《SATURN.》𝟶𝟷𝟶.
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𝐒𝐚𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐧 𝐃𝐞𝐦𝐚𝐧𝐢 𝐆𝐫𝐞𝐞𝐜𝐞
𝗔𝘁𝗹𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗮 𝗚𝗮 — 𝟷𝟸:𝟺𝟾 𝙰.𝙼
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-Oh, w-w-w-w-woah
"Yeah one of my homebody's just got his camera and shit and we was just like why don't we take some group pictures and shit"
"Oh that's fye. " I told him over the phone while walking in the house.
"Yeah and I wanted you to come , not on no weird shit but the guys fuck with you and you basically one of the bros now"
"Fasho" I smiled big but stopped and fixed my face. "Sounds like a plan. "
"Ight bet , imma send you the address. "
"Okay. "
I walked into the backroom seeing the girls already in here and I threw my keys down taking off my jacket.
"Ouu girl you just got that dick didn't you?" Hagani smirked at me.
I shook my head smiling a little giving it away and she started squealing "Ion know why you doing all that , it was leaving him alone sex. Ion mess wit him no-more.."
"Aw" Ki'Lani said then started laughing.
"I said some funny?"
"Girl don't speak to me crazy cause yo nigga wanted to step out on you. " She shooed me off making me frown my face up.
"What the fuck you talking about?"
"Awe Keeno aint tell you?"
"Tell me w—".
"Bitch obviously she fucked yo nigga!" Janae cut me off speaking harshly making Hagani fly off the bed.
"Don't talk to my sister , crazy" She started going in on Janae and I just stood there confused.
"What you mean ? Y'all had sex?"
"Mhm , I can see why you go so hard behind him . Dick go crazy. " She put her finger in mer mouth and clutched her boob making me run up on her and beat her head in.
"You. Knew. I . Fucked. With . Him" I mumbled between every hit to her head.
I slammed her head on the ground by her hair banging her head against the ground.
"AND YOU LET ME RUN BACK TO THIS NIGGA?! KNOWING YOU FUCKED HIM AND DIDN'T SAY ANYTHING—"
I felt my body being snatched up , tears were creeping down my face and I was breathing hard. I seen her get up and run up on me making me draw my foot back hard and set a kick to her face and she fell back.
"Fuck off me" I mumbled to whom ever was holding me back.
"FUCK IS YALL FIGHTING FOR?!"
"The same reason why you fucked her" I shrugged at him swinging my arms "Cause I felt like it"
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"It wasn't me , it was the whole gang bro. "
"Bitch you was apart of it!"
"I aint fuck that girl I left!"
"Why would she lie like that?"
At this point I was crying , its like I done been through all this with this boy and he turns around and does this to me.
"I wasn't sho befo but I know na i'm DONE with yo ass" I pointed in his face , he jerked his head back.
"You can't leave me. "
"Why not?"
"...I'm pregnant. "
I stared at him and slapped him in his face , starting to attack him until my daddy came and got me.
"Tall ass dumb fine lying bitch" I gritted seeing Keeno mugging me.
"If you leave me alone foreal , imma kill myself."
"Whatever Keeno.."
"Okay" He walked away down the hallways and my dad let me down .
Keeno turned around towards me and gave me a look like he wanted me to say something . But I just let him leave.
He nodded and continued walking the stairs.
Before I went in my room I looked over the railing seeing Janae helping Ki'Lani as they limped through the kitchen and out the front door.
Bitches had me fucked up
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"Get out the wayyy"
"Pretty boy coming through , me and my crew." Tooka nodded his head to the song holding the draco.
"Yall ready?" The dude holding the camera asked and I nodded along with them. "Can I get a shot of you sitting down Saturn? And the guys just stand?"
I nodded again and sat in the seat.
"It's giving gang princess. "
"Guess that's what I am now" I mumbled and they laughed . I sat my cup down near the chair.
"Aye you good?" I heard somebody whisper to me , turning my head to see one of Tooka's friends Carter I smiled and nodded weakly. "Aight"
"Get ready ... and" The flash clicked
"I wanna trun the lights out , Mike can you bring out the blue lights?"
The dude nodded and left out
"I like this" I lifted Carters black flag that was on his head and he smiled at me.
"Aye" Tooka eyed me and I put my hand down as the guy came back with the light.
"Alright... and..."
"Holup" Carter told them and the guys started passing around stacks . Carter pulled one out and gave it to me. "Hold it up"
The boy suggested I take some pictures for myself and I agreed. Before we left we chose to go out to eat at the Juicy Crab and I changed my outfit before leaving out.
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"I just feel like girls give head better" I pointed to myself trying to make a point.
"Youn lyin" They started saying.
"You got ate out by a girl?"
I nodded.
"So you gay?" Carter asked me.
"No , I jsut wanted to see how it felt.. a couple times . But then I got with my ex officially and allat stopped. "
They looked at eachother and back at me.
"You stayed tied down to one person?" Tooka looked at me sideways.
They were all staring at me like I was a foreign creature.
"Yes , I don't like messing with ninety niggas at once . And we have been on and off since we were fifteen. "
One of them fell out the chair and the others started choking.
"Huh?" Carter asked.
"What?"
"Fifteen? And you what , eighteen?"
"Yup"
"Aw hell" He put his head on his hand "I think imma blow. "
"You just made me full." Carter told me making Tooka chuckle.
I don't see whats so surprising about that.. I mean we didn't start having sex till I turned seventeen . Really only met him because he sold weed for a very long time.
"Damn , you solid"
"Always" I cupped my face. Carter started recording me.
He turned it off and typed something on his phone , then my phone ringed and I knew he must have tagged me.
I got in my phone and reposted the video and started scrolling posting my picture I took before we came in.
𝟑𝟏,𝟎𝟎𝟎 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞𝐬
𝟗𝟖𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬 defely defely.
𝐕𝐢𝐞𝐰 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝟗,𝟎𝟎𝟎 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭𝐬
𝐤𝐢𝐚𝐟𝐫𝐨𝐤𝐝𝐚𝐨 sorry for your loss pretty🙏🏾
𝐚𝐬𝐢𝐚𝐧𝐝𝐚𝐛𝐫𝐚𝐭 I know what its like , you will get through this babe 🤍.
𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐝𝐨𝐦 it's your fault
𝐥𝐚𝐮𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐥𝐨𝐧𝐝𝐨𝐧 Praying for you 🙏🏽💙.
𝟗𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬𝐨𝐟𝐠𝐚𝐧𝐢 We love you Satty! Stay strong babe.
"What are they talking about?" I looked up
They looked at their phones and gave me no answer. "Hello?"
"I-Lemme see your phone' Tooka tried to take my phone and I snatched it back.
I searched my call history and seen I had missing facetimes and calls from Keeno that I didn't see before.
"What the hell?"
Clicking on the very last voicemail it took a while before the recording started.
"....*sighs* i never thought i would do something like this . After all of these years I never would've thought I would lose you to a lie. Saturn I love you and I don't know what else I can do to show you that anymore , I've ran out of time . My love for you will only grow stronger and one of us will get hurt if i don't do this . I wanna say that I love you.." He started crying "And Imma miss your ugly ass , none of this is your fault. "
He was on speaker.
"I love you , and my baby ... i'm sorry ...
My body jumped at the gunshot from the other end and I broke down crying.
"Come on" Tooka got up and tried to grab me and I threw my phone down.
"NO NO LEAVE ME ALONE!" I screamed trying to get out of his hold.
All I felt was arms going around me and I was brought outside being put into someones car.
"LEAVE ME ALONE ! LET ME GO!".
He put me in the passengers seat and stood by the door so I couldn't run . Carter came and gave him my phone.
I was coughing with snot coming out my nose and tears running down my face.
"Leave me alone!" I hit him over and over. He grabbed my arms and put my face in his hands , I felt my chest heaving up and down.
"It's not your fault—"
"Yes it is" I hit the door and tried to kick him. "Let me go!"
"Sarturn you gotta calm down.." He told me.
I sat back and just let the tears fall as he took a tissue and wiped my nose.
"ew" He looked at the tissue disgusted snd tossed it on the ground while holding my face with his other.
Any time they tried to get me to calm down they had to hold my face.
hands could've been dirty wtf.
"It's not your fault Saturn , it was going to happen eventually and death is apart of life—"
"Huh..."
I squinted my eyes as my head got light . He let my face go backing away as someone bigger came into sight but it was a blur.
I passed out.
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𝗔𝘁𝗹𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗮 𝗚𝗮 — 𝙷𝙾𝚄𝚁𝚂 𝙱𝙴𝙵𝙾𝚁𝙴
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"Yeah I thinks it's time ..."
"Èske ou sèten Keeno?"
"Yeah ma , I can't lose her"
"Alright" She sighed and we hung up.
"You really ready to do this?" Mookie asked me. . I looked over the room and nodded standing up.
"Youn understand my love for her , i'm not ready to let go "
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if keenO and SATURN had a son what you think his would name be?
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