《The Torture System》Revenge
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" Now that we're back, I'll let you relax for a bit. I'll be back in 5 minutes until then you can prepare yourself for your punishment.", said Fang Zhi.
" Well, the System won't help me and Fang Zhi looks hella pissed. The chances of me surviving this are exactly 0%. Wait, what if his torture helps my Undying Body level up? Wouldn't that mean I have a chance..."
" I'm back. I know it hasn't been 5 minutes, but I just can't stop myself. I'm going to torture you personally. I'll consistently punch you while gradually increasing the strength behind each punch. But don't worry, I won't let you die that quickly. I have a crap ton of pills stored up for you. I'll use them to heal you right before you die, I'm going to do this until you go crazy.", said Fang Zhi.
"(thinks to himself) No way. I must've heard wrong... His so-called torture is like a blessing for me. He's volunteering to help my Undying Body level up, he's such a great man. But if he realizes that my power continuously increases after each hit, he might figure it out. System, can you hide my body's power from him?"
System," Yes, I can. But if I do, then it'll take me longer to power up."
" Ok, hide it anyway."
System," Alright, but if you run into trouble again don't blame me for not being ready quick enough."
" No worries buddy. Fang Zhi has volunteered to help my body reach new heights. How can I say no to such a generous offer?"
" Alright, time for your first punch.", said Fang Zhi.
" Aaaah!!!"
System," Congratulations. Undying Body as leveled up to level 12. Your body is now equivalent to Body Refining Stage 3."
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" Ah, that felt so good.", said Fang Zhi.
" (thinks to himself) Amazing! With one punch he brought me straight up to the next realm. Today is going to be the day I kill him, and he's going to be the reason why I was able to kill him."
" Take this pill, it'll heal you completely. Alright, it's time for the second punch."
" Fu*k this hurts so much more!"
System," Congratulations. Undying Body has leveled up to level 14. Your body is now equivalent to Body Refining Stage 5."
" I've never felt this good before. My body is getting so strong, so quick. It's like I'm in heaven."
" It seems that you're handling these punches better than you were at first huh? Alright, if that really is the case, I wonder how well you would handle a punch with my full strength in it. Will you be decimated or will you barely survive? Let's find out.", said Fang Zhi.
" This pain... It's way too much, I don't think I can survive... But I got this close, I can't die now..."
System," Congratulations. Undying Body has leveled up to level 18. Your body is now equivalent to Body Refining Stage 9."
" Amazing, you survived somehow. But it seems you're quite tired no? But I don't think you need any of those pills, you should do just fine without them... You barely survived from one punch launched with my full strength. But, will you be able to survive 1000 punches launched with my full strength?", asked Fang Zhi.
"(thinks to himself while being punched by Fang Zhi) Ahhh, I don't think I ever felt this good before."
System," Congratulations. Undying Body has leveled up to level 19. Your body is now equivalent to a Soul Refining Stage 1.
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"You're still alive? Impossible. There's no way you could've survived that many punches from me... You forced me, I didn't want to use my skills on you. But since you want to be such a persistent bastard, I'll just finish you off with my skills. Take my World Crushing Fist!", exclaimed Fang Zhi.
" That didn't hurt at all mate. Come on now, how can you call a skill 'World Crushing Fist' when all it does is itch them? I'm really disappointed in you buddy. Well, it's about time I kill you. No point in keeping a useless fu*k alive."
" No don't kill me please, I beg you-", begged Fang Zhi.
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