai, he will not be getting the over powered baby thing he will just be hella smart to his surroundings while growing up as you can see with the first chapter he is not a reincarnated individual. Which in long run means that he will not have many instances when he gets too talk fluently before the age of 2.
He might start to get smarter by listening to his parents talk but he wont be actually able to say anything so that he can talk to his parents. That is all so for this chapter and chapter three it will go pretty fast but they will go at a constant pace of him growing up. Now that I explained that lets get on with our story.
We left of on our little guy sucking on his very beautiful mother Nectar/Milk of life.
As the baby nods his head off into dream land his mother Railin decides that she herself is tired from the entire ordeal so she herself decided to go to sleep since its rapidly becoming night time.
But before she finally nods herself off to dream land she tells jin to take ben to his house across the village.
After getting up from the chair and picking up Ben, Jin goes and exits the house. As hes walking along the dirt path filled with flowers and weeds he starts to mumble to himself as he say what a beautiful baby boy I have. He looks just like his mother but with two different hair colors while he himself has brownish orange his wife has a black tinted bluish hair but the weird thing is his is orange and black with tints of blue at the very tips of his hair.
That is so weird……looking, well hes my son he will grow to be a handsome young man when he is older.
As I was walking along the dirt path for a few more minutes Ben had woken up wondering why I was carrying him on my shoulder like a damsel in distress.
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But really shook him up was that a (A) class hunter was knocked out by a child be born.
But the strangest thing he felt was when the child actually hit him he felt a bit of anger the moment the child touched him. But what he really cant get around is that he is known for being very calm in any situation no matter what job he does so what could have made him feel a bit of anger against the little bundle of orange sunshine that knocked him unconscious.
He will have to look into this the moment he turns five so that they can test his Magic power and affinity.
They have been walking for about ten minutes more before they got a large shack like house with two big bedrooms, kitchen, living room, study and a large garden.
When Ben opened the door what he was faced with was a giant woman about six feet tall leaning on the interior wall of the house.
After a few seconds went by he tried to think of an excuse for why he could not get home on time before jin stepped up and said it was his families fault.
As she was about to open her mouth Agatha Smallpox, waited for a moment because for no goddam reason she really wanted to yell at Ben since he didn’t come home early she felt a bit lonely with their new born which was sleeping head first in the wooden crib right smack in the living room.
But the thing is since the baby was crying so much during she couldn’t do none of the chores around the house she would usually do, but ben had promised hell be doing them today after he did a job for a friend down the road.
Lets just hop right threw this situation since he was late he apologized and apologized to his wife for being late and leaving her alone by herself for the whole day.
Then Ben told Jin he can head home and that he will be over with his wife so they all can see the new baby boy even though he helped with the pregnancy he did not get to see the boy other than the swirls of orange that hit him in his chest.
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As jin gets home he quickly takes off his cotton fur jacket and shirt before he tries to hop in his bead to get some shut eye.
But the moment he tries to hop in bed he is pushed out by an unknown force……..
But before he can try to jump in again he feels the force field of the sorts let up and he gets in the bed after his unusual battle with trying to get some shut eye.
Then he nods his head too sleep as him his baby boy and wife sleep In dream land.
After waking up literally four hours later to a crying baby in the middle of the night Railin jukes up and tries to see what’s wrong with the baby but she suddenly feels a jolt that makes her spine shiver as she tries to find out what’s wrong with little Rai. What she find out is that he just made a poopy…..
As she begins to find another cloth prepared by her throughout the pregnancy to clean up his little droppings of life she cleans him till he is dry after soaking the cloth in water and washing his cute little butt.
After she cleans Rai she feels another jolt in her head from out of nowhere but what she didn’t know was that for the first time Rai powers have actually started running amok.
Then for the first time since he was born rai has just started thinking. And the first word he thought of in his head was mommy?
I call this power “Magnetic Bridge”( magnetic bridge is a special skill in which when he is close to a person he loves un conditionally he will be able to bridge a magnetic pull on certain memories and on other educational facts he can learn threw the other person too himself if you get what I mean. To his mother when she felt that jolt of pain he was pulling on a memory of he being happy learning in a certain academy I won’t mention for a while.)
By no means will he be able to leach information all the time about his surroundings until he gets control over it he will keep gaining information no matter what it is and how it’s affecting him.
After learning this memory the character just learned how to think and a few words from this world’s vocabulary he won’t be able to speak it without practice but you get my drift.
Now let’s skip ahead one year in the future,
During this one year time skip while he was always near his mother in their shack house and while his dad was out making money for the house hold while they were in the house he leached a lot of information from his mother and surroundings including his uncle down the block or we can call him Uncle Ben lmao(Spiderman reference).
During this time he met a lot with the smallpox’s and with their own son Gin who is Rai’s future best friend but they don’t know that yet.
Also during this time rai has learned a few small words to say after fixing his tongue many times in practice his first word was Mommy his second was Daddy.
And after that he learned many other 4-6 letter words.
Authors notes: Ill end chapter two about here….. and you can wait next Wednesday for another chapter itll be longer explaining a lot of Rai and Gins adventures in a four by four meter dungeon they call a crib.
Did you like the chapter was it long enough did it get you hooked for some old fashion training and learning.
I hope to turn I can turn this into a battle drama adventure with romance in towards the end as Rai learns his polar opposite get it lol. That’s a big hint
(my new readers you may be thinking wow what was that how did that happen omg you lied you said he wouldn’t be a OP super powered baby) but no I did say he will be a genius in the first part of the chapter. What I mean by that is I said before he will be very attuned to what he can from his surroundings.
His power is called “Let The Magnet Rise” which gives him all power over magnetism every form of it and what he just used was a skill he wont know how to really use till he is a bit older. bye
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