《WHIRLED》Chapter 60: telescope...
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Meanwhile...
I followed mr. Gragen, for he said it will be difficult to find the right location of Eternal God Irenian...
As if progressing... Sigh...
Were jumping from worlds after another for a long time without resting... I think a day had passed already... Like a clock ticking in my brains... Gragen said will do it his way... So i wouldn't need to used my farsight.. grossed.. i wanted to test it now... Huh...
I realized every solar system was not the usual as our solar system.. but every solar system have always habitant planets depending on how big their sun is... You know the brighter the star the more heat it releases... Thanks for the little information from our world... Still im im amazed myself to think that a dream to become astronaut someday and traveling space... have finally come true... I'm an astronaut!!!
Hahaha... Nope... I'm just traveling the space... Debating with myself opinion.. quite unnatural...
Is that betelgeuse!! It's so big... I wonder if it's hot...
Sigh... Aurora's Sun was 10 times hotter than this... I wonder how hot is our sun...
I'm intrigued myself...
With this body... And even my clothes burnt, no problem at all...
My energy always craft a thinner but undistructible barrier, coating the entire fabric that i conjured... Thanks for my auto repair magic... Always comes in handy... So...
Maybe Mr Gragen wouldn't noticed if i stop the time for now... You know i can't help my self fond at space exploration... okay...
Tick...
"Ohhh... mr. Gragen??
Yes your free to go...
Okay It'll be just short mr...
Yes you may go...
Thanks... "
Hahaha...
See mr Gragen finally agree...
Wow..... It's so huge... This is how it looked like in closed range... Hmmnnn
" Mr gragen can i have a bit more time!!!
Yes...
Okay...!!!"
Hahaha... As if he knows...
Wow... So this is our sun...
It's so lively unlike betelgeuse... Solar flares... I wonder why...
Okay let me test something...
I covered the sun entirely...
With dimensional barrier i fabricated using my thoughts... Just like how misty did... Did i replicate it...
Okay...
Tick...
The sun was so lively now...
The lava tickles... The heat won't affect me... But the radiation itself was quite giving me 1 point damaged per second... That wasn't a problem... 999999 will be automatically heal per second.. that's quite cheating...
I move from outside the dimensions... And my analysis and theory was correct... Ahhh... This is new discovery... Time stop at other dimensions while the other can continue.,. So my time stop ability was enhanced too... I learned that my magicules used 3 % to used time stop ability that i also fabricated personally... My magicules Somehow fully restored in mere seconds... always cheating...
Now for my final curiosity...
Tick...
And the dimension that covers the sun now finally gone...
The sun flare and radiation multiply...
Sounds bad for Earth...
Although i prove that in the same dimension the time stop and from other dimensions it will continue it's purpose...
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I should get rid of this first before Earth will be burned and reset...
Tick ...
It's probably 0.000002 seconds interval from time stop delay...
So that Mr Gragen wouldn't noticed... Before I'll go back to our journey...
Lets head first to my world... Earth...
Im in front of our house... Vines covering it entirely... Much look as a hunted house...
As i entered the door was locked..
No problem... I used my minimal magic to unlock it...
This is where i live... Very dusty...
I wonder what happened to Ann and her mother... And where's father... He's supposedly cleaning this placed as a last line of Go family he must became decent...
As i explore our house just like before... I saw read letters on the table in the living room.. i felt comfortable, now that i finally came back...
I've become interested in the letter so i read it...
Debt... From loan company...
Due to unpaid debt with the sum of P 300,000.00 the house and lot will be redeemed as payment...
If the said amount will not be paid for june 23, 2021
I looked at the calendar and our small digital clocked with a date..
Ohh... This is the date now...
I probably gone for two and a half years... Thats too long...
Why i felt under pressure now..
I drop the letter but stopped from the air... Ohh i forgot.. the time had stop....
Anyways...
Where is father... Probably painting on his room... Thats what his doing...
As i walk up the stairs... I felt myself comeback to my memories... Tch..
My heart was pounding...
Finally i got ball's to confront my father...
My eyes explore his room..
Too many rubbish heap.. all of his paintings was gone... Ohh the one at the living room too the hallway and the stairway... Probably gone too...
As i noticed the rubbish...
My picture before i was transferred...
Was on it...
Ohhh... Something i felt deep inside my heart...
Where is father...
I saw his laptop was still open...
There was my picture on the sites.. and the caption is...
Help me find my son... The reward is 5 million...
Im shocked...
And there was a receipt on the desk..
Sold paintings receipt...
He sold all of his paintings... Just to find me... I felt my teardrops coming from my eyes but i gasped to ceased my emotions.. this is not enough i said...
From the left corner of my eyes... Before i enter his room it was a blind spot.. so probably i didn't realize he was here...
As i walking closely to him...
My heart's pounding like a howling engine...
My longing for him.. suddenly came back to my emotions... I noticed.. he was clasping on my picture with his right hand... And a gun to his left arm... Father was left-handed so he will commit suicide then...
I felt terribly sorry...
I can't prevent my tears from falling down... I hugged him completely...
I've cried and cried and cried out loud.. but no one hears...
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Before i realized i fel asleep hugging him.. probably tired from crying...
I wake up still wrapped in him and nothing changed.. i noticed a camcorder with my picture stopped from playing although it wasn't stop or paused.. i used dimension to the camcorder and play...
It was our vacation day at tondol beach of anda... White sand beach back from may 1 2019 ocean festival summer days... Father was capturing video using it... He was slowly teasing us while chasing us... A very happy memories captured...
Still father have this, i thought he burnt everything of my mother's belongings... I thought he doesn't care... Im crying again... But teardrops was sparse.. and was already consumed...
I don't know how many days i cried without resting...
I finally made up my mind...
I created a dimensions only circling our house...
Tick..
The gun from his left arm... I confiscated it...
Im right behind him so i see how he wanted to end his life in his miserable state... I stopped the time because I'm fond of the stars and the solar systems.. i didn't realize while wasting my precious time.. someone was desperate for his time for me to comeback... Your such stupid... But i love you father...
He was looking for something as i expected... When he turned around...
I smile...
He stand so fast and runs towards me... Hugging me so hard... He cried a lot... He was like a baby... I got carried away too so I'm also like a baby... He has so many questions.. but he was so happy... Finally i got closures with him...
I asked where's Margareth and Ann.. he said...
" I've outcast them.. because probably i know everything... How they treated you... It's just.. i don't have courage by that time... But after you disappeared.. i finally realized how much your importance... I can't paint again.. after that you know... But i wonder what took you soo long returning back son..."
" Its a long story.. and i don't know if you will believed it..."
" I will believe you.. no matter how long, you know i will listen... In fact i have a welcoming surprised..."
" Really and what kind of surprised is it!!"
" Nahhh... Guess.."
_ gurrrrhhhppp... His stomach was growling... Probably hungry... We laughed then...
" Hahaha..."
" I guess, i have no clue..hmmn.."
" Okay before that let's eat first..."
" It was not obvious... Hahaha"
" Hahaha..."
It's just a small talk.. but im very comfortable with him around... Im glad i get back in time... What horror if it was later...
Tick...
I cleaned the house instanly using magic...
Father was probably shocked...
I don't want to hide anything from him.. he was my father afterall... He must know everything that im into...
But as expected, he fainted...
So i carried him down to the dining room... Where i open the dimension spaced storage.. probably preserved, the time at my dimension storage was non existed.. i took the ingredients... The menu was probably boar meat... And i wanted to make it a simple dish.. roasted boar meat... While thinking about it... My mouth salivates just by imagining the taste...
Im preparing.. probably ill cook it outside...
I can't wait any longer..
Fast forwarding the boar meat outcome..
The smell of the roasted boar meat..
Come into my mouth and belly...
Not happening.. probably it was the last one Mexie give it to me, after we left Aurora...
And i wanted to eat it with my father...
I served the food in the middle table..
As father was still unconscious...
I'll prepare to cooked Rice.. but the rice despenser has been depleted.. i opened it... Thank Goodness i found 3pcs rice grain.. enough to be mimically produced... As i closed the despenser... It was full again.. my magic always come in handy...
Everything was prepared... Except..
Tick...
" Huu..hooo..haa.. what happened..."
He hugged me again...
" I thought i was dreaming, but thank goodness i am not..."
He smelled the food..
Sniffing.. sniffing...
He saw in the table...
" Okay father lets eat... Your probably exhausted after cried like a baby... Hahaha"
" Yes... But im not alone like a baby... You cried then so we both like a baby... Hahahaha..."
After that we eat...
" Where did it come from.. its very tender juicy... Tasted like a corned beef... No this is first class beef..."
" It's.. probably boar meat father..."
" Boar!!!"
" Ohh.. Mexie give that to me before i left them along with my twin daughters..."
He almost disgorge the food in his mouth... He immediately drink water...
" Whhhaaattt did you just say!!!"
The words slide in my mouth as always... But i don't want to hide it to him so it's okay...but explaining was too hard i guess...
" I'll explained later after we finish eating..."
Guess that saves me...
" Yes yes.. i got too excited even by this meat... Boar??? I wonder where it came from..."
This is one of my traits... I probably inherit it to my father hahaha...
She showed his surprised for me after eating...
It's was a telescope... I probably excited about it before i got transported... So my reaction was easy to read by my father...
" I thought you liked it so badly.. you pointed it in the mall... I'm sorry for that time... I lost my job so i can't afford it... But now..."
" It's okay father.. i appreciate your concern.. but you know, i like it but i lost my interest from it, because of my long story... why i disappeared... But before that... Promise me not to faint or be surprised okay.."
" Oo..kay.. ill promised..."
" It started when i saved the child that almost fall down the cliff..."
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