《Ghost - A Star Trek Story》Situational Awareness
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A splash of water and a spray of droplets flew all around Cr’oa as he left the creek behind him. He hoped he was far enough to avoid being found. He turned his head looking down the creek to see any movement. Nothing, just as he wanted. Ahead of him was a thick forest with thin trees and bushes at the base of the mountain. Its steep incline left very little doubt either a very impressive climber would only be able to get up the side right here, or all others would be forced to go around in either direction and find a new route.
Cr’oa worked his legs which were just as tired out of the water as they were when he was swimming. The break he was getting by walking gave his limbs some rest but their strength had not returned yet. He chose a path that was likely that he would be able to go from rock to rock. Surely his younger siblings would not be able to follow him.
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J’Tal and S’Grirr led Hr’af to their brother. The two of them were constantly on the look for paw prints, smelling Cr’oa’s scent, and taking note of any changes in the direction. The wind was blowing sideways which did not help them at all. S’Grirr called out. He chose this way for a reason and I can see why. The three of them looked in the direction they were sure Cr’oa was going. The base of the mountain was very rocky. Footprints were going to be hard to track if he didn’t leave any.
Does this mean you give up? Hr’af was standing over the two of them as they made up their mind. J’Tal pressed forward but S’Grirr stood still. What about the creatures you talked about? Aren’t they out here as well? S’Grirr shied away from Hr’af knowing it wasn’t right for a hunter to be afraid but if he wanted to be honest to himself and to his brother, he wasn’t sure he had it in him.
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They exist but it’s not supposed to be the time for them to be awake. The ones in the old stories are all nocturnal. We shouldn’t have any worries for a few more hours. Besides I am right here, what could happen with me at your side. Hr’af started to walk ahead of S’Grirr letting his words give confidence to the young Caitian.
S’Grirr sat for a moment thinking about the scary stories that he had heard and in all of them, they all started with storms, night, or up in the high mountains. Their families had left the upper mountains long ago and they now resided at the base of the mountain.
J’Tal scurried through the rough terrain as if she knew every rock along the way. Her sense of smell was superior to S’Grirr’s Cr’oa had indeed come this way. Every so often she would find a bit of fur or a partial print in a spot too far for Cr’oa to hide his tracks along the rocky surface. The sound of water ahead was getting louder. A rushing creek stretched in both directions.
The two triplets searched heavily on their side of the creek trying to find where Cr’oa went. The two of them determined he went into the creek. But which way? Across? Downstream? Upstream?
Hr’af waited for them to decide their course of action. He went into the river here J’Tal looked upstream then down. S’Grirr came up beside her. He went downstream. J’Tal shook her head. No he went across. She jumped in and swam across to the tracks Cr’oa had made. See he went this way. S’Grirr was still sure he did not go across he jumped over to take a look for himself.
He reached the other side watching the tracks and seeing it for himself he growled in anger. J’Tal gave a smug laugh and started to try to find his scent. S’Grirr barked wait, it’s a trick, you are dripping with water and it’s all over the place, why arent these rocks or the ground covered in water after he left? Hr’af watched impressed with the assessment.
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S’Grirr thought about it, downstream would put more distance between them and upstream would keep them closer together. He went downstream. He knows we are all looking for him and I am the weakest and you wouldn’t leave me behind. J’Tal agreed and they worked their way downstream.
At the base of the mountain
Cr’oa jumped from one rock to another up the side of the mountain. The leaps he was taking were not necessary but he wanted to make sure his feet didn’t leave any sign he was there.
Above him a hungry Hucore open its many toothed mouth. The remnance of its latest victim still falling out of its teeth. Its fur shaded red by blood tracking what was surely going to be an easy meal.
Cr’oa was huffing and puffing as he worked hard to move up the mountain. He seldomly stopped if only to gauge his next move. As he reached his next rock he noticed a reflection. It was faint but it still caught his eye. He froze watching carefully not to attract any attention from down the mountain or whatever it was above him.
The Hucore did not know it had been spotted, its prey stopped just below him and just sat there. Even though it had just eaten, it was still hungry. It shifted slightly in its spot and lunged forward.
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. But the bustling city has few opportunities for the traditionalist. For the old sword clans are fading. With the rise of alchemy, gold can purchase strength that ordinarily took years of training to cultivate. Sword artists, once rare and accomplished, are quickly growing in number, especially among the wealthy noble class. Even with such alchemy, though, no one has advanced to the rank of Grandmaster in countless years. Talen's true dream is to walk the path of a sword artist to the very end while fulfilling his clan duties. And then the Swordgeists return, fabled founders of all sword arts, gods who had touched the world long ago and vanished. These myths turned into reality warn of a coming threat. Alongside this warning, they issue an invitation to the Sword System Academy, a path to power beyond the mortal realm. But first, they will hold an entrance exam... Story notes:Sword System Academia blends elements of western and asian fantasy such as xianxia and litrpg. I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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