《Controlling time in NARUTO》Ichiraku Ramen!
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This got Raoul thinking " Now that I have come to this world... It's only 6 years more and then the 3rd ninja war will start." As far as Raoul remembers, the war started after Sasori killed the 3rd Kazekage and all the villages started the war which also put Konoha in an awkward position as it was right in the center of the 5 villages.
After some while Raoul decided to go out for some time and explore this new world.
Raoul told Kakashi that he was going out for a while.
Raoul was feeling really good walking on the street, he did not need to live on the streets anymore nor did he need to fight for food. While walking, he saw the Hokage's building, the stone faces of the previous Hokage's. Raoul's personal favourite was Minato, although he was not yet the hokage but he was still a jounin.
Raoul also decided that this time he will not let many things happen such as the uchiha massacare and Kakashi falling into the deep road of regret he will also stop Kurama from killing Minato and Kushina so that they can live normally.
While walking Raoul saw a ramen shop, Naruto's favourite"ICHIRAKU RAMEN"and decided to go and have some.
After reaching he sat on the chair with a little difficulty and said "old man please. Get me a miso ramen and extra pork ramen"
"Yes , coming right up" said Teuchi.
While eating Raoul noticed a group of kids talking with each other. He instantly recognised the group, it was Uchiha Obito the boy who started war over a girl who didn't like him till he died, might guy the legendary red dragon, Kurenai the genjutsu user who trapped Itachi himself in a genjutsu, and Rin, due to whom the war started.
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Raoul thought while eating his ramen he thought " well not like I'm gonna make obito change he chasing holes over goals. I think I'll date Kurenai she would be a goddess in the future and had a good personality. I think?"
After eating ramen and paying for it he went back home after some exploring. While going home he heard people talk about him. People said things like "The younger one seems to be still mourning his death but here the older one is, not even not even standing with him."
Hearing this Raoul remembered about how Kakashi was depressed after Sakumo's death. He became a little arrogant and prideful. Kakashi was now not only a fictional character he was a real person and he also became his younger brother, there was no way in hell he was letting anything happen to Kakashi.
Raoul went back home, he went straight to his brother's room and say him sitting on the corner of the looking out the window towards the sky. Raoul decided to try and comfort him, well the only problem was that he was..... a little blunt.
After comforting him... or that's what Raoul thought he did, he heard a system notification
[Host is to be told that power of all the ninjas of the world has been doubled by the god]
"What the fu-" Raoul thought, after all he was still standing in front of Kakashi's room and cannot cuss in front of a four year-old atleast.
-A While Later-
On a mildly sunny day there was a group of students talking to each-other standing under the tree. They were Obito, Rin, Kurenai, Guy, Asuma and Raoul. Raoul in these two years became a part of their group, after all they are the future protagonists and he got close to Kurenai especially. Raoul was now 8 years old, he could increase his speed up to 4x now, meaning he moved at normal speed but the rest of the world move 4 times slower. He was now on the strength of a Genin and had to improve quickly in order to survive the war in 2 years. Kakashi was although very indifferent outside but at home, Kakashi also started removing his mask at home now. He was a Chunnin now and according to the original timeline he will become Jounin in 4 years.
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Raoul had not heard from the system since then and although he got stranger it was not enough. He used to hear people comment how the younger was sol talented that became the youngest Chunnin whereas the older was still in the academy. He was in the same class as Kurenai.
After talking to the group for a while, he returned to his house and started training. Before he started he checked his status.
"status" Raoul said
[Name : Raoul Hatake
Bloodline : Hatake
Talent : ninjutsu - 70 (out of 100. Someone like Kakashi has talent of 80)
Kenjutsu - 80
Tajustsu : 75
Genjutsu : 50 (NEW)
Species : Human
Strength : 34
Speed : 41
Intelligence : 46
Stamina : 31
Chakra : 69
Special ability : Time acceleration (time is the same for you but slows down for the rest. currently at 4x)
4 abilities locked
Jutsus : S-RANK
A-RANK
B-RANK
C-RANK
D-RANK : 6]
"OK So now I should focus quickly focus on getting stronger. Although after speeding up time I am the level of a normal Chunnin, it is not enough to survive in here" Raoul thought
That was when Kakashi came back from his mission, while the whole village used to say that Raoul was not talented, Kakashi knew the truth. He was always beaten by his Big Brother. He always used to ask him why he hid hid powers from everyone but Raoul never told him and always shrugged off the question.
"This is the last I will ask him this, if he tells then good otherwise whatever." thought Kakashi while he asked " Nii-san you are so strong, why do you hide your powers from everyone?"
Raoul after living with Kakashi for 2 years had started liking him a lot, he was a person who healed him. Raoul thought for a while and finally said " Hmm, although you are almost 7 years old now I think you should understand now."
Kakashi hearing this was very excited.
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