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Looking for criticism of my Passion Project / an origin Story to the Project / and my writing Project.
Hi, I created a Story which then developed into the origin Story of my passion Project.
After some time, the concepts developed and I thought of a rly cool writing Project, with a bunch of features, while still being held in one overarching Lore of my Passion Project.
Need criticism for almost anything.
Origin Story: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37025/arechnocadia
Writing Project: https://www.arechnocadia.com/project-book
My passion Project: https://www.arechnocadia.com/
Many of these things are already reaching the range of Books, so do expect a bunch of reading, all emotional and deeply thought over.
If anything to it interests you feel free to join, it’s still young so there is right now only me :3
https://www.reddit.com/r/writers/
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The Violet's Knight
Discovering that you've reincarnated into the world of your most hated visual novel would infuriate anyone. Especially if that world treats its female characters like helpless dolls begging to be rescued by the nearest male character. Freya certainly isn't going to take this lying down, and especially not when the "villainess" of this world is just a girl struggling to please a cruel father. She doesn't deserve the horrific fate that awaits her... and Freya can't stand the thought of standing by and doing nothing. But how can a poor commoner with no power or influence get close to the daughter of the terrifying Duke Rhinestadt? Freya will have to fight tooth and nail to change the fate of "The Monster's Daughter"... This story is also published on Scribblehub and Tapas
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Eczius
In a world of chaos and destruction where despair and the control of the Bonsan dominate, people have lost hope of living a safe life, the increasing of human slaves who were taken by the Bonsan, and the slaughter of the humans they dislike , a group from nothingness called "Orbikus" came out, a group of heroes have supernatural powers Called "Eczius", led by a boy who owns a rare Eczius called "Dioborikita", which can copy anyone's ability by touching him and can go through that force and develop it to reach its maximum power. This group has decided to attack the main base of the Bonsan and kill their leader to finish this bloody age, and they have already succeeded in reaching their leader but he managed to escape and promised to retaliate and to return to dominate them more than ever. This peace and security have lasted for years, generations, centuries, and Orbikus became a global organization and possessed a lot of powerful people where the spread of power became nothing strange with the advancement of technology. But as time passed the heirs of Dioborikita power disappeared and it is no longer inherited. It has not been shown for generations for unknown reasons, as a group of wicked powerful people appeared and became a new enemy next to the basic enemy the Bonsan. The events of this novel will be in the age of our hero "Akihiro"...
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Volatile Gods
The Gods have come. Not the benevolent gods from religions across the world. They are gods of chaos and mayhem. And humanity is their primary source of entertainment. And the cruel humans that worship them? The gods give them abilities—powers to “entertain” the gods—and call them Worshipers. How do I fit into this story? Well I met a boy; quiet, naïve but adorable Nathan. Imagine my surprise when we run into Worshipers and instead of tearing us apart they bow to my nice, quiet boyfriend. Not only is Nathan a god, but he turns out to be the leader of the gods, Prince. He decides he wants to keep me. I run. I run right into a group of rebels calling themselves Warriors and they think I’m the key to killing the gods. I would call them crazy but they have gods on their side too. Gods who want Prince dead. Do I risk my freedom and my life on the hope this group brings?
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Our Toxic Love
*Draco Malfoy Fanfic* After the trauma Ivy has been through she finds herself alone and unable to trust except for Dumbledore. Little does she know her family holds a secret she could never dream of. When she meets Draco Malfoy her life changes forever, she now has to choose which path she must take is it love or war? Can you ever have the best of both worlds?*Warning*- Includes Swearing-Includes smut and fluffA re-imagining of general story line, may be slight timing differences to match my story
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World Travelers
Traveling the world sounds like a fascinating adventure. Traveling multiple worlds sound even better. But is it really an adventure if you’re forced to travel? What if a god had control over your existence? What would traveling feel like then? Well, there’s no point in thinking about these things anyways. Choice is only given to the strong. And nobody’s stronger than a god. _____________________________________________ Temporary schedule: Currently on hiatus (6 days of posting, 6 days of resting)
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Evolution God. Weakest to strongest.
This is the story about the man who was named Samuel but now Jaus... Who has the power of unlimited growth. What will he do? Where will his path of evolution take him?Dropped for now.Don't worry I will pick it up later.
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