《The Torture System》Slave
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" Zheng He, I command you to kneel down. From today on you will be my new slave.", said the powerful existence.
" System! Help me! I can't fight back at all. Don't let him capture me!"
System," You think I'm not trying? He's too fu*king powerful. No matter how I hard I try I can't do anything to him. I think he's in Soul Refining Realm. If he really is... No point in trying at all. Each realm is vastly different from the previous one. In Muscle Refining Realm your body is somewhat strengthened. It is after all the first realm of cultivation. (There are 9 stages to each realm btw) The next realm Body Refining Realm greatly increases your body's defense. And the next realm, the Soul Refining Realm lets you awaken your soul. You can use your soul to confuse others in battle and even attack and erase other people's souls. Once someone's soul is erased they will never be able to gain it again. Also after losing your soul, you will suffer great damage to cultivation. And you cultivation will drop very swiftly as well as your aging speed increases. That's why the Soul Refining Stage is so important."
" So you're saying I have 0% of surviving this calamity?"
System," Not exactly. He might not kill you... But one thing is for sure, you are completely under his control. But don't worry. Remember you have Undying Body? No matter what he does, you will slowly reach his realm. And once you do, you'll finally be free."
" What's are the chances that I'll actually be able to beat him one day?"
System," Your chances are quite low, to be honest. To be precise you have 0.001% of surviving this..."
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" I don't even have 1% chance... Is there even any point in trying?"
System," It's alright buddy, while you are under his control I'll try my best to upgrade myself to the next level as quick as I can."
" And how will that help me?"
System," Once I reach the next level I will be able to once again teleport you out of this world if necessary."
" I'll trust you on this one. But how long will it take you to get your upgrade?"
System," Well considering that if I go too fast he might notice me... It'll take me about 3 years."
" No... I'll be an old grandpa by then..."
System," You shameless bastard! You're only 18. Plus now that you reached Muscle Refining Realm your age limit has been increased. Since you are in Stage 3, your age limit is 300 years."
" Dam... I didn't know cultivators had such nice privileges. So what's the max age limit I can reach?"
System," Well, I suppose if you reach the peak of cultivation you can live forever?"
" Are you sure? Wouldn't that be too broken? I don't think the heavens would allow that though."
System," Well the heavens allowed me to be created. So there must be a boundary which gives you infinite lifespan."
" Well, now I have another reason to reach the peak of cultivation."
System," What was your first reason anyway?"
" My first reasons was actually 2 different things. The first thing is to make my own harem with infinite women in it. The second one was to dominate the whole universe and make everyone bow down to me."
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System," Wow. I should've known that you would ask for a harem. Your such a despicable man. You fu*ked Xia Fang's wife. He's the man who helped you turn from a homeless man into a man with shelter and money. You're the biggest disgrace of mankind."
" Relax buddy. Why you always have to bully me???"
System," That's because you have personality problems."
" Now you're going too far, dude. I know you don't have feelings and all but that doesn't mean you have to be so ruthless..."
System," Whatever. Also, I found another overpowered cultivation art in this planet's core, here check it out."
Judgement Day
Details: Brings forth divine light that burns away all opposing forces. But every time this skill is used, the person will have to face a tribulation personally made for them by the heavens.
" Holy sh*t! That move sounds so strong, but why do I have to face a tribulation? Especially a tribulation that the heavens personally made for me. Isn't that way too cruel?"
System," Well what did ya expect nub? You think the heavens are gonna let you wield such great power in a lower planet like this without any backlash?"
" Lower planet? What's a lower planet?"
System," I don't know either, it just came out of my mouth. But, I will know by the time I am done upgrading. It seems as I get closer to my upgrade, I learn about things that I didn't know about before. It's like I had some of my memories sealed and as I get more powerful I unlock more of my memories."
" That's cool and all... But how about you do something useful like kill this powerful existence?"
System," I can't beat him, even if I tried my hardest. That aside, he's approaching you."
" Who's approaching me?"
" I, your new master is approaching you.", said the powerful existence.
" How did I offend you anyway? I just came to this planet, so there's no way I could've done anything to piss you off."
" You didn't offend me. You just made me curious. You're the first human to come to this planet. That must mean you are very talented. But the question is how talented? I'll give you a great deal. If your talent meets the requirement you can become an official slave of mine but if you fail, I'll just torture with you until you die. Now let's see what kind of talent you have."
" No... If he finds out I have the lowest talent he'll start torturing me. I need to convince him that I'm really talented without letting him check for himself... But how do I do it?"
" Ah... It seems that you have F-Grade talent... But then how did you go from no cultivation to a Muscle Refining Stage 3 in just a few hours? Could it be that you have a special technique? Well, we'll find out sooner or later. Until then I'm going to torture you until I'm fully satisfied
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