《The Torture System》Torture
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" I need to escape... Who knows what that powerful existence is like. He might do weird stuff to me. I need to get out of here..."
" Were you missing me? Well, no worries. I'm back, and I've brought everything that we need to properly torture you. First, we are going to have you experience 10,000 degrees Celsius. If you can survive that then we'll up it a bit.", said the powerful existence.
" Are you crazy? No man can survive at such a hot temperature. Please, I beg you, don't do this to me!"
" Come on now. Don't be such a wuss. I have so many surprises for you, that's if you survive. I'll be back in an hour to check up on you. Until then enjoy yourself
.", said the powerful existence.
" Ahhhh! Too hot! Someone, please help me... I don't want to die like this..."
...
System," Undying Body has gained an attribute. Undying Body has gained fire resistance. You will not be affected by 1000 degrees Celsius or less."
" After all this time it only gained resistance to a tenth of what I'm facing. I won't be able to survive if that bastard increases the temperature again. I swear to the heavens, I will make this bastard suffer."
" Wow. It seems that you somehow survived. I wonder how? Well, it really doesn't matter. There's no way you'll survive in 100,000 Celsius or will you?", asked the powerful existence."
" You bastard! If I live through this I will make you suffer a fate worse than death!"
" I doubt it. Even if you do survive, how are you going to beat me with only a cultivation of Muscle Refining Stage 3? It's just not going to happen, so stop being so stubborn already. Also, before you die you should know my name... My name is Fang Zhi.", said Fang Zhi.
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" This pain... I will endure this... I must endure this. I will not die until I have my revenge on that bastard."
...
System," Undying Body has leveled up. Your body is now equivalent to Muscle Refining Stage 4. Undying body's fire resistance has been upgraded. Now you will not be affected by 10,000 degrees Celsius or less."
" Barely helping... It still hurts so much... This world is so unfair. Whoever I meet tries to kill me. No matter what, I will not die to that bastard Fang Zhi."
" I'm baack. Oh, you're still not dead huh? Quite the stubborn bastard aren't ya. Don't worry, I'm done torturing you now. I'll give you a painless death now.", said Fang Zhi.
" No... This bastard is going to kill me. System save me!"
System," Stop bothering me you useless fu*k."
" He's about to kill me. Stop messing around and come up with a plan to help me escape."
System," Don't worry, my upgrade is done. He can no longer harm you."
" The hell. If your upgrade is done then why aren't you teleporting me out of here?"
System," Well if you didn't realize, you gained not only a level but also fire resistance attribute to your Undying Body. I was hoping that guy would continue to help you become stronger."
" So when did you finish your upgrade?"
System," 4 hours ago."
" You asshole! You just made me suffer like this for no reason... Just teleport me out of here already!"
System," Alright, alright. Also, even though I can teleport you, I can't control where I send you."
" I don't care. Anywhere but this place is fine."
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System," Alright, just relax and let me take control of your body."
" Sure."
" What the hell? Where did that bastard go? He was in my hand a moment ago, but then he disappeared. It's as if he teleported... Whatever, he can't get that far with his cultivation anyway. It shouldn't take too long to find him.", said Fang Zhi.
...
" I'm finally safe. But, why do I feel so weak... Yo System, what happened?"
System," Well you see... I had a hard time teleporting you with your cultivation of Muscle Refining Stage 3. So I dispersed your cultivation and teleported you here."
" You destroyed my cultivation?!"
System," Well, yes. I had no choice. Fang Zhi was about to kill you and I was left with no other choice..."
" Wow... I had to suffer through so much pain to get to that stage and you just threw it away like that... Did I lose my Undying Body too?"
System," No. You only lost your cultivation. Everything else stayed."
" At least that stayed... Alright, I just need to find some strong people and have them beat me up. I'll get my cultivation back in no time. There's no one in this area... I guess I'll move around a bit and see if I can find anyone. (sees someone) Finally, I found someone. And they look quite strong too. Excuse me, can you help me out with something?"
" Sure, ask away.", said the stranger.
" I know this might sound absurd... But can you punch me as hard as you can?"
" What do you mean?", asked the stranger.
" I mean exactly what I said. I really need you to punch me as hard as you can."
" Are you out of your mind? Can't you see that I'm in Muscle Refining Stage 7? A simple punch from me can obliterate you, let alone a punch that I used my full strength for.", said the stranger.
" You don't understand. I really need you to punch me... Please do me this favor. Don't worry you can't kill me, you're too weak."
" I was talking to you, a person with no cultivation so politely, and yet you call me 'too weak'. You seriously want a beating, don't you? Get out my sight right now! Or I'll kill you.", said the stranger.
"(thinks to himself) Well if I ask him nicely he won't do it. But if I piss him off he might actually hit me... Well, I need to at least try. Yo, you're so weak that even if I stood still and let you attack me, you still wouldn't be able to do anything to me. "
" Wow, you really do wanna die. You can only blame yourself for pissing me off.", said the stranger.
" (thinks to himself) He's going to do it! I've struck gold. I wonder what level he'll bring me to?"
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