《Naruto: Beginning of Hatred》Chapter 12: "Am I Dead?"
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"Speak" people speak
'Thought' people thought
demon/demonic speak
'demon/demonic thought
-----Three Years In Prison-----
Naruto is now 16. His clothes doesn't change much. He still wore black dark-red jacket with hood but now without stripes. On back of jacket is placed kanji 'NINE' in blood-red circle and nine tails come out of the circle, but in front is placed kanji 'FOX' also in blood-red circle but instead of nine tails there are fox head. He wore blood-red ANBU pants with black stripes on both sides. And black ninja sandals. In near three years Naruto managed to kill 203 men. Coups are now less organized.
Yesterday arrived only one prisoner. Naruto is now in canteen. New prisoner is walking towards him.
"Hello, I am Ryūzetsu." said new prisoner.
"You need something? If no then don't bother me." Naruto answered annoyed.
"Calm down I just wanted to say hello."
Now Naruto and Ryūzetsu hear like prisoners is whispered.
"Poor kid. Better don't anger him or you will die." someone begged.
"Another one to collection." said another prisoner.
"How many?" some one asked.
"I don't know I don't count his kills. But I think about 205." one answered.
-----Back To Naruto And Ryūzetsu-----
"What are they talking about? You killed people here?" she asked nervously.
"Listen boy. If you want to live little longer then don't bother me and don't have this happy face."
"What about my face?!" Ryūzetsu shouted.
-----Crowd-----
"Yep another is going to die. OI~ how many this will be?!" one of prisoners shouted.
"204 now." one answered.
They starts whispering about how Naruto will kill new prisoner.
-----Back To Naruto And Ryūzetsu-----
Naruto's eye widened in rage. I blink of an eye every one saw Naruto and Ryūzetsu talking. And now Naruto lifted Ryūzetsu in the air be her neck. ""all of a sudden Ryūzetsu's hair fell out of the headscarf. Naruto dropped her and whispered. "Come with me." they walked out of canteen to Naruto's training ground.
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-----Naruto's Training Ground-----
"What are you doing?!" Ryūzetsu yelled at him.
"Tell me, Ryūzetsu. What a silly girl does in men prison, hmm?" Naruto asked.
"What are you talkin-" Naruto interupted her "Don't be stupid i know you are a girl. I saw your heir fellout of the headscarft."
"Alright. I have a mission about some kind of box that Mui want to open."
"And? He just open stupid box." Naruto shrugged.
"This isn't simple box. This is called 'Box of Ultimate Bliss'" She explained everything she knows about box.
"I see. So this seal drain chakra and send to this box." Naruto sighed.
"Yes. Will you help me to destroy this box?"
"It's not like I have better things to do, so. Sure why not."
All of a sudden earthquake appeared. 'It's started.' Both thought then looked at each other and nodded. They run to the center of earthquake.
(A/N: Imagine that Killer Bee, Konoha and Kumo ninja isn't there. Also imagine that Gamabunta know as Toad Boss also isn't there. And that Naruto can't use sage mode and Rasenshuriken and Rasengan. Naruto use just his strength. Also Mui is live. And one more thing remember he has a scar on left eye.)
"Am I dead?" Naruto thought loud to himself.
"No. But half population in prison died." Said mysterious person. Naruto looked in direction where he heard voice. It was Mui.
"Why did you do this?" Naruto asked annoyed.
"I was selfish. That's all."
"It's okay. You only wanted to see your son. But if you do this next time I swe" Naruto said in demonic voice sitting on the floor and sees Ryūzetsu dead on the floor. He look down and sees big scar on his chest.'I see... She sacrificed her life to safe me... Thank you Ryūzetsu... Thanks to you I can realize my dream...' Naruto smiled sadly.
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'He know that she sacrificed her life...' His thoughts interrupted Naruto's death glare. "H-Hai." Mui said feared 'Lucky he still have that seal.' Mui thoughts.
"So. What now, Mui?"
"Everyone except me will be locked in special chamber. But you will be in other chamber alone because of what I saw you can alone destroy a country. And still if you used chakra it is a little bit." Mui said.
"Okay. Where I should go."
"Block Z." Mui said. "Follow me."
Naruto do as Mui said.
-----Block Z-----
"We are here." Mui said. "Go inside."
"Hai. Hai." Naruto walks in his new cell. He looked around. 'Big... Really big... I think it's bigger then my training ground... But it is really dark... No light... Nothing... Only bed, table, chair and... ventilation?' Naruto thought confused.
"You see this ventilation?" Mui asked and Naruto nodded but still confused. "By this you will receive your meal. Three times in a day."
"Okay, Mui. But I want to make something clear."
'Oh God... What now?' "Yes Naruto?" Mui asked worried.
"Don't tell anyone about this event. Understand?"
"As if I would. If some one will know every nation will want this box."
"Good. Now go and lock other before run they away." Naruto said but now Mui is confused 'They run away??? Who? I placed seal on every prisoner.' his thoughts are interrupted by Naruto. "Guards can still go away." Naruto said annoyed this whole situation.
"SHIT!!!" Mui fast locked Naruto and starts running to guards and prisoners. 'Stupid human...'
Mui starts closing everyone in Block S. Mui now starts recriuting new guards after 2 moths rebuilding Blood Prison. And new prisoners are coming. Everyone want to know what happened but Mui tells nobody about this event.
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