《The Gate of Wills》Chapter 2
Advertisement
Crow was huffing by the time they had reached a narrow river - no more than ten paces across. It ran through a half-crumbled wall that seemed to surround the ancient city, and there were even a few stone buildings on either side with intact roofs. A good spot to camp, but it still felt like a nightmare. He dived into new worlds to escape his own, but how was he supposed to level in this body? Funny how he hadn't noticed just how out of shape he had been until now. He was acutely aware of every glance that was sent his way, and there were more than a few. They had acquired a trail of newbies who didn't know what to do, which was another problem. Too sizable groups just meant that whatever they found would be shared with more people, and there would be more arguing. A group of five would have been ideal, but now there was close to a dozen.
"Are you sure we shouldn't set some snares? It would only take an hour," Thomas said.
Crow shook his head. "Water is important, but if we spend our time hunting for food then we won't have time for anything else. Hunting and foraging will become far easier once we have leveled." And hopefully, they would get to choose their avatar at an early level. He was still bothered by the fact that he couldn't open the menu. And neither could the others, judging by the constant complaints. "We should rest here."
"You mean you should rest here," Ramon said and mimicked Crow's panting. "Why are we even following you?"
Crow knew it had been coming. The fellow speaking was clad in a leather vest over a green t-shirt and jeans. He also had more piercings and tattoo's than Crow cared to count. His name might or might not be an alias, but he had been trouble from the start.
"You don't have to," Crow responded. He wished his voice would have been a little steadier. It wouldn't have been a problem if he had his usual avatar, but being in his real body made him insecure.
Advertisement
Ramon walked up to Crow and looked him up and down contemptuously. "How would you level? You'd only be in the way." Ramon smirked at him as if he had won a victory when Crow didn't reply and walked away.
"I'm goin' to explore the city," he called over his shoulder. "Anyone who wants to come," he paused to look at Mel," follow me."
Most of the people turned to follow him, and some laughed at the confrontation.
Crow's heart was thumping like mad in his chest. He would have been able to handle it with an avatar, but he had lost his confidence in his own body. It didn't help that he was sweating more than anyone else, and still panting besides. Oh well, at least he wouldn't have to suffer this for much longer - he just had to wait until the system was fixed and rebooted.
Ramon paused when Mel and Thomas didn't move. "It'll be better for you with me," he said, showing some uncertainty for the first time.
"Thanks, mate," Thomas said, "but we will stay here."
Ramon gave Crow another glare before walking away with the others, while loudly proclaiming that the first elf maid they found was his. The others laughed, and together they walked into the city along the riverbank.
"Why did you let him get away with that?" Mel said, making Crow jump. He hadn't noticed her walking up to him. "Now they think you're a coward. Don't disappoint me like that, I thought you knew what you were doing."
Crow stared at her in surprise. She had been calm and collected through their entire walk, but now her eyes blazed.
"Toughen up," she said when he didn't respond and walked over to the river.
Crow couldn't help but agree inwardly, which made him even more depressed.
Thomas appeared, pushed a stick into a patch of soft dirt and put a stone in the shadow. "This was how you did it, right?" he said and winked at him.
Advertisement
Crow replied that yes it was, but was still burning with shame. What was Kalon doing? They should put the servers offline. Even they wouldn't trap players like that. They shouldn't even be able to. There were keywords which you could use to bypass their programs and go offline, but they weren't working either. The more Crow thought about it, the more he realized that there was some deeper problem at work. Of course, there was an exception to the rule in case a player got injured and couldn't speak or move, in which case you could deactivate your own sense-wear through your own implants, but that didn't work now either, which was the only thing that really worried him.
He walked over to the river, lay down flat on his belly and reached down with one hand to scoop up water. It tasted fresh and clean, which was something at least.
Thomas knelt down next to him to drink as well. "Should we go into the city as well? Maybe we can find something useful there."
Crow frowned. Maybe there would be NPCs with quests there, but then there would be a rush as everyone tried to complete the same one at once.
"Let's go and level up first," Crow said. "Maybe we can find some coins so we can buy something once we get back."
He, Mel, Thomas, a young boy named Loran, and a lanky one named George walked toward the wall. Crow glanced suspiciously at some flowers with red stalks and green flowers. Had they just moved? Perhaps they were poisonous. He came to a sudden stop at the thought. If the menu didn't work, then maybe the pain thresholds wouldn't be lowered either. He hoped fervently that such wasn't the case, but it had to be tested. He walked over to a nearby tree and punched it. And yelped at the sudden rush of pain. It definitely hadn't been lowered.
"What the hell are you doing?" Thomas cried out. But he just nodded slowly when Crow explained, his brown eyes studying him thoughtfully. "So we need to be careful then, huh?"
Crow rubbed his knuckles sourly. He shouldn't have punched so hard. "Yes, we do," he said.
They found a part of the wall which had long since crumbled, and big rocks lay strewn across the opening. They made their way across carefully - a sprained ankle would be awkward here. Despite all the troubles, Crow found himself looking forward to how the leveling system worked. That feeling of getting steadily stronger was one of the main reasons which he came back to play new vrmmorpg:s.
A wide gentle plain with clumps of trees and brush stretched out before them once they had exited the city, and far away, but within walking distance, there was a forest. The river snaked its way through, heading through the city perpendicularly.
They looked at each other, shrugged, and started walking across it toward the forest. The sun stood high and was baking them mercilessly, and sweat started beading Crow's forehead again.
It didn't take them long before they reached the treeline, which looked incongruous with normal trees mixed with others in a wide variety of colors and shapes. They followed the river's path and soon came to an area where the grass was low and tree limbs were bare.
"What happened here?" Loran, a boy of no more than fifteen, asked.
"Some sort of herbivore," Crow responded. "Or maybe a disease." It still made him uneasy to see the trees tower over him like living skeletons.
"Hey, there is slime on the ground," Thomas said. "It goes this way," he said and hurried away from the river.
"Wait, we don't have weapons," Crow protested, but Thomas didn't stop and neither did the others. Crow sighed. He had done similar things when he was new as well. He just hoped that the slimy things weren't fast.
Advertisement
- In Serial14 Chapters
Shift (Ben 10+DCU Fanfiction)
Omnitrix+ DCU, what's not to like? The main character will not be Ben Tennyson, rather someone from our world who gains the Omnitrix Hello! This fanfiction Shift is what I wanted to do for an homage to what I thought were underrated pieces of media, Ben 10 and some DCU characters. However, I would be remiss if I didn’t add context to two of the major works that inspired Shift, Dial, and A Practical Guide to Evil. Dial is another ben 10 fanfiction, however that story takes place in the MCU, and with an adult that is already a grown-up at the beginning of the story. Dial, by my own accounts, is more superficially Like shift, even though the Omnitrix is a central device in both. My protagonist starts out around 18 years old, so is less serious and can build relationships with some of the junior justice league members, and then later on in the story meet the Justice League officially. The tone will be more light-hearted at the beginning of the story as teenagers are known to use sarcasm and jokes at each other’s expense. Furthermore, in Dial, the protagonist has a well-developed knowledge of the MCU which he uses to have knowledge on events and characters, that the character in Shift will not have. While the MC will have some knowledge of people's abilities, lesser-known characters and people's real identities will be not included as much, but the MC of Shift will have some knowledge. APGTE's influence is deeper than Dials'. The epigraphs at the beginning of every chapter are an example of that, a place for light-hearted jokes and worldbuilding that's not pure exposition, but I also want to incorporate narrative stories to Shift (heroes win more than lose, providence, etc) on a lighthearted scale. While the heroes of Shift will have to work to win against villains, the MC of Shift will be allowed limited precognition, through narratives tropes and archetypes as a trade-off of less knowledge of the DCU. For example, a villain a hero faces might monologue, but the MC will not instinctively know how to counter every villain they encounter. I also wanted to bring in more realism than usual superhero stories, ie: the MC cannot just walk and have a meeting with Batman or Superman, he would have to “work his way up” in terms of credibility and whatnot. The Aliens that show up in Shift I tried to make different than the ones in Dial, just to share the love for lesser-known characters. And to make it fairer for the villains of the DCU, the main character will not wantonly use if gain at all an Alien X or a ben 10 form of Kryptonians, just so the characters have to work a little bit for victory. I urge anyone reading to consider checking out both APGTE and Dial as they are both amazing works, and I hope you enjoy them. The beginning of how the MC enters the DCU will not be as important as him actually existing in that universe, so that is why a ton of time is not spent on that part of the story. Chapters will be around 2.5 thousand words and come out around every weekday.
8 109 - In Serial31 Chapters
Metal Lich
Here ends this novel. I want to start another novel in another world with the same character to give me an opportunity to continue growing thanks for following me and I hope you like the next novels more than this one, thanks for the comments and for following me. ................................... He was a college student in an era when the technology was so advanced that MMORPGs can be played with augmented reality. When suddenly mad king with the power of a God, he speak to him directly to his mind. He told him that everyone's life would change. With which they are empowered to become a fantasy character while they are submerged in a zombie apocalypse. However when he is in the middle of his first battle, he is lose against zombies and he is forced to survive with only one head.
8 108 - In Serial47 Chapters
DM • JB
//In which Justin Bieber DMS an Instagram famous model // @JustinBieber liked your photo @JustinBieber started following you @JustinBieber sent you a message
8 174 - In Serial9 Chapters
Tomorrow Girl in Bismarck
Tomorrow Girl was almost part of the greatest superhero team of all time then the universe was destroyed. She is now in the boring non-superhero world of Bismarck North Dakota. The events of this story are true. It occurred in North Dakota in 2010. The names have been changed to protect the victims. Everything else has been told exactly as it happened.
8 197 - In Serial24 Chapters
I Love You to the Moon and Back.Isen x reader
It's just a normal day at Wellston when John's long lost sister shows up. She was taken by their mother so she could be trained and master her ability to use her as a secret weapon for Ember. She is on the run from her mom and keeps here power a secret to keep her safe. She soon takes interest to her friend Isen. Will they fall in love, or will her mother find her, and take her away again.
8 207 - In Serial94 Chapters
Kindergarten
Jungkook is a kindergarten teacher and Taehyung just so happens to be a parent of a cute little girl he teachesDedicated to MinTheAlien
8 228

