《LEGEND OF UNFATHOMABLE ONE》End of the first round
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"Raidsrs this stage is divided depending on each person's trait and ability so there is no unfairness" (Shiki)
"Raiders with different ability are given a specific testing ground so raiders get ready to go to your designated testing area" (Shiki)
Heckkkk Yeahhhhh! (Raiders in high spirits)
(John and Amon going to the testing grounds)
It looks this is where we part ways ah, Amon. (John)
Yeah, it looks like it. All the best for you don't lose to me. (Amon)
Yeah sure, back at you too. All the best. (John)
(John and Amon part ways)
(John enters a Huge ground with race tracks)
Woh, what the hell is this? (John amazed)
" Good evening everyone. Let me introduce myself I am administrator Sukhishi Armon. I was also your administrator in the ability test first stage." (Sukhishi)
"Let's see there are more than 50 wind ability users here and that young man John or something is also here. Let's see if you really are not strong or you were just acting." (Sukhishi thinks)
"The first test will be a race. The raiders will compete with each other in an individual 5 members race. So the people will compete when called is it clear." (Sukhishi)
Yes! (people agreeing)
"The first race is between Luck, Jasmine, Pauline, Adam and Alex. Get to your designated positions in one minute." (Sukhishi)
(They all reach their positions and get ready for the race)
"You can only get promoted to the next test when you complete the 5 miles dash in less than one minute and the winner of the race can get a handicap for the next stage which is very helpful if you want to get promoted to the second round of the Junior promotion exam."
"So get ready, set and go."
(The raiders start the race and all the raiders rush to the finish line)
"The winner of the race is Luck with a dashing race time of 40.25 seconds which is only 3 seconds more than the previous record ." (Sukhishi)
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(Races continue one after other and it's finally John's time for the race)
Having a handicap is not a bad idea. If I miss some of my targets in the next round I can use that. But completing the race too soon is also a problem. I would finish the race just before the person who is likely to win the race. (John thinks)
(John takes the position and waits for Sukhishi's call)
"On your mark, get set and go" (Sukhishi)
(The raiders are running John stays in the second place for the time being)
I didn't think that the person in front of me would be this fast. I am at 40 per cent of my max speed. Nice! (John)
(The race is finally over John came first for his surprise he completed the race in just 32 seconds which was the new record)
Why is this happening to me the more I try to hide about myself the more attention I gain. (John disappointed)
(The person who came second was Robert he is known as the "Invisible wind" because of his speed. He was also a genius because of his great talent recorded in the raiders exam)
"This kid is not normal he is a monster. I thought that he just had good energy and energy control but he also has this sort of monstrous speed too what the hell is he?" (Sukhishi thinks)
"I need to report about this kid to Shiki he would be interested in him too." (Sukhishi)
(All the races were completed only 10 of the wind ability users were not qualified for the next round).
(Luck and Robert annoyed and looking at John) What the heck is their problem they look at me like vampires who crave blood. (John frustrated)
"The second round as you all know is the precision test of the raiders present here. Let's get to the testing grounds for the next test." (Sukhishi)
(All raiders go to the testing grounds)
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(Wind rushing from all directions)
"Guys this is your testing ground, where the wind is 2 times more bizarre than outside. All the best for all of you." (Sukhishi)
Is he deliberately trying to fail us or something? First, the race and now these conditions do the superiors do not care about the wind ability users this is completely unfair if I say so myself. (John thinks)
I can handle up to 3 times the wind from outside but looking at the wind ability users here they have no clue about the change in direction of the attacks in the wind. (John thinks)
What so that is it. The handicap was given to the race winners for the same reason so they can skip the precision test. It was a good thing that I won the race but I feel bad for others. This proves that the world is only ruled by powerful people. (John thinks)
"The people who want to participate should come forward." (Sukhishi)
(People who won the races came first because they have handicap so it doesn't matter if they hit it or not but the raiders who didn't win the races wouldn't dare to come because they think that it would be impossible to hit the targets in this wind)
"Hey everyone, listen to me. If you don't want to participate I will not force you but even if you lose this test you can just participate in the next competition but this place will help you gain much knowledge about the law of wind this is a great chance to improve your ability." (Sukhishi)
Yeah, he is talking the truth I can feel that my understanding of the wind law is increasing the longer I stay here. I don't know what happened but as soon as I broke through to the 4th level I was not able to be promoted to the next level with this I would reach level 5 in no time. (John thinks)
It is a good opportunity to increase my understanding of wind law. I would never let this chance pass by (John takes part in the test)
(35 raiders participated in the test and 20 raiders failed and only 15 raiders were promoted to the next stage and 5 raiders gave up the test)
Great! I have achieved the 5th level of wind ability now even the 5 veteran rank raiders are no match for me. (John thinks)
Let me see if Amon was qualified. I don't need to worry about him any way he is a true genius. (John)
Hey, Amon there you are. (John calls)
Ohh it John I see. (Amon feeling down)
Hey, why are you so down? Don't tell me you failed that's not true right. (John confused)
Of course, I would not fail it's just that the administrator does not let me examine the place where our test was conducted. He pushed us out as soon as the exam was over. (Amon frustrated)
Hahaha! Are you serious? That silly reason was enough to make you angry? (Insulting John)
What do you know man the sand present in the ground had properties which helped me increase my understanding of the earth ability if I was there for just one day I would have level up my earth ability to level 4. (Amon)
Yeah, I understand you bro I also want to go to the testing grounds again. (John kinda disappointed too)
Let's forget that for now, we should get to the stage where Shiki is if we don't want to miss the next test. (Amon)
Yeah, let's go. (John)
...............Amon and John go to the assembly grounds to know about the details of the next round. What surprises await them there let's see...............
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