《Ashes of Hell》Chapter 21 - The smiling uncertainty - Part 1
Advertisement
Nestor slowly crawled toward the fountain at the center of the training grounds. His whole body was in pain, aching from both the bruises and his tired muscles, strained by the run.
The hot sand surrounding him would occasionally gain a dark stain, as it absorbed his falling fluids. The fresh, water felt extremely reinvigorating, slipping down his throat it cooled down his mind.
'How am I still able to move is a mystery I can only explain through this miraculous fountain. Even if It doesn't give immediate benefits, it must have some kind of passive effects all around as the whole group must be benefitting from it.'
During the second hour of training, Nestor noticed how ridiculous was for non-trained humans to be able to keep running for so long, with weights on their shoulders too.
Thus he thought of the fountain being the culprit behind their enhanced stamina. However, that was simply the most obvious deduction. For once, he wasn't giving much credit to their innate instincts, for survival, to avoid the pain that falling behind would bring upon them.
Even more, he couldn't attribute it to the power of their soul, still slumbering within their bodies, yet somewhat effective.
Nonetheless, everything had a limit, and the trainees started to fall, one by one. The mental fatigue they had accumulated was too much to handle, as they wouldn't experience a short blackout anymore, but instead would enter an indefinite state of torpor.
Captain Cole would often have a faint smile every time one of the cadets entered such a condition. He then would stop bother for said person, leaving them on the ground.
'He gave me the creeps earlier, if someone stayed unconscious for more than ten minutes they would be woken up by a quick lash. Yet know he seems to have stopped doing so, maybe this isn't a simple training after all.'
For him the second and third hours of training had passed incredibly fast, one after the other, increasing the weights on their shoulders and chipping away at both his physical and mental faculties.
Advertisement
The only thing he knew was to keep going. Meanwhile, the group of five that kept him the company had fallen, together with two of the eastern tricksters, only the more robust member of the trio still held on.
Surprisingly enough, the female elf had also suddenly collapsed. The elegant duo had kept on the same pace through the whole race, keeping their distance from both the leading and bottom group. Thus they managed to avoid Captain Cole's whip.
By the pale hue of their skin, one would imagine them being weak to long exposure to the sun. Here there was none, yet the sand was hot and intense lighting had been coming from all around the rack.
Marco and Nessa were at their limits as well, as the small Isaac had a kid-sized leather backpack locked on his shoulders, which would soon enough triplicate his weight.
The young athlete as much as he would now wish to hadn't trained for this type of activity back in the gym. Even if he did integrate cardio into his schedule, he wasn't prepared for such a marathon.
Finally, Nestor got up on his feet, as soon as he felt the weight on his back increase, he got back on the rack, to keep on running together with the others.
Now a new group had formed on the back of the race, while ahead were only two figures, they were the green alien and the male elf.
"Hello, how are you doing. Man, I hope this won't leave scars on your body, or if I was you I would protest to the council. I understand that training must be harsh, but back at the gym, we did not need violence to become stronger.
Well, anyway, my name is Marco. The girl beside me is Nessa, and here over my shoulders is the little Isaac.
They are not very talkative, but still good people you know?"
The cheerful presence of the youth couldn't achieve the desired effect. As Nestor couldn't mind one bit, his conditions weren't as optimal, to say the least.
Advertisement
"This man has quite the willpower, looking at him I wouldn't have bet even a brass coin on him lasting this long. He even bested my brothers, Chong and Hun.
However, at the moment, he isn't very responsive as you can see. My name is Won, I augur you a peaceful dea-...
I'm sorry, my tongue slipped. It must have been the hassle of the training, after all, you had yet to experience our instructor's wrath. In the end, whether you make it, it doesn't matter, we'll all have to end up like them to properly finish the training."
Without much shame for his words, Won pointed at the fallen trainees, showing a surprising expression of confidence. Could it be that this strange individual was already informed of the details of what awaited the group?
'He seems friendly. But I don't trust guys like him, if you are wearing a black cape then in my book you are definitely suspicious. I'll still show him a friendly side, for now, we'll talk more once he gets that damn cape out of the way.'
While still in thought, Marco had fallen behind a few meters from the group, not noticing the punitive justice that was about to strike him in the back.
However, the pain that should have been timely delivered, didn't come. Nestor had quickly intercepted the whip with his Kopesh, blocking the strike for him.
"ARGH!"
Needless to say, a second one had swiftly befallen the tired monk, which he failed to predict this time around. As another gaping wound was embedded on his back.
He had shown his weak side to the knight to protect Marco, yet due to fatigue wasn't swift enough to reposition himself with the group.
Suddenly Nestor felt his legs growing weak, trembling, as his mental fortitude started to weaver he felt his mind dozing off.
Yet suddenly a strong pull momentarily lifted him up. Marco had quickly grabbed him and supported Nestor with his shoulders, helping him to keep running.
"Thank you for your help man, very appreciated. I'll give you a hand for a bit, however, I won't be able to maintain this hold for long as I am quite tired myself."
Nestor silently nodded at those words. Truth to be told, the monk had already reached his limit, he simply thought of helping someone else before giving in. As such a chance presented itself, Nestor didn't expect anything in return, maybe at this point to let himself go wouldn't be as bad.
"Don't give up yet, the longer you last and push yourself, the more your benefits will be when you wake up."
As if to read his thoughts, Won had caught on to what Nestor was thinking.
'As I thought, this isn't simple training. However this guy is still giving me some sort of ominous vibe, I'm feeling hostility towards him. While I don't have any reason to believe, he shouldn't have any to help me anyway.
If he wanted he could have simply warned the whole group at the start of the training.'
The dubious expression plastered on his tired face gave away Nestor's doubts once again.
"Only the worthy are eligible to know. Since I feel like you will probably become the future core of our unit, I'll share some more with you.
You see, the kind of training we are now experiencing won't be the norm in the future.
It is a kind of experience that the inspector won't be repeating. In short, you could consider this as a sort of preparation, to get you ready before you meet 'smiling uncertainty'. "
Advertisement
- In Serial56 Chapters
Embrace the Blade [Drafts 1&2]
James Ransom grew up unable to do the simplest of life’s tasks. Legs were malformed; he was in a wheel chair as long as he could remember. Suffering from a severe form of muscular exhaustion making him unable to use his hands for long despite his resolve to fight through it. All the challenges facing him he still was able to enjoy reading and video games; but a tragic car accident will change his life forever and perhaps he will be given the opportunity to reincarnate into another world. Special thanks to Mikaelle for the Synopsis. This is my first book/fic so constructive critisism would be very nice. Expect a lot of grammatical errors but hopefully not too many spelling errors. Explanation for the tags; Action/Adventure/Fantasy: These don't really need an explanation, Comedy: I'll try to be funny hopefully I won't fail miserably, Romance: I like romantic sub-plots, LitRPG: No explanation needed but I am using my own system, Reincarnation/Summoned Hero: Not sure which one applies here I'm inclined to think both so I put both, Reader Interactive: I put this one here for my own amusment I'll allow everyone to help create the MC's love interest and maybe a few other things we will also hold a few contests.. Male Lead: self explanitory, Magic: Also easy, Strong Lead: Think of this as more of a weak-to-strong tag the MC will be OP but not till later in the story. Warning: Since this fic is labeled as 'Strategy' I believe that the readers should know as much as possible about the situations presented in the story so they can reach their own conclusions about how a fight could have been won or lost. That means: there are a lot of information dumps early on. I don't know how long I'll be able to write this fic but I promise to keep my few readers informed in case I decide to drop it or something.
8 148 - In Serial10 Chapters
The Name Archives
Daemon was living a normal life, a life like any other. But while he, like everyone else in 2020, was adjusting plans or making new ones to deal with the pandemic, an even greater tragedy struck. Now the only one in this new world still knowing his own name, he is determined to find his family and complete his Magnus Opus, The Name Archives. If he can survive that is..... This is my first time writing a story, any critique, tips, and reviews are more than welcome, please keep it civil. English is not my first language, but any remarks about grammar, wording, etc. will be addressed. The cover art is not mine, if it's yours and you want me to take it down, let me know and I will do so immediately.
8 200 - In Serial11 Chapters
The Legendary Craftsman
A dungeon running fanatic runs into a problem after a boss of a locked dungeon destroys all of his equipment. What does he do? Forge new ones!
8 196 - In Serial74 Chapters
Fate Set Right
Time-Turners are dangerous devices, and awful things happen to wizards and witches who meddle with time.Or do they?For Hermione Granger, an accident that leads her back in time changes the course of nearly a dozen lives, her own included: love where there was none before, hope where it was lost, trust where it had always been suspect.A young Gryffindor girl that hadn't existed before.For Aurora Snape, starting school when the threat against Muggle-borns and the Chamber of Secrets makes it more difficult to be the Potions master's daughter. Or making Draco see that his perception of Muggle-borns is wrong. And it certainly doesn't help when one of the few Gryffindors who is nice to her is the one person who really shouldn't know her too well: her mother.Originally posted on AO3, and FF.net
8 90 - In Serial25 Chapters
Caveship
Nicholas Mason is a fairly average teenager from the small town of Aberdeen, Washington, in his final year of high school. When an earthquake awakens him at a senior party he attends with his two closest friends, they find themselves face-to-face with a powerful starship created by an ancient civilization - a Caveship. Taken aboard against their will, Nicholas and his friends find themselves traveling farther and farther away from Earth, while the starship automatically pilots itself toward some unknown destination. Now, Nicholas and the ragtag group of teenagers must work together to find a way back home, facing incredible dangers on strange alien worlds, all while at the mercy of a starship hellbent on reaching its target.Ranked #1 in 'Space' (November 2018)Ranked #2 in 'Action' (November 2018)Copyright © 2018 by E. R. Maloza. All rights reserved.
8 177 - In Serial53 Chapters
Mr. Perfectly Fine ⚊ Enhypen Sunghoon Text AU [ #5 ]
"Hello, who is this?""I want a girlfriend that is perfectly fine and gorgeous as me""....""Well, as far as I can remember this is not a love hotline"".....""And as far as I also can remember, this is a hotline for Baskin Robbins, an ice cream shop, not for fucking boys who can't keep their hormones to themselves"☏ ⚊ ☏In which a famous idol grew jealous of his friends' love lives and tried to see his own luck by calling the first number their maknae had given to him.The girl who answered just came from a terrible break up and scared him at her never ending bitterness to the world and beyond.And this is the story for Ms. Miserable who may learn to say goodbye at Mr. Change of Heart with the arrival of Mr. Perfectly Fine in her life.
8 167

