In the earlier poll, three out of four answered: "I want to read the story". And so I will upload it here on RRL for you to read. After patching up the plothole and redoing the plot, I didn't find it similar enough to overwrite Eleeah. Instead, I created a new one that didn't have the two reviews two kind souls gave this writing try. (The links will open a new window.)

Remnants of the Dark Masters

Rose is a runaway girl and Johnan is a priest-in-training. By circumstance or fate, a storm brings them together in under the same cave roof. Being restless, Johnan decides to explore the cave system. Rose, knowing the cave hold some kind of danger, can't leave him to his fate.

Rose's fears are realized and Johnan gets his adventure.

First chapter