《THE JOURNEY》Chapter 1 The Awakening rewrite
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POV: MC
I open my eyes and see no one. I’m in the middle of a white room. Every thing is white but me I’m a light tan and my clothes are black.
(The land was quite beautiful) I thought
“I am dead aren’t I?” I said with certainty.
“No just sleeping” [???]a voice said in a slightly amused tone.
“Who said that?” I said in confusion.
“Look behind you, I am god” [God] the voice said still amused.
I turn around and I see an older man with a long white beard and hair wearing a white suit sitting behind the desk with a big grin on his face.
“I’m not dead but the fall should have killed me on landing. I also saw blood splash up?” I said in confusion.
“True but you killed this dragon rabbitbefore you died. Now you are stronger than you were by 10* and the two girls you saved are bringing you to their town. Their father is the town elder and the world you are in now has magic, monsters and trash empires” [God] he said with the last part in disgust
“Why am I here on this plant in the first place?” I said in confusion.
“A summoning in a different country some how threw you here, I don’t know how. I will check the book while you are here you now have a status screen that you can summon” [God] said taking out a book.
“Hum? It looks like you now have two wives” [God] said with a simile
“Why?” I said in confusion again
“It’s green elf tradition to marry the one of the opposite gender if you save their life and they are fine with multiple spouses” [God] said while looking for another book.
“Really?” I said in slight confusion.
“Yes so have fun with that” [God] said with a simile with a different book in hand.
“I’m going to check my stats now ok” I said with a slight grin.
(I hope they are beautiful) I thought.
“Ok” [God] said (oh they are) he thought with a simile.
Name:
Brandon Simonds
Race:
Human: Dragon: Rabbit
Age:
26/500,000
Level:
100,000
End:
1,000,000
Str:
1,000,000
Agi:
1,000,000
Cha:
100,000
Dex:
1,000,000
Con:
1,000,000
Luk:
1,000
Wis:
1,000,000
Int:
1,000,000
Res:
1,000,000
Spe:
1,000,000
Health:
200,000,000
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Mana:
Unlimited
Titles
Dragon slayer, world traveler, King of the forest
Skills
Dragons form
Master
Dragons breath
Master
Air jump
Master
Fire magic
Master
Air magic
Master
Light magic
Master
Dark magic
Master
shapeshift
Master
All Language mastery
Master
Earth magic
Master
Infantine storage
Master
Blood bath
Master
Core eater
Master
Analyze
Master
“What is this?!” I said in surprise
(Am I in god mode or something) I thought.
“Hm? Oh the stats you can thank the Drabit you killed for that” [God] said looking up from the book.
“Drabit?” I asked in confusion
“The dragon rabbit I’ll send you back now” [God] said like a teacher.
“Oh ok” I said in understanding
“Later” [God] said waving his hand
“Bye” I said waving my hand
POV: Nyla
I heard a noise I look at my husband to see him moving. I run down the hall looking for big sis Kalar. I tern around the corner and almost run into her.
“Nyla what’s wrong” [Kalar] said in concern.
“! Big sis he’s waking up” I said with energy.
“We need to greet our husband” [Kalar] said with urgency.
POV: MC
“Oh that stings a little bit that’s what I get for landing like that.” I said wincing from the pain
I wake up on an old wood cot with my back stinging. Then I hear the door opening to see two green elf women walk in they are gorgeous to the point that most models on earth would be jealous. The one with a darker green tint has an hour glass figure with a C size chest the other has lighter green tint and a slim figure and has an A to B size chest.
(These two are beautiful are they my wives)
“Hello my name is Brandon” I said getting up
“I’m Kalar” [Kalar] the dark green one said slightly blushing.
“Hi I’m Nyla” [Nyla] the other one said slightly blushing to.
“Good morning husband” [Kalar & Nyla] they said together with a heavy blush on both.
(Ha-ha take that world two beauties as wives.)
(Why are they blushing like that?). I look down to see my little solder in the open (oh no wonder those two are blushing I just flashed them). I tern and grab the sheet and cover my self in it.
“Good morning my beautiful wives. Are we in your home town?” I said blushing my self.
“Yes how did you guess where we are?”[Kalar] said in confusion
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“I spoke with god while I was asleep” I said with a shrug.
“Really?” [Kalar & Nyla] yelled in surprise
“Yes” I said while sitting on the cot
“He did speak with god” [???] a voce said from the doorway
“Father why are you here?” [Kalar & Nyla] they asked in confusion.
“I’m here to see my son-in-law”[??] he said looking at me.
“Hello I’m Marlos” [Marlos] greeted
“Hello father-in-law I’m Brandon” I said returning the greeting.
“You seem very calm about this?” [Marlos] asked with a raised eye brow.
“Well god told me what happened and your tribes tradition so why freak-out?” I stated
(and having two beautiful wives why freak-out)
“Good point, you have my blessings to have my two daughters” [Marlos] said smiling
While standing there Kalar and Nyla use analyses magic on me this is what they see.
Name:
Brandon Simonds
Race:
Human: Dragon: Rabbit
Age:
26/500,000
Level:
100,000
End:
1,000,000
Str:
1,000,000
Agi:
1,000,000
Cha:
100,000
Dex:
1,000,000
Con:
1,000,000
Luk:
1,000
Wis:
1,000,000
Int:
1,000,000
Res:
1,000,000
Spe:
1,000,000
Health:
200,000,000
Mana:
Unlimited
Titles
Dragon slayer, world traveler, King of the forest
Skills
Dragons form
Master
Dragons breath
Master
Air jump
Master
Fire magic
Master
Air magic
Master
Light magic
Master
Dark magic
Master
shapeshift
Master
All Language mastery
Master
Earth magic
Master
Infantine storage
Master
Blood bath
Master
Core eater
Master
Analyze
Master
“King of the forest?!” [Kalar & Nyla] yelled in surprise
“What?”[Marlos] yelled in surprise
“Yes that’s one of my titles now. I guess that drabit I killed was the former one. ” I stated with a shrug.
I stand there thinking on what to do next I guess I’ll analyze the girls.
Name:
Kalar Simonds
Race:
Green elf
Age:
260/1,000,000
Level:
1,000
End:
1,000
Str:
1,000
Agi:
1, 000
Cha:
10,000
Dex:
1,000
Con:
1,000
Luk:
1,000
Wis:
1,000
Int:
1,000
Res:
1,000
Spe:
1,000
Health:
200,000
Mana:
1,000,000
Titles
Forest King’s wife
Skills
Bow mastery
Expert 10/10,000
Healing magic
Master
Wind magic
Master
Water magic
Master
Green magic
Master
Earth magic
Master
Wild magic
Master
Analyze
Master
Name:
Nyla Simonds
Race:
Green elf
Age:
160/1,000,000
Level:
1,000
End:
1,000
Str:
1,000
Agi:
1, 000
Cha:
10,000
Dex:
1,000
Con:
1,000
Luk:
1,000
Wis:
1,000
Int:
1,000
Res:
1,000
Spe:
1,000
Health:
200,000
Mana:
1,000,00
Titles
Forest King’s wife
Skills
Bow mastery
Master
Sword mastery
Master
Staff mastery
Master
Green magic
Expert 10/10,000
Lance mastery
Master
Spear mastery
Master
Analyze
Master
“Green magic?” I ask in confusion
“Oh you analyzed your wives? Green magic is basically plant magic.”[Marlos] said like a teacher
“Yes the system says that green elves can reach one million years old?” I asked wanting to know more
“Yes the immortal forest is called this because of all the elves and other long lived races that live here” [Marlos] said in a teaching manner.
“What elves live in the forest?” I ask still wanting to know more.
“There’s us the green and there are red, blue, dark, and brown elves the brown ones interact with the school that’s over that way” [Marlos] said in a teaching manner.
He points toward the huge city I’ve seen while I was falling. So that was a school at some point I should go there but for now I’ll stay here. Then I get the feeling that some thing is out side.
“Let’s go outside and see what’s going on. But first I’m putting my cloths back on” I said starting to stand.
“We’ll wait outside the door” [Marlos, Kalar] said walking to the door.
“And ill help you get dressed” [Nyla] said while walking to me with a perverted grin.
“No you won’t” [Kalar] said growled grabbing Nyla’s shoulders.
“But I want to” [Nyla] said whined squirming in Kalar’s grip.
“No” [Kalar] said dragging Nyla to the door.
“Get dressed we will be waiting” [Kalar] said with a smile.
“Well I wonder what else is going to happen today” I said in curiosity.
When we get outside I see three white drabits running around the town. When they see me they stop running around and run to me and stare at me then they bowed and I get a system message.
King of the drabit’s title acquired
All drabit’s will obey your orders
“Really how did that happen?” I said shaking my head.
(Well that’s what I get for saying what else is going to happen.)
“They are so cute” [Kalar & Nyla] squeal both holding one.
Grand it looks like I’ve got guardians for my family.
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