《FALLEN》Chapter 6: The Power of an e-TME ticker!(part 2).
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Chapter 6: The Power of an e-TME ticker!(part 2).
Written by Black.
"Well, well, well, what do we have here." Ishiduo's boyfriend said smiling menacingly.
"It seems my rich, pussy-faced boyfriend and his cowardly friends finally grew some balls and came here." Ishiduo said, leaning on her boyfriend's hand in a disgusting and passionate way.
"Eh, too bad their last days are going to be quite tough. Just look at their pathetic angry faces."
"Don't forget rich," Ishiduo said high-fiving her boyfriend, "our little mole over here told us everything. It was really stupid of you to believe my guys will be disloyal. You guys are way too trusting." Said Ishiduo.
If there was a glimmer of doubt left, it had all but faded. The suspicious looking guy who had been working for Ketsu, who had also given them information on Ishiduo's whereabouts now stood right behind Ishiduo, he looked way too happy to see them in this predicament.
Looking at the man he trusted, Ketsu Screamed in rage. "Bastard. How dare you betray me!"
"Hey, boss I didn't betray no one, I was never working for ya to begin with. So leave me the fuck alone." Said the suspicious looking man with a hint of disgust.
"But we agreed to take over this mafia together, I trusted you, I would have given you anything…"
"Heh, a kid? Give me anything!? Don't make me laugh!!"
"Let us go…"
"No can-do, right boss Tenkai?"
"Not even a chance!" Replied Tenkai.
"I SAID LET US GO RIGHT NOW!!"
"I SWEAR IF WE GET OUT OF HERE YOU'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!!"
"ISHIDUO, YOU BITCH, I SWEAR I'LL MAKE YOU PAY!!" Jonael and his crew yelled in deep anger.
"Boss Tenkai, what should we do with them?" Asked a middle aged man.
"Take them to the fun room, the one with the toys, make sure to bring a camera and tie them up well."
"Bye Jonael, see you in hell!."
"BITCH I SWAER I'LL KILL YOU, I'LL DESTOY YOU AND YOUR STUPID BOYFRIEND. TENKAI OR WHATEVER IT WAS!! MARK MY WORDS I'LL DESTROY YOU AND THIS MAFIA!!n I SWEAR I'LL GET MY REVENGE!!" Jonael screamed as he and his friends were dragged away.
"Aww, how cute, come get it then." retorted Ishiduo in a sadistic tone.
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"Really brave of those guys to come here, I couldn't think of anything more dumbass," said Tenkai. "We would miss that guy's money though," he continued.
"We could ask for a ransom from their parents. Wait, wasn't that why you asked for a camera? '' said Ishiduo.
"Nah I just like taking videos of myself torturing people. We would still have to kill them though." He replied.
"So, why did you lie about not killing them? Aren't you afraid of their families?"
"Why? Because it's fun, that's it. Imagine them with false hope of living? It's so delicious. I'm gonna break every piece of hope in their bodies!" He replied manically. "And about their families. How are they gonna find out? I doubt these idiots told them anything. Don't ya think?"
"Yeah, too bad. It's not just their day." She answered.
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The room they were locked in was a dimly lit, moderately large space, in front of them was a large table, on it was a lot of torture equipment. One armed thug stood guard outside.
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"Well that went downhill pretty quick, didn't it." Yakumo said with fake gaiety.
"Sure as hell did bro, how do y'all feel about fucking us all up."replied Ketsu with the same emotion.
"It was your damn pla…."
"ISHIDUO IS SUCH A GOD FORSAKEN BITCH. Arrrrgh!!" Jonael interrupted Yakumo.
"This is just great. We failed and are about to get killed. This is'nt going according to Ketsu's pla…."
"Syke, this was the plan all along!" Ketsu cut Yakumo again.
"Will you guys STOP INTERRUPTING ME WHENEVER I'M SAYING THE WORD 'PLAN!!?" Yakumo yelled in rage.
"So this is part of the plan, Ketsu?" asked Jonael, looking skeptical and curious.
"Yeah, I figured that shitty plan wouldn't work, even if it did it would be hard to walk around this place while they're here, so I took the liberty to have my guys cause a major distraction while we escape this place, plant the stuff and get away. Hence the plan."
"Oh, so what are we gonna do right now?" Jonael asked
"Well, I guess we keep screaming and listening for changes in the environment. Particularly when they get oddly quiet I do have other preparations too." He replied.
"That's quite the plan." Yakumo said.
"Who knew you were this strategic." Jonael continued.
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"BOSS TENKAI!!! BOSS TENKAI!!!"
"HEY, who the fucks yelling my name like that!?"
"Boss, our east warehouse is being raided by the police!"
"How the fuck did the police know about that place!? I thought we got them under our wing!? Wait how many of 'em are there!?"
"Alot, an awful fucking lot, bossman."
"What the fuck you still doing here moron!? Get our guys and let's get there quick!"
"Yes bossman."
"There's a problem babe!" Tenkai said to Ishiduo, who had just returned from a shower. "Those police assholes raided our warehouse, now I got to go." he said as he stood up.
"Well, see ya…" she replied.
"Keep an eye on your boy and his friends." He said as he walked out.
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"Jonael it looks like they all went out." Yakumo said quietly.
"Yeah they have, so what do we do now Ketsu?" Jonael said.
"Ummm. We unite ourselves, duh." Ketsu said, cutting the rope from his hands with a knife.
"Where did you get that from?" Jonael asked, as Ketsu began cutting the rope tying both he and Yakumo.
"No time to ask questions. Let's start trying to pick this lock!."
Few minutes later
"We finally picked the lock. Now look for that evidence and continue."
And so they searched. We searched up the stairs and down the stairs left, right and center. They planted the bombs giving time for thier escape. Then they collected as much evidence as they could find, files, photos, and Tenkai's videos. Don't ask how they carried it. They searched and collected until it happened!!
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"Ishiduo I'm back, those assholes were no match for us. We kicked their sorry asses. How dare those motherfuckers raid our warehouse." Tenkai said as he walked in.
"I expected as much." Ishiduo said, looking unimpressed.
"Let me check on your boy, it's time for them to draw their last breath." He said, looking excited.
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But he never found them in their shells, they had already escaped.
"HEY WHERE ARE THOSE MOTHERFUCKERS!!? DID THEY ESCAPE!? HOW THE HELL DID THEY DO THAT!! TELL THE BOYS WHERE ON HIGH ALERT, LOCK THE EXITS!!." Tenkai said, screaming at the top of his lungs, and was as angry as hell.
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"I think they're back, let's hurry and get out of here." Ketsu said in a quiet tone.
"Yeah, let's go back to ground level and continue the plan." Yakumo agreed
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The place was filled with thugs searching high and low for Jonael and his group. But they were not to be underestimated, they had planned how to escape, and were almost about to reach the stairs, leaving the underground when IT HAPPENED.
They were caught. Again.
"Did you think you could escape!!?" Tenkai said, smiling menacingly.
"Take them back!"
"NO LEAVE US THE FUCK ALONE!"
"LET US GO!!"
"LET US GO RIGHT FUCKING NOW!!" They screamed as they were being dragged a second time.
For the next few minutes loud screams were heard from the "fun room".
"You guys think you can escape right? Sorry to burst your bubbles, you can't come here and leave alive." Tenkai said "Ishiduo you could have a swing at them if you want."
"Yaah, I'll give it a spin." She replied.
Ishiduo and Tenkai both used many different torture tools to take thier revenge on Jonael and his crew.
It was not an enjoyable time for Jonael and the others, it was the most pain they had ever felt in their lives.
7 minutes later.
They were all bloodied, but it was all just superficial wounds. Tenkai had always a sick personality of torturing his victims slowly, but painfully. It was well known that these superficial wounds were actually ten times more painful than a stab to the gut.
And then, their torture began in ernest.
And again they were screams.
"Ok it's time for you gu….."
BOOOOM!!!!
"The hell was that!?" Asked Tenkai frantically.
"Times up you fuckers. The bomb we planted just blew up. Guess what? We also planted an e-TME ticker!!" Said Joneal laughing hysterically.
"What!? Bombs and an e-TME ticker!!? In here? You'll pull this place down!"
"That's the plan!!" Jonael retorted, laughing hysterically."
"Babe lets get out of here!" Ishiduo said nervously. "Let them die by their own plan!"
"Ok. Boys leave these fuckers here, let's get the fuck outta here!!" Tenkai said as he and his boys scampered for the stairs.
At this point Ketsu had already cut the rope that restrained him and then cut the ones restraining the others. They took the evidence they had collected and processed it as fast as they could.
The bombs they planted were exploding at random. Tenkai's group had not gone very far.
The stairs were still very far away.
Jonael chased Tenkai and Ishiduo. Ketsu and Yakumo follow behind.
Lucky, Tenkai and his boys were injured from the bombings. Most of his boys couldn't make it, and where swolled hole by the bomb.
The suspicious looking guy who had actually always worked with Ketsu, but because of a plan not even Jonael or Yakumo knew, had acted like he betrayed them, he had stayed hidden and now was helping Jonael and the others by showing them the stairs.
It was now three on two.
The final bomb, the most powerful of the e-TME ticker was about to blow up, it would be the one which would destroy the surroundings and the building.
Time was running out. So Jonael, Ketsu and Yakumo exited the building.
Upon seeing a gun lying on the floor close to the entrance. Jonael picked it up and went back into the building.
Ketsu, seeing this, began shouting hysterically at Jonael. "Jonael! Where the fuck are you going!?"
"To finish this. You two should leave and wait for me, I'll be there in a few minutes!"
"Hell no! You can't. You'll die you fucker!" Ketsu continued to yell."
"Yakumo, please…" Jonael, knowing that anything he said would be useless on Ketsu, asked Yakumo instead.
"Promise you'll be back!?" Yakumo asked.
Hearing this response, Jonael puffed his chest out and said. "Hell ya!" And he left.
"Then I will wait. Come on Ketsu, let's get going!" Yakumo yelled.
"But Jonael!!"
"He'll be fine! Let's get going."
"Okay. Kito, come with us."
"Yes boss."
'Wait, this mysterious guy's name is Kito?' Thought Yakumo.
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Seeing Ishiduo and Tenkai crawling away to the exit irritated Jonael deeply.
"Tenkai, Ishiduo, what did I say about revenge? My friends and I did not come here without a plan. This outcome was always certain by the SYSTEM. Now I will kill you two spineless motherfuckers. And you, bitch you made a fool out of me. I swear you won't leave here alive. Tenkai, you tortured my friends for that you'll DIE!!"
"Jonael please wait, I was forced, yes I was forced. He forced me to, so please don't take my life!!" Screamed Ishiduo. "Remember our time together? It was the best. You still love me, right, right!?"
"The fuck you talking about bitch!? How the fuck did I ever force you to do anything?" Retorted Tenkai.
Seeing this exchange, Jonael could only think of one thing. Worthless, absolutely worthless. These two fuckers would betray themselves just to survive?
Bang!
A gunshot. This wasn't out of Jonael's gun, but one of Tenkai's minions, he had sustained serious injuries and would likely not live long, but had somehow managed to aim at Jonael and shoot at him. It was a clean shot to Jonael's stomach.
Flop!
Jonael's body was lying on the floor almost lifeless. And then Ishiduo and Tenkai saw their opportunity to escape, but…
"Where the fuck are you guys going?"
They were shocked, how could they not be? The kid who was shot was back on his feet.
"Fucker, how are you still alive!?" Tenkai asked.
"It's because I'm protected!"
"By who!?"
"THE SYSTEM!!"
KABOOM!!!
The e-TME ticker had gone off and it's true power was unleashed. It took with it all within a 700 metre radius. Nothing was left.
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