《The Torture System》Bullies
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" How come I didn't find anyone yet? Shouldn't this place be filled with cultivators? System? Why aren't you responding?"
System," Are you stupid? Can't see your in a fu*king forest. Once you get out of this forest, maybe then you might find some people."
" True. Wait... I see people! Yo buddies, how you doin?"
" Ahhhh. Our prey has come to us. It must be our lucky day heh.", said the stranger 1.-
" Yes, it truly is our lucky day. We already caught two people and the third one delivers himself to us...", said stranger 2.
" Uh... What are you guys talking about?"
" Nothing too important. How about you come with us to our 'house'. We'll answer all your questions once we get there.", said stranger 2.
" Uh... No thanks. My mom actually told me to me to go home early today... So I can't hang out with you guys. Bye."
" Don't worry about it. Just stay for a little bit then go home.", said stranger 1.
" I really have to go bye! (thinks) Goddam! How is my luck so bad? The first people I find on this new planet are trying to kill me."
System," Stop wasting your time trying to run. They're both in Muscle Refining Realm. They'll catch up to you in an instant."
" No... I don't want to die. All my hopes and dreams, I can't die!"
System," Well you don't have to. Just kill them and you'll be fine."
" Didn't you just say I wouldn't be able to beat them?"
System," Not exactly... By yourself, you definitely can't beat them. But with me around how can you get beaten by such weak nubs. How about this, I'll give you a special technique that I stole from this planet. it'll help you out greatly."
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" What do you mean? How can you steal something from a planet?"
System," Well, I stole a cultivation art from this planet's core. It seems that this cultivation art was so special that this world hid it in its core where no would go. And to be honest, this cultivation art really is quite good."
" Alright then, what are you waiting for? Gimme me it already."
System," Alright then, here you go."
Do you wish to learn Undying Body?
" Yes, I do. Why is nothing happening? System?! Why is nothing happening and what does this cultivation art even do?"
System," If you had read the details of the cultivation art before you learned it, maybe then you would've known. I'll tell you anyway since you are such a retard. Undying Body: Your body shall be strengthened by every hit you take. The more powerful it is, the stronger your body will get."
" The fu*k? Why do I need to get hurt to get stronger? Why do I feel like you're trying to hurt me, not help me?"
System," Look, buddy, this cultivation art has crazy potential. Even I can't tell how powerful it is. Usually, I would give it a rank between SSS-C grade cultivation art. But this art is too profound for the current me to understand."
" I knew it. You aren't that strong either."
System," Worry about yourself. You're about to get a beating by those two nubs."
" Whatever. It's time to see how effective this so-called 'special' cultivation art is. Yo buddies, come fight me if you're a man that is."
" Is this guy out of his mind? He doesn't even have a cultivation and he still dares to challenge us. It's time to show him who's the boss here.", said stranger 1.
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" Yep.", said stranger 2.
" Here goes nothing. (takes a few hits) Ahhhhhhhhh! That hurts so much."
System," Congratulations! Undying Body has leveled up, it is now level 1. Your body is equivalent to a Muscle Refining Stage 1."
" Dam. I already feel better. This cultivation is indeed overpowered. There's no way those two retards gonna kill me today. (gets beat up again)"
System," Congratulations! Undying Body has leveled up. Your body is now equivalent to Muscle Refining Stage 2."
" Holy sh*t! Another level that quick?"
" What the hell? He should be dead by now. And why are my hands starting to hurt?!", exclaimed stranger 1.
" Yeah. I thought he didn't he didn't have a cultivation. Yet he's able to survive for so long. Wait, why can't I sense his cultivation anymore?", asked stranger 2.
" No! This can't be?!", said stranger 1.
" What is it, senior brother?", asked stranger 2.
" He's also a Muscle Refining Stage 2 like us.", answered stranger 1.
" He must've been hiding his strength from the start. Well, it doesn't matter, it's a 1 v 2 anyway. Well beat him sooner or later.", said stranger 2.
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System," Congratulations! Undying Body has leveled up. Your body is now equivalent to Muscle Refining Stage 3."
" It took them so long this time. At first, they were giving me levels so quick. And now they're taking forever. What is the meaning of this System?!"
System," That's because you're stronger than them now. And that causes their attacks to have less of an effect on you. And so your Undying Body isn't leveling up as quick."
" Wow. To think that those tough looking guys are only so-so. They're already useless. You two over there!"
Both strangers reply," Yes?"
" Get out my sight or I'll kill both of you! You have exactly 10 seconds."
" We should escape senior brother! He's somehow Muscle Refining Stage 3 now.", said stranger 2.
" Your right. He is no longer someone who we can defeat.", said stranger 1.
" Where am I going to find more strong people now?..."
System," You know you can always kill some creatures or other beings and directly level up too."
" Why didn't you tell me that before? I wouldn't have let those useless bastards go if I'd known they had more use left..."
System," Also, just a heads up. There's an extremely powerful being in this forest. Even I can't tell what that person's cultivation is. You should leave this place as fast as you can."
" Alright, buddy. Whatever you say is my command lol."
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