《The OP Ricegod system》Love at first sight
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Since I've already got the money, I asked the system to teleport me to the car dealership place. I saw this salesman arguing with this couple so I waiting because there were no other salespeople. The guy seems to want something from the salesman and the girl was trying to stop her boyfriend, brother, or friend. As I was waiting for the salesman calls me over. As I was walking I noticed girl which was trying to pull back her brother, glancing at me with sparkles in her eyes.
For a moment, all I could do was stare at her. She was so beautiful; too beautiful. Her long, blonde hair fell across her shoulders, Smooth like honey dripping over her shoulders. Those beautiful glacial blue eyes watched me carefully, reminding me that I had yet to say anything. Still, in awe, my eyes dragged over her snow-white dress, clinging ever-so-softly to her body. She looked like a goddess.
Salesman: *cough cough*
I snap back to reality.
"Hi, there miss what might your beautiful name be?" I ignore them as I move towards the girl.
"Caroline," she said as she blushes.
I reach for a handshake but as she grabs my hands, I twist her hand and kiss the back of it. She didn't try to pull back so I guess my high charm really does work.
+"Hey there,/* buddy what do you think you are doing to my girl"=he said as he grabs my shoulder and pulls me back.
"Nothin--"
"Who said I was your girl" she replied.
"Haha I was just kidding," he said
"Hi sorry about my Randy, he always does this" Caroline said
"No need to apologize beautiful," I said
"So why did yall call me over for," I ask the salesman
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"Could you please tell this guy he needs to buy the car with cash up front" he whispers
I ask him why he needed me to tell Randy that. He said it because I look strong and he might be more "willing" to listen to me. I asked what car did Randy want to get. Randy wanted to get the 2019 BMW 7.
"How many are in stock, "I asked
"One only"salesman answers
"I would like to buy that car," I said to the salesman
"Right this way sir," he said.
"Hey where are yall going and can I get my car," he asks
"Sorry sir, this man just bought that car cash down and a little extra"
"Why did you sell it to him when I was here first," he said angrily
"You snooze, you lose, "I said as I and the salesman walk into the store to get the paperwork done. As we walk in I saw Randy storm off with Caroline
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