《The Gaang reacting to ALTA》King of omashu
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Me: ok guys 5 episode of Alta u ready
All: yea!
Suki: ok let's see so meet Aang and katara and sokka and Zuko went to southern air temple Zuko beat Zhao in a Agni Kai. We went to kyoshi island where we meet me Aang showing off for girls katara being annoyed and being a little jealous for some reason 😏 and they left and yea.
Me: yup basically. 👍
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Avatar the last airbender
Book 1: water
Chapter 5: king of omashu
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Aang: oh we're going to meet-
Me: shhhh
Zuko: king bumi.
Me: wait how-...... u know what I know how u know but still SHHHH.
Aang: ok sorry.
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"The Earth Kingdom city of Omashu!
I used to always come here to visit my friend, Bumi."
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Zuko looked at me like this 😏and said: called it.
Me: yea yea
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"Wow. We don't have cities like this in the South Pole."
"They have buildings here that don't melt!"
"Well, let's go slow pokes! The real fun is inside the city!."
"Wait, Aang! It could be dangerous if people find out you're the Avatar."
"You need a disguise."
"So, what am I supposed to do? Grow a mustache?"
Then shows a mustache and zooms out with Aang with an appa wig and fake mustache.
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Toph: hahahaha u look terrible.
Aang: yea I know.
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"Ohh, so itchy! How do you live in this stuff?"
"Great! Now you look just like my grandfather."
"Technically, Aang is 112 years old."
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Zuko: oh yea...
Suki: I keep forgetting that u were twelve so does that make u 113 now.
Aang: yup I'm 113 year old stuck in a 13 year old body.
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"Now let's get to skippin', young whippersnappers! The big city awaits." He says in a old guy voice
Shows some angles of omashu.
"You guys are gonna love Omashu. The people here are the friendliest in the world." Back in his normal voice
"Rotten cabbages! What kind of slum do you think this is?"
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Toph: yea sounds pretty friendly to me.
Zuko: how is that- ohhh.
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The guards earthbend the cabbages off the ledge
"Noo! My cabbages!"
(Cabbage-1)
"Just keep smiling..."
"State your business!"
He puts a rock over aang's head.
"My business is my business,young man, and none of yours!" The guards drop the rock right next to sokka and katara "I've got half a mind to bend you over my knee and paddle your backside!" Sokka and katara freak out-ish and katara shakes her head.
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Toph: twinkle toes ur crazy.
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"Settle down, old timer. Just tell me who you are."
"Name's Bonzu Pipinpadaloxicopolis, the Third, and these are my grandkids."
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Zuko: where did u get that name from?
Aang: I don't know it just came out of my mind.
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"Hi, June Pipinpadaloxicopolis. Nice to meet you."
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Zuko and suki had a shock expression
Zuko: how did-
Suki: how did you say that without stuttering
Katara: it was easy just say Pipinpadaloxicopolis
Suki: pipinpadlzipicoslos ugh pipinpadlzipicoslos
Katara: try Zuko.
Zuko: pipindalcipicoupolos ughhh pipindalcipicoupolos
Toph: hahahahaha
Zuko: like u can do better.
Toph: challenge accepted.
Toph: pipinpadlzipicoslos ugh
Zuko: see. He had a smug face.
Toph: hold on sparky I get a second chance too.
Zuko: fine
Toph:Pipinpadaloxicopolis ha in ur face
Zuko: >:
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"You seem like a responsible young lady."
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"See that your grandfather stays out of trouble. Enjoy Omashu!"
"We will."
"Wait a minute!"
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Suki: oh no.
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"You're a strong young boy.
"Show some respect for the elderly and carry your grandfather's bag."
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Suki: hahaha lol
Aang: what's lol?
Suki: oh she taught me that she points at me.
Me: yea it means laugh out loud. But usually people don't actually laugh out loud when they say this.
Katara: then why say it?
Me: I don't know I just say cause I can and it's just a normal response and all.
Katara: ok...?
Me: try it.
Katara: lol
Aang, toph,sokka and Zuko: lol
Me: so?
Katara: eh
Me: just use it if u want.
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"Good idea!"
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They open the gates.
They walk through and while closing the gates momo ears pop out and the guard looking surprised
"This is the Omashu delivery system. Miles and miles of tubes and chutes. Earthbending brings the packages up and gravity brings them down."
"Great, so they get their mail on time."
"They do get their mail on time..."
"but my friend Bumi found a better use for these chutes..."
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Toph: like what.
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Flashback we se a boy.
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Suki: what's this?
Me: aang's flashback
Sokka: cool. Lol
Katara: sokka that's not how u use I-
Sokka: yea yea.
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"Look around you, what do you see?"
Then turns it Aang.
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Suki:Look 100 years ago Aang.
Toph: looks the same.
Aang: what do u expect?
Toph: I don't know.
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"Umm... the mail system?"
"Instead of seeing what they want you to see...you gotta open your brain to the possibilities."
"A package sending system?"
"The world's greatest super slide!"
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Toph: that's sounds like fun.
Aang sure is.
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"Bumi, you're a mad genius!" Bumi laughs
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Suki: wait that's king bumi!?
Aang: yup
Zuko: I see his laugh is the same.
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Then transitions to bumi and aang riding it.
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Suki: that looks fun.
Sokka: yea nope.
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"One ride, then we're off to the North Pole, Airbender's honor."
"This sounded like fun at first, but now that I'm here..."
"I'm starting to have second thoughts!"
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Toph: welp too late.
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Too lazy to describe. We see spears on the side and them going ahead the spears getting closer.
"I'm on it!" Then they go off course
"Men, you'll be going off to combat soon.It's important that you be prepared for anything."
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Toph: I'm sure u weren't prepared for that.
Suki: ouch
Katara: yea my face hurts looking at it.
Aang: ha sorry Katara.....
Katara: eh it's fine.
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They break through some stuff
"Aang, do something! Use your airbending!"
"Yeh! Good idea! That'll make us go even faster!"
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Toph:🤦♀️ I don't think that's what she meant twinkle toes.
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As they descend they see another chute they scream but the guy earth bends it out but another one comes and they scream again.
They knock the other one out then they fall out but aang air bends everyone back. Then they land on roofs then we see a guys with a pot.
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Suki: oh no.
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Then they crash in and the pot breaks then out again.
"Sorry!"
Then they land momo gets coauthor in a fight and momo wins then falls.
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Suki: Hey it's that guy but I thought that he got his cabbages out.
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They crash on his cabbages.
"My cabbages! You're gonna pay for this!"
"Two cabbages please."
Then changes scene to king bumi place then pans to king bumi.
Then king bumi recognizes Aang
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Suki: look king bumi and he recognizes u Aang.
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"Your majesty, these juveniles were arrested for vandalism... traveling under false pretenses and malicious destruction of cabbages."
"Off with their heads! One for each head of cabbage!"
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Zuko: but they are only three that would not be enough.
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"Silence! Only the King can pass down judgment. What is your judgment, Sire?"
Sokka tried to give a crying face
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Toph: hahahahah that's the best u can do
Sokka: hey I think it was pretty good.
Toph: yea nope.
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Katara tried to give a innocent look by smiling
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Toph: yea sugar queen like that will work
Katara: hey I tried.
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Aang just looked sad-ish but more like guilty Idk how to explain.
Aang whistles
"Throw them... a feast!"
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Zuko,suki and toph: huh?
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"Huh?"
"The people in my city have gotten fat from too many feasts...so I hope you like your chicken with no skin."
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Sokka: I'm hungry.
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"Thanks, but I don't eat meat."
"How about you? I bet you like meat."
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Suki: sure does.
Sokka: yum chicken
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"Is it just me, or is this guy's crown a little crooked?"
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Aang: no he just bumi.
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"So, tell me young bald one. Where are you from?"
"I'm from... Kangaroo Island."
"Oh, Kangaroo Island, eh? I hear that place is really hoppin!"
Awkward silence and sokka laughs.
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Sokka: hahaha! lol
Katara: now that's how u use it.
Sokka: I actually mean it. It's pretty funny.
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"What? It was pretty funny."
"Well, all these good jokes are making me tired. Guess it's time to the hay." He throws chicken at aang.
"There's an airbender in our presence and not just any airbender, the Avatar! Now what do you have to say for yourself, Mr. Pipinpadaloxicopolis?"
"Okay! You caught me. I'm the Avatar, doing my Avatar thing, keeping the world safe. Everything checks out, no firebenders here. So, good work everybody. Love each other, respect all life and don't run with your spears. We'll see you next time!"
"You can't keep us here. Let us leave."
"Lettuce leaf?"
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Zuko: ugh
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"We're in serious trouble. This guy is nuts."
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Aang: maybe a little.
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"Tomorrow the Avatar will face three deadly challenges. But for now, the guards will show you to your chamber."
"My liege, do you mean the good chamber, or the bad chamber?"
"The newly refurbished chamber."
"Wait, which one are we talking about?"
"The one that used to be the bad chamber, until the recent refurbishing that is. Of course, we've been calling it the new chamber, but we really should number them. Uh, take them to the refurbished chamber that was once bad!"
"This is a prison cell? But it's so nice."
"He did say it was newly refurbished."
"Nice or not, we're prisoners."
"I wonder what these challenges are gonna be."
"We're not sticking around to find out. There's gotta be some way outta here."
"The air vents!"
"If you think we're gonna fit through there then you're crazier then that king."
"We can't, but Momo can." The we see momo stuffed licking an apple.
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Suki: yeaaa.. I don't think so.
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"Momo, I need you to find Appa and bust us outta here!"
He tries to put momo through
"Go on, boy, get Appa!"
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"Eh, how was Appa supposed to save us anyway?"
"Appa is a ten ton flying bison, I think he could figure something out." He says while momo is stuck trying to get out.
"Well, no point in arguing about it now.Get some rest, Aang. Looks like you'll need it for tomorrow."
They all go to bed.
A guard earthbends a door and aang wakes up
"Sokka! Katara! Where are my friends?"
"The King will free them if you complete your challenges."
"And if I fail?"
"He didn't say. Your staff please?" Then he gives the staff
"First, Avatar, what do you think of my new outfit? I want your honest opinion."
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Zuko: nope
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"I'm waiting."
"I... guess it's fine."
"Excellent! You passed the first test."
"Really?"
"Well, not one of the deadly tests. The real challenges are much more... challenging."
Then aang air bend runs
"I don't have time for your crazy games! Gimme my friends back! We're leaving!"
"Ohh, I thought you might refuse..."
"so I will give your friends some special souvenirs."
"Those delightful rings are made of pure genemite, also known as creeping crystal. It's crystal that grows remarkably fast. By nightfall your friends will be completely covered in it. Terrible fate, really. I can stop it, but only if you cooperate."
"Ah! It's already creeping!"
"I'll do as you want."
Then changes location and scene.
"It seems I've lost my lunch box key and I'm hungry.Ooo, there it is. Would you mind fetching it for me?"
Aang goes through jumping through the rocks goes in the waterfall goes through tries to fight the current and climb up.
"Ooo, climbing the ladder. No one's thought of that before."
Aang falls and is almost impaled.
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Aang goes at it again, takes a moment to look then dives in but falls out and hits a rock and could have called but hangs on before he could.
"That's right. Keep diving head in, I'm sure it'll work eventually."
Aang looks at the key and then breaks off the rock with his hands.
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Suki: How were u able to break the rock like that?
Aang: I don't know I guess I'm pretty strong. :)
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Throws the rock then airbends it to make it go faster then it broke the chain of the key then gets pinned to the space above bumi.
"There, enjoy your lunch! I want my friends back, now!"
"Uh, not yet. I need help with another matter. It seems I've lost my pet Flopsy."
Changes scene
"Okay, found him!"
"Bring him to me! Daddy wants a kiss from Flopsy!"
"Come here, Flopsy!" Then a big animal comes out and then "flopsy" runs
"Flopsy, wait! Flopsy!"
"Flopsy!" They get chased by the big animal then aang tries to get "flopsy" but "flopsy" escapes
"Wait a minute?"
"Flopsy?" The flopsy stops and wiggles his tail. Then carries Aang and licks him.
"Flopsy!"
Then aang runs is belly. Then bumi whistles then flopsy runs.
"Awww, that's a good boy! Yes, who has a soft belly?" Why rubbing his belly.
"Guys, are you okay?"
Other than the crystal slowly encasing my entire body, doing great." Then sokka's grows in even then sokka falls
"Awww, yes."
"Come on. I'm ready for the next challenge."
"Your final test is a duel and as a special treat you may choose your opponent."
A guy with a scar and swords come out. Then Aang looks scared.
(I had to change channel it's the official Alta YouTube channel)
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Then I guy with metal and bigger with a huge axe looking thing comes out.
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Sokka: hey that guy is like who- um um oh yea combustion man. I had another name what was it?
Katara: u mean sparky sparky boom man?......
Sokka: yea there sparky sparky boom man. He looks like that except with out his eye thing.
Aang: yea he does.
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"Point and choose."
"So, you're saying whoever I point to, that's the person I get to fight?"
"Choose wisely."
"I... choose..."
"you!"
"Wrong choice!"
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Zuko: yea.
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Bumi stand up straight then revels himself. And aang looks scared then bumi earthbends him out and into the ring then bumi jumps in and aang looks scared and shocked.
"You thought I was a frail old man...but I'm the most powerful earthbender you'll ever see."
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Toph: yea for now.
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"Can I fight the guy with the axe instead?"
"There are no... take-back-sees' in my kingdom. You might need this!" They throw his staff and aang gets it He earhbends at aang, aang dodges.
"Typical airbender tactic,avoid and evade.I'd hoped the Avatar would be less predictable."
He earthbends aang dodges
"Don't you have any surprises for me? Sooner or later, you'll have to strike back." He earthbend sorta hits aang. Aang falls and his staff goes somewhere else. Aang gets up runs bumi earthbends the floor but aang dodges except for the last one
"Oh, you'll have to be a little more creative than that!" Aang air scooters around then sends a big airbending SLICE but bumi blocked it.
"Did someone leave the windows open? It feels a little drafty in here! Are you hoping I'll catch a cold?" Then bumi earthbends at aang which aang tries to dodge but fails then bumi earthbends again then dodges and jumps off the wall the grabs his staff
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