《Magune: Let The Magnet Rise》chapter 3- First Nature pull/ info head ache
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Chapter 3:
It was like any other day with Rai’s new best friend Gin.
Since the two best friends are only around the age of one years old they both can barely lift their head up because of their disproportionate baby bodies.
As they have started growing up Gin has also been showing signs of him gaining little to no intelligence based on him being around Rai so Much during their play dates or what you might call it.
But to these little guys being together isn’t just so random child’s games these guys have been growing a lot faster since they have finally been told a story about a hero.
Now that they know the new fad in their mind is to keep playing hero and companions it was one time that Gin wanted to be the demon king while Rai wanted to be the hero that bridges the gap between the humans and the demons.
During this time we have been going through the same war style pattern in every original fanfic novel but the way I want it to put is that.
The demons always are portrayed in hero novels as the main antagonist to the plot of peace but what if it was the fanatic individuals of the church promoting their gods worth on the unsuspecting kingdom of humans. During the old times it was said for a fact that demons were evil because of their robust appearances with horns red scary eyes all black skin and sometimes being over seven feet tall on a regular.
So basically what the citizens of alveron do not know is that their hundred thousand year war is based on discrimination and now is just getting out of hand.
Let’s get back to our little hero and companion as they finish their little play on the war of yesterday.
It’s happened many times since they can barely walk these two are basically scurrying across the room of Gins house as they are getting skin burns from scurrying on the floor. They ram each other from the fantastic battle they just had because their negotiations based on who get the last piece of berry pie failed threw.
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Threw out the house all you can hear it is mine rai!!!
No it is mine Gin, said rai!!!
Then they both fall down a inch away from each other dead tired as they both get scooped up by their parents then as they are about to go to sleep.
Their mothers both suggest why you guys don’t split it down the middle.
Then as they both nod off to sleep they both start to go off in dream land.
One thing I think I should explain is the reason why Gin is as smart are even a little but smarter than Rai.
This is the effect of Rai’s “Magnetic Bridge” another effect is that before Rai met Gin a couple months ago both of them did not like each other at first.
Rai hated Gin because he always cries all the time when he didn’t get too drink his mother’s milk so whenever they were together they played by themselves on the other sides of the crib.
But what you didn’t know was that Gin had a total personality change from being a mommies boy to being a little more independent at the tinder age of 1 which set his mother off because he use to always want to play with and be only around her.
During their second year of birth Rai followed around gin almost everywhere when they were together except when they needed to get their body wiped clean of the mister dirty.
The second year of their birth was a very bad year For Rai he was suffering from constant headaches of information his baby mind could not remember. He started to have the feelings of wear when he quickly lifted his head up after sleeping for a while he would see a very thin like lines all over the room for a milli-second but it will quickly disappear.
During these instances he would be bombarded with sudden headaches as he begin to walk around his room what he thought was pretty rainbow lines across his room was actually his planets magnetic lines that are not visible to the naked eye.
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The skill will be called
Magnetic vision:
(also known as Axle eyes):
Which allows a user to be able to see the magnetic outline of and area on top of the topography on the current area.
It allows the Rai too see wear his powers are most affected and can be but in effect. Being exposed to looking at magnetic out lines of the planet makes the user susceptible to his eyes not working for a few hours.
Pov Change:
During the two years of children rearing, the mothers of the two bundles of joy were talking every day they were together with the kids. Every now and then they would let one another watched the other kid at their house. Literally every week they had a switch in environment so the children but mainly themselves would not get bored.
Let’s not forget that even if I did not mention it the parents lived in the outskirts of a very abundant but poor village. They had an over product of fruits and vegetables but there was a scarcity of meat in the village mainly because there weren’t any real herbivores within the range of the village when the children were born.
But when Rai was born he had another one of his secret magnetic abilities activate. Idk if it was a sudden indication that all he ate was fruits and vegetable but he didn’t really have any iron in his body.
As a safe measure over time when he began to wean of his mother nipple. He was able to get a solid intake of fruits and vegetables since he was barely able to chew with his two new front teeth.
Nature sounds- but in the village a lone babies stomach is making a zooms zwoom humming noise barely audible to the human ear. (THINK OF IT AS Rai’s body as a big animal whistle..zzzzzzz)
Over a period of a year a gradual amount of herbivores and omnivores started to migrate to the forest outskirts of the village.
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Over the course of the year the village deemed it was necessary because if the frequent animal extortions they have been bringing a lot of animal meat this year.
It also back fired as the abundance of animals meant it was more needed
Security to protect the village if any animals or monsters start to encroach on their human settlement.
So they erected a fifteen foot wall of earth two meters thick to keep themselves protected.
And….. that’s how this measly village started gain food other than fruits and the vegetables.
I call this future ability as
Natures Pull:
Any monster or animal that has blood with iron in their body is drawn to your area of life. They will not come to hunt or eat you. It’s more like they will comes to in a migration pattern first.
it will be the lowest on the food chain, then when there is enough grass and fruits and vegetables many pig birds will start to migrate to your area. As naturally many other monsters will come after the pig bear because of its succulent meat.
Author notes: mainly this chapters was too focus on the phenomenons happening around the village and in his every day life
think this will be the last chapter of the week for my start I got too many essays piling up lol. But ill write more on Monday and Tuesday to make up for it
Also please tell me if there are any mistakes are changes to make and I can even implement an idea if you want me to later down the road just write a comment.
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