《When The Gods Sleep, I Wake Them Up》Phase Evolution Ch 2: Just Call Your Old Man!
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The girl now is dyed red from embarrassment, an awkward atmosphere fell on the two, Marcus eyes strayed looking at the garden then at the inner room, finally his eyes stopped on the maiden, and the silence continued.
Until the maiden broke the silence.
"I-i-i-impossible!! F-for mar-r-rying s-s-someone y-you have t-t-t-to be in l-l-love!"
After thinking for a moment Marcus faced her with a complete innocent face that announced 'I am good boy' and 'I don't like lies'.
"Huh, but I love you, you know when I faced you I had a sudden spark that I never felt before, I think it was... what was called? Ah yes! Love at first sight."
The young woman looked down, and a small smile formed on her sensual lips making Marcus heart skip a beat. The smile disappeared as soon as he formed.
"B-b-but i-if we ma-marry you c-can't stay he-here!"
"So you are not contrary to the idea"
The girl did not say anything to deny that, she just looked down, making Marcus more confident with himself.
"So if I can't stay here, you come with me!"
"Huh?.."
The goddess blanked out for a moment, before looking at Marcus in the eyes with a serious expression making the shy goddess from before almost an illusion, if it wasn't for her red dyed face.
"And who will manage the universe?"
"Ah, so all this seriousness for this?"
"O-obviously! H-how can I g-go and l-let the universe to i-itself!?"
"Just call your old man for the work"
"Th-this can s-solve the problem for some decades, b-but later on w-what will we do?"
"Is there any method for me to stay and live here with you?"
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The goddess seemed to think for a moment before saying.
"You have to become a God"
"Ah yes, yes that's easy I should just do that... What!?"
"Like I, said becoming a God should solve the problem"
Now the young woman has a grin placed on her face.
"Huh it seems I can't do anything else. So how can I do that?"
"I will make visible the system for the evolution, and you will be reborn in a race with better evolvability. Father also did the same thing for me to become a God"
"What is this system for the evolution thing? And don't Gods born already with their divinity?"
"The system is already activated on all the races, human also have it, it's just that some races evolve more than others, like how humans evolved from monkeys, I will make it visible just to let you be aware of the changes and possibilities. As for the Gods, yes they are born as Gods, it is me who is different, as I was born half human half god, so father made me evolve to become a God."
"So how much did it take?"
"Almost 20 years"
"Can I ask something?"
Without feeling it the goddess is now speaking without continuous babble, and without that a completely red face, what remain is just a sensual shade of blush on her cheeks.
"Yes?"
"What is your name?"
A smile formed on her face and then trasformed in a small giggle, making her more adorable.
"Khali"
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