《Avatar of Time》Rewrite
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I'm not happy with a lot of elements so far.
The early pacing is not what I want it to be. The litrpg elements overall doesn't really suit me. So far I have been posting chapter, only to edit them pretty heavily afterwards, not just fixing small mistakes i overlooked.
I will aim to try and improve my writing and only post chapters im happy with, as well as create a backlog of chapters that will allow me more room to change things before they go public.
Thank you for your time!
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Hacking Reality (A teenage Mad Scientist's story.)
Maya Williams was smart. For the first time however, she realized she might be a little too smart. At least if the fact that a gang had kidnapped her was any indication. But that didn’t matter, because she’d show them. She’d show them all!!! Just as soon as the voices in her head could agree on how to get out of this mess. --- Please Note: This is a version of a forum quest I run following a teenage Mad Scientest with heroic tendencies in the same city/setting as my other stories the Huntsman's Quest and Get Ink'd. Meaning that while a majority of the plot is made up by me, the major choices as well as what each chapter is about are usually made by the actual readers in forum votes. Additionally, given how this is essentially a story version of a Tabletop game there is also a background RPG system that while the characters aren't necessarily aware of, the readers can see these stats to know how each chosen 'Action' effects their character's development.
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Fables: The Forgotten Legends
....So it's that time of the year again? Where the adolescent dwarves challenge Usx once more, how many do you think will survive this time? We will soon see who possesses the strength to return to our kingdom alive Any feedback is greatly appreciated! Cover picture does not belong to me.
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Secrets of the Universe
What is strength before me? What is talent before me? What were you before? I am Chaos. The Destroyer of worlds. The God of Combat. The Purple Demon. The Akashic Eye. Do you want to be like me? It wasn’t an easy feat. How to be a badass? I can’t teach you that. I was born that way. Okay, I will compromise and teach you this time, but beware, the way of a badass is filled with obstacles. What are you waiting for? Read my book. Byeee.......*sighs* I am too lonely. Is this what it means to be unparalleled? I guess I will take a nap now. When will that youngster finish reading my book? Don’t keep me waiting too long, young lad.
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Vessel
A story of a hero, a boy, and the journey towards what should be a better future.It might be impossible to restore what has been lost, but perhaps something could be gained along the way.
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The Twin Chronicles
Two strangers connected by fate to become twins, one to be good one to be evil. A story of betrayal, death and war. Over a world that it not real! But to them it is home. Choose a side good or evil! And who decided what is good and what is evil.
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Love triangle (editing)
Terrell has a on and off girlfriend of five years named Tiffany. He also has a side piece of three years named Amani. He's in love with both and when he realizes Tiffany is starting to find things out he is deciding whom he wants to be with or if he wants to let both go.
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