《MLP FiM: The Hero of Equestria (MLP FiM x Male Pony Reader) (Season 1)》Final Chapter: The True Best Night Ever
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Today is the day that the Mane 7 have been waiting for weeks now. Tonight in Canterlot is the Grand Galloping Gala. A party that the Mane 7 have been talking about the whole season. Twilight, (Y/N), Pinkie Pie, and Spike were near Carousel Boutique and Pinkie was so excited about the Grand Galloping Gala that she was jumping high on a trampoline, shouting while Twilight was trying to read a spell book.
Ahh! I. . . can't... believe. . . the Grand. . . Galloping. . . Gala. . . is. . . tonight!
Yes, Pinkie we know. You've been yelling that nonstop for the past hour.
And would you please stop shouting, I'm trying to concentrate!
Rarity then comes out of Carousel Boutique and she instantly notices Pinkie jumping up and down on the trampoline and goes over to her.
Pinkie Pie! Stop that right now. It's time to prepare for the Gala, and I refuse to let you put on your new dress when you're all sweaty.
Pinkie pouts at that as she broke the laws of physics and just stopped instantly before just landing on the trampoline without jumping back up. Pinkie then walks over to Spike and (Y/N) who were watching Twilight read a book.
What's Twilight doing?
She's got an awesome magic spell she's been working on for the Gala.
She said that it will involve our transportation to the Gala tonight.
Where are the others? It's getting late.
Hold your horses, girl. We're here.
Applejack then appears and walks up to the group along with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy.
Perfect. I'm ready.
For what?
Watch as you about to witness an amazing spell that Twilight's been practicing to prepare for tonight.
Spike then places an apple down in front of Twilight.
An apple! Are we having pie?
No Pinkie. Just watch.
Twilight then glows her horn and the apple soon grows and turns into a large carriage. Everypony was just amazed by what Twilight did and they all softly cheered for her success attempt.
Thanks, but that's just the start. Fluttershy, did you bring your friends?
Yes.
Four white mice then appeared out of Fluttershy's mane as Fluttershy let them onto the ground.
Will they be safe, Twilight?
You have my word.
Twilight then glows her horn once more and she turns the mice into fancy-looking horses to pull the carriage. The rest of the Mane 7 either cringed or gave weird looks at horse mice as they all thought that they looked very weird like that.
Um. . . horse and mice aren't exactly the best combination. I mean, this isn't some fairy tale like some book I read back on Earth.
Neat, huh? And don't worry, they'll be mice again at midnight.
Rarity's cat, Opalescence then comes from behind a tree and she notices that the horses faces looked a lot like mice as she smirked and launched herself at them.
Opalescence, no!
Fluttershy's words fell on deaf ears as Opal sticks her claws onto one of the horse mice and they all got scared and ran away.
Wait! Come back! Those horses were supposed to pull our carriage. How will we get to the Gala?
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Rarity thinks for a second before looking at (Y/N).
*sarcastically* Whatever shall we do?
Rarity then looks at (Y/N) once more and when the rest of the mares notice, they realize what Rarity is implying as all eyes were on (Y/N) at this point, making him confused.
What? Why's everypony looking at me?
Ahem. (Y/N), could you be a darling and pull the carriage to the Gala please~?
Rarity then bats her eyelashes a few times to try and butter him up and (Y/N) gave a nervous smile while blushing before simply just nodding.
O-Of course.
Great! Now that we have everything settled out for our plans to get to Grand Galloping Gala, we can all start to prepare ourselves for it.
I can't wait for our time there. I'll be selling apples all night it will make ponies stomachs full.
I just can't wait to be in the garden and meet new animals in there.
When the Wonderbolts see me, I know for sure they will instantly let Rainbow Dash here hang out with them and show them just how awesome she is.
Once I'm in the Gala, my prince charming will fall for me and treat me like the lady of which I am.
I hope the dance floor will be exactly what I asked for! An open space where everypony is dancing, laughing, and smiling, and me! Pinkie Pie will join in on all of the fun!
When I'm at the Grand Galloping Gala, I hope to see Princess Celestia, we have so much to catch up on from everything I've told her about at my stay here in Ponyville. And if I'm lucky. . .
Twilight looks at (Y/N) in the corner of her eye and giggles to herself a little while blushing.
I'll be able to have a dance with (Y/N).
Say (Y/N), you never had any big expectations for the Grand Galloping Gala, why's that?
Yeah! Isn't there anything you want the most while you there?
Not really. The only thing that I want at my time at the Grand Galloping Gala is to just enjoy the experience. That's the only thing I want at my time at the Grand Galloping Gala.
Really? Well, in that case we're all going to for sure have the greatest night tonight at the Grand Galloping Gala.
Yay! This will be the best night ever!
You took the words right out of my mouth, Pinkie Pie.
Really? I didn't know you could directly take words out of ponies mouths. Wait, does that means words are edible?
Everypony just laughs at Pinkie's silliness.
Well girls, you all go ahead and get your dresses ready, I'll go back to my house and get my suit ready for the gala.
Alrighty then, we'll see you in a few, sugarcube.
I'll see you girls when I get back.
A little while later, (Y/N) returned to his house and he was currently looking at himself in a mirror and he was straightening up his mane and tail.
*sighs* I know they all have pretty high hopes for getting what they want at the Grand Galloping Gala, but I remember Princess Celestia telling me that it won't be anything we will be expecting.
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(Y/N) then get's a determined look.
Everypony at the Grand Galloping Gala will see that tonight will be different, and it's up to me to make that happen.
As (Y/N) was finished cleaning himself up a bit, he puts on his suit and straightens it out to look as neat as possible. He then puts his hat on and looks at himself in the mirror one last time before confirming that he's ready.
You're looking cool, (Y/N). Looking cool. It's time to give your friends the event of a lifetime at the Grand Galloping Gala.
(Y/N) then walks out of his house and he notices that the sun is nearly setting.
It's almost night, the Gala will be opening shortly. The girls must be ready by now.
(Y/N) flies on over back to Carousel Boutique and he opens the door to go inside.
Hey girls, I'm ready.
Over here darling.
(Y/N) turned to where Rarity voiced called out and he stopped in his tracks to see the mares in their dresses that made them look absolutely beautiful.
Whoa! They all look so. . . beautiful!
When the Mane 6 see (Y/N) in his Gala suit they all had blushes on their faces just by looking at him.
He looks so handsome in that suit.
So what do you girls think about my suit?
It was just what I expecting to see, darling. You look so handsome.
Yeah! Like super duper handsome!
Thanks and you all look very beautiful in your outfits as well.
The Mane 6 blush once more at (Y/N)'s compliment.
Aw, shucks sugarcube.
Th-Thank you (Y/N).
So, is everyone ready?
I am.
You bet!
Alright then, let's get moving. The Grand Galloping Gala is waiting for us.
The Mane 7 then leave the clothing store and they all walk up to the carriage that they were going to ride in. (Y/N) walks up to the door and opens it for the mares.
Ladies first.
Oh my, such a gentleman.
The mares each walk inside of the carriage one by one and after they were all inside, (Y/N) closes the door and approaches the front of the carriage to pull on it to the Gala. Spike then approaches him and he was wearing a suit as well.
So. . . uh. . . where do I sit?
You can ride on my back if you want to Spike.
You sure? I don't want to put too much pressure on you.
I'll be fine. It's not like I'm carrying the carriage anyways. I'm just pulling it.
Okay, if you say so.
Spike then hops on (Y/N)'s back and seeing that everypony was ready, he walks off to pull the carriage all the way to Canterlot.
You know, I've got to show you and our friends a lot in Canterlot. I planned out my insider tour for them.
Really? Like what?
I've gotta show Rarity the crown jewels, and Applejack the Princess's golden apple tree. And I've got to show Pinkie my favorite donut shop.
Well, you'll have to see what they want to do once we get there, buddy.
It was a long trip and it was finally nighttime, but they all eventually made to Canterlot and (Y/N) stopped the carriage in front of the entrance and Spike jumped off him.
Dude, how are you not tired?
You're talking to the same alicorn who has enough stamina to fly or walk to patrol all of Ponyville all day.
Okay, point taken.
(Y/N) then goes and opens the carriage door for the mares again as they all step out of it.
Thank you so much for pulling us all the way here (Y/N).
Not a problem at all, Rarity.
The Mane 7 then all walk up to the front gate of Canterlot.
I can't believe we're finally here. With all that we've imagined, the reality of this night is sure to make this. . . The Best Night Ever!
With the song being done, Spike then decides to slide in.
Yeah! This is gonna be the best night ever. You know why? 'Cause we're all gonna spend time at the Gala to-
The Mane 6 then rush off to where ever their desires are and left both Spike and (Y/N) behind.
Or not.
Hey, no worries Spike. We all want to do what we want to do first, but don't worry we'll come back and spend some time with you.
(Y/N) then walks off into the Gala and Spike then get's a conflicted look on what his is supposed to do now.
In the middle of the entrance hall, Twilight ran towards and up some steps to find Princess Celestia and she was extremely excited to see her.
Princess Celestia!
Twilight! It is so lovely to see my star student.
Oh, I'm so excited to be here! We have so much to catch up on.
Well, I want you right by my side the entire evening, so we'll have plenty of time together.
Twilight then walks up next to the Princess with a big smile on her face.
That's just what I was hoping you'd say.
As Rarity walks in, she instantly gasps to see a unicorn stallion with light brilliant arctic blue eyes, a light gray coat, a light amber mane and tail, his Cutie Mark was a compass rose he was wearing a blue bowtie with his suit along with a flower on the right side of it.
Rarity then runs, but slows her pace just a little bit.
Hurry, Rarity. . . oh, but not too fast. But don't wanna lose him. . . wait! Have to play it cool. Oh, but don't be cold! I can't lose him, I can't! He's everything I imagined!
When Rarity looks at Prince Blueblood once more, his mane flows in the wind, he was holding a rose on his teeth and he gave a charming smile.
Even better than I imagined!
A stray meadowlark bird was flying out in the garden which Fluttershy instantly notices.
Oh my! A meadowlark!
Fluttershy follows the stray meadowlark into the private gardens and she then hears it whistle.
I think she's calling to me. It's exactly what I wished for!
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