《Hidden Adversary》Chapter 3 (Reworked)
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-“A new life a new journey” Chapter 3
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Side Takoshi
Finally after 5 years I am now on my way to go to my first high school with my 2 new sisters Imouto and Hinari we three are in the same class together so it will be really awkward for me in that day the next day I woke up late on the day of the opening school or is it.
Hinari shouted at me loudly “Big Brother wake up!!! You’re going to be late for our opening school!!”
I woke up and looked around my room “W-what really? [looking at the clock] AHH IT REALLY IS LATE WHY DIDN’T YOU WAKE ME UP IF I AM LATE?!”
Imouto then told me “You promise to wake up early! I guess promises cannot be fulfilled sometimes”
“Hmph, that is what you get for staying up late look at Imouto you made her cry” Hinari told me in anger,
I was scared that I may have started my day worst so I told them “Don’t worry I will get ready as fast as I can! You two go wait outside”
“You better!” I instantly jumped out of the bed get my towel and went to the bathroom to take a quick shower went into my room and wore my school uniform took my bags wear my shoes on the front door and getting ready to go but as soon as I opened the door the night was still pitch dark and I saw Imouto and Hinari waiting outside holding their laughter. “What the heck? It is still night!”
[Holding her laughter] “Do-Don’t worry big brother your…” Imouto fell down and rolled around continuously,
Hinari burst out laughing out loud “Yeah your early…HAHAHA”
I didn’t really know what is going on right now with the two of them and it looked like they just pranked me “WHAT TIME IS IT?!!!!!!” Hitari comes up out of her room and saw me in my school uniform, she asked me.
“Umm Takoshi? Why are you in your school uniform? Its 5am in the morning what are you all doing outside?”
I glazed at them getting ready to punch them hard “Damn you both I will kill you!” Both of them ran at the same time into the house and I chase them both with my eyes glaring at them,
[Both Imouto and Hinari] “We are very sorry Big Brother” they apologized while both of them smiled and laughed really hard
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“NO YOU BOTH WILL BE PUNISHED! NOW COME HERE!!!” then later on I gave up chasing them and went to my room to check my school stuff and prepared them after that it is 7am both of the sisters had took a shower and went into their school uniforms joining me on breakfast Hitari cooked us but I’m glaring at them both for what they did earlier.
Hinari was worried and told me“Umm brother you can stop looking at us like that you know?
“Yeah we apologize for earlier” Imouto apologized while eating her bread
I was silenced for a moment then I responded “……. I’m not going to walk with you to school today….”
[Both Imouto and Hinari]“WE ARE VERY SORRY!!!!” Both Imouto and Hinari, knelt down at the floor and apologized many times
Then I smirk at them both “Got you good hahaha, don’t worry I am just joking, let’s eat breakfast and get going to school” The three of us finished our meals and now getting ready to go to our school, Hitari gave us our lunch and told us to take care.
“By the way Imouto our new school is not far from here right?”
“No it is a bit near around our apartment”
“Ah, is that the school over there?” I pointed out to the building that seems to be our school.
“Yeah that’s the place”
“It really is ne-“ As soon I got near the building as I thought, the school building is on top of a hill I stopped in shocked of it.
Hinari asked me “Umm brother Takoshi, is something okay?”
I thought*What the heck it is so far up how did they manage to build this?!* ”Anyway let’s get going we might miss our ceremony “We walked up the stairs and arrived in no less than a minute,
“Even though its high I didn’t expect we could climb up this quick “I looked at the school name {Odoroku Academy} from what I learned it meant “Astonishing/Surprised” Academy. I saw a bunch of students walked inside the school and everybody surrounding us is looking at me.
I whispered Imouto about it [Whispers Imouto]” Hey why all of them are looking at me?”
Imouto then looked around her surroundings and told me “Umm I don’t really know or maybe this is the first time they first saw you, you are from out of the country don’t you?”
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“Yeah I am” I heard all of the students were chattering about me,
[Indistinct chattering]
“Hey look over there!”
“That must be their brother they were talking about”
“Wow their brother is so cool!”
Every student was complementing on me and I felt a slight shyness in my body, we arrived at the hall and took our seats, the hall is massive and crowded with students. I stood up and looked around the hall soon Hinari pulled me to my seat.
“Hey sit down the ceremony is about to start”
“I can’t help it the hall is too massive in fact this school is massive itself!”
“Be quiet the principal is here. The ceremony is starting” The ceremony was over after a long hour and we got to our class, Class 4-A above the floor is class 5 our senior’s class. My seat was far away from Imouto and Hinari. Both of them glanced at me and face to the front at the board some female students went to them and talk to them maybe it’s their friends, before class was starting a tall tanned male student talks to me.
“Hey! You must be Imouto’s and Hinari’s brother”
*he looked like a Chinese person*“Y-yeah and who are you?
He raises one of his arm “My name is Jia Cheng and I am from Malaysia, I moved here to Japan because my parents now worked here.”
“Nice to meet you, my name is-“Suddenly a chubby male student interrupted before I finished talking,
“Takoshi Kouno right? your sister talked about ya and this is the first time we saw you”
“And you are?” I asked
“Nice to meet you I am Paiz from Brunei,I moved to Japan 2 years ago and the reason is the same as him[pointing at Cheng].
“Brunei? I am from there too”
“You did? How long have you been in Japan”?
Cheng then answered Paiz’s question and asked me a question “5 years isn’t that right Takoshi? and why didn’t you go to school with your sisters for 5 years?”
“You got that right did my sister tell you guys about it? also I graduated middle school at a young age 10 years old” Cheng was amazed by it[Amazed] “Amazing! You must be really smart then”
Ggrabbed my arm and started squishing them “None of this question matters but did you exercise at home Takoshi? I can feel some guns on your arm”
I swept his hands away from my arm “Hey stop it, don’t grab my arm” A short male student is walking towards us wearing an arm band maybe he is a student president,
“Yeah stop harassing the new student guys” He told them and Cheng let go of my arm,
“Oh come on not everything we do is harassing right?”
“Yeah yeah I was just kidding” the student then stands in front of me
Paiz told the student “Oh yeah Saher this is the new student Takoshi the brother of Imouto and Hinari of our class”
He shakes my hand “Nice to meet you Takoshi my name is Saher and I am the student president of this class”
“Nice to meet you and where are you from?
“Indonesia I got transferred here last year”
“Oh” Cheng puts his hands on my table and asked all of us “Hey wanna hang out later at the café nearby? It has waitresses with different characteristics” I rejected that offer because I am not free for today“Maybe next time Cheng how about this weekend?”
“Bummer but yeah I will see you this weekend”
“How do you guys speak Japanese so well” The three of them answered with different answers
Paiz told he learned from anime shows, Cheng told his tutor teaches him Japanese, Saher told he was a quick learner. A female Teacher comes in our class and told us to take our seats and started the class, the day ended of me making 3 new friends Chiew,Paiz,Saher this day of school was really fun as now I am walking home with both of my sisters together
“You must have had fun at school right?” Hinari told me then followed by Imouto “I saw you making new friends”
“Yeah, I can’t wait for another school day and yeah this weekend Im gonna go to the café with them.”
“The café with waitress acting with different characteristics?” Hinari asked.
“Yeah! I think it might be fun to go there”
“Well have fun this weekend” The day end and I have made new friends on the first day of school, my sisters really talked about me with their friends i can’t wait for tomorrow again at school, hope new things will happen.
(End Chp.3)
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