《WHIRLED》chapter 17: devastated king
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a supply corp's arrived at the mountain valley near haalrough they didn't expect the next.. " commander, everybodys already dead..." " how could this be..." one soldiers noticed there's a movement on the pile of corpse " commander, look.." " someone survived.." supply corps commander hurried at the dying archer... " what happened, here??" " arghh ohoh.. agghhh.. it's, the angel cursed.." " what did you say? hey tell us what happen here...??" " agghhhrrr.." the archer was vomiting blood then died... " the angel cursed!!" " commander hes referring to mexie.." " that traitor, cursed her... we must inform the king immediately.." Rebel grounds.. " Sire i have important message upon you by supply corpse commander..." " really? After the entire day your the first to report here, tell me are they plundering hinderhold by now?? hahaha..." " Sire but the message was,sire our infantry, archers, phalanx, and cavalries are long dead before we arrive, we have forsee the misirable deaths of our fallen soldiers, one archer nearly dead and told us about the angel cursed was responsible for their loss.. as we invistigate further general autillius and his assistant adhell were dead cold and beheaded, their head went missing.." " What...." Badjork was angry... only one person called by this name " mixie..." badjork whisper to himself " Sire.. we learned the enemy rallied haalrough..." Haalrough: a vast mountainous village... About 3000 in populations, the village chief name raejin was a woman but heart of a true warrior... A mine located at village mountain and the biggest prison ever built in the entire continent was at this village... Haalrough profit surpassed even it's capital hinderhold... Many traders and adventurers visit this village for it's richness in materials like iron ingot, gold ingot, silver ingot, copper ingot , leather, diamond, all kinds of gem, and the last rare rising haalrough profit was dreaja ingot... Dreaja ingot was poisonous if mishandled... Just one touch your body will be like rotting corpse letting you lived for one day... Draeja sold a kilo for ten thousand rhufee... The advantage of this village has a long river namely dreik river.. built after the great war 632 years ago named after the great general defended the hinderhold... This river connects to the most valuable city's at marka continent.. rhufinya, vashna, hinderhold, frozenhelm,Ashzra, mothral, and Griffen... " Sent Freda to infiltrate haalrough immediately before I'll lost my patience..." " At once sire..." Freda: a woman warrior, train by badjork since childhood.. has invisibility ability, and mass paralyzed ability... Her agility can compare to mexie .. Freda was practicing with her very own acrobatic style, throwing several dagger at a dummy before a soldier went through... " Milady" a soldier kneeled.. Freda saw badjork favorite soldier kneeled next to her... " Well well well... Is your boss need anything I guess.." " Sire want you to v haalrough, the reason is autillius and adhell beheaded and the head were missing.. and I'm sure you knows already.." " And what is that exactly?" " Mexie join fray .." Freda went mad her teeth meets and almost stag a dagger to soldiers throat.. the soldier after realizing felt frightened, gulping his saliva .. " Say that name again and your fate will be like autillius.." " forgive me milady... But about noticing the corpse of autillius army.. almost half of them Pierce their chest through the heart, one fourth of them almost become mincemeat, i think they were killed by only two person, to be precise..." Freda sheated her dagger... " If you said was true, I should take action for this matter, now be gone at my sight before I'll slit your throat..." " At once milady..." The soldier's hurriedly terrified, they were talking while on their way to barracks.. " Sir, why Freda don't want to mention the name of mexie,..??" " Lower your voice or it will be your last to say" " Sigh.. since childhood Freda was abducted by badjork, but even if she knows about what happened to her parents, she remain loyal to badjork, until one day, when badjork are back with mexie, Freda seems jealous and until now Freda have a grudge to mexie that's all I know, now hurry up before the Dawn is arrive...dismiss" " Aye sire..." " If those soldiers said was true, mexie and one from this continent can slaughtered many of our comrade's... Hmnnn maybe I'll hunt you now mexie and father will be happy again" A sarcastic laughing by Freda.. Badjork seems devastated about the biggest failure " I couldn't understand even now after improving our ways of fighting and even we surpass the mighty strength of enemy generals... I inherited this throne after I prove myself worthy...630 years ago the battle was been recorded after a first defeat... But now again we failed... My initial forces advance was I thought innivitable almost halve my main forces loss to smaller forces and even now I don't understand their advantages ... Sigh..." Hinderhold gates before sundown " Halt comrade, open the Gates jharl Jared has arrived together with the cavalry... " they noticed jharl was on a rush so they quickly open hinderhold gates... Hinderhold palace jharl Jared throne.. " Welcome back sire, the council has been waiting for your return, they're inside now..." " Well then I have important things to discuss.." the jharl entered the door and rush to his seat... " Welcome back sire..." The council of hinderhold 9 of them including jharl Jared... " You may sit now... Okay ladys and gents, I have good news for you" " Forgive me my lord, hinderhold won a battle against the rebel.." " Yes yes I know that already... Here take a look at this..." Jharl put the head of enemy's head on the table... Everyone frightened.. " This is the head of rebel generals and his acquaintance.. hahaha..." Jharl was very happy about it... " You've just arrived sire how could their heads be in your hands?" " Ahh well, to tell you honestly.. ahhh empress disciples hand it over to me..." " Sire if you said was true, then we have a very big problem probably.." " What do you mean?" " Sire our general together with lady sesha was rallied haalrough , and they have encountered the two woman whom killed three fourth of our enemy infantry, cavalry, archers, and phalanx in mere minutes..." " And what's the problem with that vixtus.." " The problem were facing was them.. according to agrixzous a cavalier said those women murdering everyone nearing them even our own forces fall from the hands of them as he watch from afar.." " Ha that coward agrixzous haven't shaved his tail hahaha..." Trulia said... Then everyone was laughing except vixtus... His teeth and his expressions became more agitatedly annoyed.. " is that true vixtus?" " Yes sire, but they may become a threat to us in nowadays.." " That is not possible vixtus... In fact those women were empress acquaintance..." Vixtus was very surprised what he heard... " I'm sorry sire, I didn't know empress was involved, pleased forgive me for questioning your liability.." " It's just okay, but tomorrow we will discuss about full annihilation of rebels we must crushed them before their army became stronger again... We will fight terror with terror... Now dismiss..." The council dismiss and go home... Vixtus remain at jharl's quarter for he is the leader of the guild called black lantern... Black lantern: a guild on hinderhold, if your a member of this guild you will have a chance to live hinderhold grounds and have access to all kinds of benefits including the taxes came from haalrough mines... This guild known as a prosecutor of criminals and jharl Jared was also a member of this guild before heir as a jharl of hinderhold... The sun rises... Railee, Julian and ramzel drinking coffee .. after everything happened the other day seems they don't want to start any conversation before... " I have decided.." railee can't control the silence anymore... But the two have meets the eye and they don't want to say anything .. " Ahaha...sigh... I want sir ramzel to join our group since I have the right to decide for his fate..." " Well if that's what you want young man he's all yours... " " Okay I'll go with you but in 1 condition" " Ahm sir ramzel what condition is that?" " I want Julian to hand over drexs to us right here and now..." " Ohh hoo ho.. nah you can't have him he's my best friend not a pet..." Julian is savoring the taste of the coffee. " Hmnnn I remembered you said sir julian about taming a dragon right?" " Yes actually empress hand drexs to me like the size of this cup... And I just feed her with my Magicka the more the feed on it the faster they grow.. the one that feeds them was the one to be recognized as their master... So handing him over to you was impossible..." " So maybe at the peek of this mountain has a baby dragon nearly hatch by now, can we get some.." " not really young man, dragon dont lay eggs, theyre just spawn and spawn and spawn "
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