《Immortal With A System》Punishment
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Akemi sitting on the hospital bed staring at the floor "I think I understand why I was reborn into Lian Xu's body, but" he taps his stomach "this is a bit much" he lays back and rests his head on his pillow then closes his eyes
The window beside Akemi turns "Daily Mission: Journey Of Strength
100 Pushups (0/100)
100 Sit ups (0/100)
100 Burpees (0/100)
100 Squats (0/100)
Run 5 miles (0/5)
Success Rewards- 5SP, energy restoration, Fat burning pill
Failure will result in consequences"
The message turns red "Player has failed to complete daily quest, consequence commencing" it disappears
Moments later a small orb appears at the foot of Akemi's bed
Akemi begins dozing off but then he feels a sudden wind on his feet "huh?" he opens his eyes a little "why is it so windy?" he looks down and sees a black hole with a blue outline "WHAT?"
The black hole starts pulling in everything around Akemi
Akemi turns on his stomach and holds onto the covers "What is going on!" his lower body levitates in the air "I'm not letting go!"
The covers lift from the bed
Akemi pauses in midair "-_-" he gets sucked into the black hole and it disappears
Moments Later
The black hole appears high in the sky, over a field of bright green grass
Akemi falls from the black hole "AAAAAHHHHHHHH" he lands on the ground head first "Ow ow ow ow ow." he sits up while rubbing his head then looks around "huh? where am I?"
The wind blows through the grass
Akemi stands up "did the system bring me here?"
A large window appears in the sky
Akemi looks up
Window: "Consequence commencing!"
Akemi: "Consequence? For what?" he remembers the daily quest "...Wait that was serious?"
Window:" Survive for 4 hours"
Akemi: "Survive? What is this?"
A timer appears below the words of the window "4:00:00
3:59:59
3:59:58"
Akemi looks away from the window and around the grass plain "so the system brought me here to survive, but this seems a bit too easy for a punishment"
A small shadow appears behind over Akemi
Akemi looks at the ground "huh?"
THWACK!
Akemi falls to the ground with blood dripping down his forehead and his eyes slightly open "..." he sees green foot step in front of him then his eyes close
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Later
Akemi slightly opens his eyes with his vision blurry "Wha-"he sees trees moving past him then his eyes close again
Loud chatter
Akemi's Thoughts: "Ugh" he tightens his eyes "why is it so loud?"
Akemi opens his eyes and sees that he is spinning slowly, looking at cave walls "I can't move" he looks down and notices he's wrapped in rope "why am I tied up?" he continues to hear the chatter "what is that sound?" he looks up and sees a black pot filled with green liquid and goblins surrounding him "wha-" his eyes widens "WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?"
The goblins start jumping up and down while getting loud
Akemi: "How did I even get here?" he spins around slowly looking at all of the goblins "um...excuse me? You guys wouldn't mind letting me down would ya?"
A goblin turns to another goblin standing behind the group holding a rope "Laeheweub leyht yred'n"
Akemi: "What did he say?"
The goblin holding the rope starts lowering Akemi towards the pot
Akemi: "No no no wait, when I said down this isn't what meant" he starts wiggling "dammit!"
The goblin lowers him closer to the pot
Akemi: "No Akemi calm down, if I want to get out this I'll have to think" he looks down at the pot and notices the left side of the pot is propped up "the pot is tilted? Is it because of the cave? Well, this may be my only chance to get out of this mess. But I need to get a little closer to the pot" he swings slightly back and forth
Akemi: "come on just a little more" he swings himself back and forth "Haaaah!"
The goblins look at each other confused
Akemi: "come on~" he swings more getting his head closer to the pot "Damn this big body!"
The goblin lowers him even closer, while the goblins around the pot cheer loudly
Akemi's eyes flash "Chance!" He takes a deep breath and does a big swing towards the tilted part of the pot "on second thought I really shouldn-" he headbutts the pot, knocking it over "AHH HOT HOT HOT HOT!"
The pit falls over spilling the boiling green liquid on the goblins
The goblins scream as the liquid falls on some of them, while others run away
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Akemi laughs evilly with a red burn on his forehead as he swings back and forth "serves you right, you little assholes!"
The goblin holding Akemi's rope let's go and runs
Akemi starts falling while laughing "that's right, unhand me!" he falls on the fire under the pot "AH HOT HOT HOT!" he bounces up and down wiggling like a fish out of water "Halp!" he falls onto the ground and rolls side to side quickly, then stops as the fire disappears "phew...I am never doing that again" he sits up and the ropes fall from around him "Oh? This was not part of the plan but it worked out" he jumps up "I need to get out of here" he runs very slowly towards the light shining into the cave from the entrance
Moments Later
Akemi runs through the entrance of the cave "finally" he bends over and puts his hands on his knees while panting heavily "I am so tired from running nowhere" he looks up and notices tall trees and bushes "What? Is this a forest?" he takes a deep breath and stands straight up "it must have been those damn goblins"
The ground starts shaking and loud booms can be heard to the left of Akemi
Akemi takes sighs "What now? Can I please have a break?" he looks to the left
The booms get louder
Akemi looks up and notices the top of the trees to his left are falling over "Whatever that is, it's strong enough to knock over these huge trees" he starts walking to the right while looking "going this way should be a wise decision"
The trees falling over gets closer to Akemi
Akemi: "Wait a minute..."
A few trees behind, the ones in front of Akemi falls over
Akemi: "It's coming this way!" he turns and starts running
The trees behind Akemi moves to the sides
Akemi: "AHH!" he looks behind him while running slowly and sees a giant black tiger with blue stripes
Akemi: "..." he turns back around "nope!" starts running faster
The tiger shakes it's head then sniffs the ground
Akemi keeps running "please don't see me, please don't see me"
The tiger looks up and sees an egg with legs running away. It roars loudly then runs toward Akemi
Akemi: "IT SAW ME!"
The tiger gets closer to Akemi
Akemi: "I need to upgrade something! System!" a window appears in front of him, showing his stats "I need to outrun this thing" he presses the + above the number 1 to the right of agility
A message red pops up "Error: stats cannot be upgraded during consequence"
Akemi: "WHAT? Are you kidding me!? I can't outrun this thing in this overweight body!" he notices a cliff in front of him "A cliff?" he smiles nervously "I don't think I have much of a choice"
The tiger opens it's jaws wide as it almost reaches Akemi
Akemi gets to the cliff "it's do or die" he jumps off of the cliff then turns around while in the air
The tiger stops
Akemi smiles widely and flips off the tiger with his right hand "Heh!" he turns around and sees a ocean below him "I have some luck finally"
A giant shadow appears in the water
Akemi: "No no, I take back what I said!"
The shadow gets bigger then a giant creature bursts out of the water with it's jaws open
Akemi: "I'M GOING TO DIE!"
The creature's jaws get around Akemi
A window appears in the sky "00:00:01
00:00:00
Consequence survive, now returning player"
The creature closes it's mouth
Akemi's Room
A black hole appears at the foot of Akemi's bed and shoots him out on the floor
Akemi opens his eyes slightly
The door opens and the nurse sees Akemi laying on the ground covered in dirt and sweat
Nurse: "Akemi what happened! Someone come help!"
Akemi's eyes close
Later
Akemi opens his eyes slowly and sees a blue ceiling "Huh?" he looks to his left seeing the desk, chair and door "I'm alive?" he sits up "I made it, that's was a nightmare...So many things happened so fast"
A window appears in front of Akemi "
Daily Mission: Journey Of Strength
100 Pushups (0/100)
100 Sit ups (0/100)
100 Burpees (0/100)
100 Squats (0/100)
Run 5 miles (0/5)
Success Rewards- 5SP, energy restoration, Fat burning pill
Failure will result in consequences"
Akemi smirks nervously "CAN I GET A BREAK!"
The birds outside of the window fly away
End
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