《Beyblade Burst: Shasa's Journey》Challenge From Lane
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Shasa and Tomoka were standing on opposite side of Shards. They were at the beach and both Shasa and Tomoka were looking at Shards who is looking sadly at her destroyed Sadryn.
"You okay?" Tomoka asked, worried about her best friend.
"I gave it my all...but I pushed Sadryn to hard. That was my fault." Shards said. Shasa just sadly looked at her and opened her mouth but Shards interrupted her.
"No...it's not your fault. So don't blame yourself." Shards said. Shasa was surprised but still felt bad.
Shards looked back at Sadryn, closed her eyes and smiled. She looked up at both of her friends.
"I'll get Sadryn fixed up, and we'll be back in blading in no time!" She said with motivation which made both of her friends smile.
Shards then turned to Shasa.
"You better register to that tournament. Cause I wanna have our real battle there!" Shards said. Shasa smiled.
"I promise!" Shasa held out her fist and Shards fist bumped back. Shards smiled at her friends and walked the other way.
Shasa and Tomoka smiled at their friend.
When Shards was out of sight, Tomoka and Shasa turned to each other.
"You gonna head back to the apartment?" Shasa asked.
"Yeah, this day was something, so I'm just gonna go back and rest up a little bit." Tomoka shrugged.
"What about you?"
Shasa thought for a little bit.
"I was actually thinking about practicing a little more." Shasa said. Tomoka smiled.
"Alright! I'll be at the apartment, see ya!" Tomoka said.
"Bye!"
Now Tomoka walked out of Shasas view. Shasa was all alone now.
Shasa was smiling before it slowly dropped.
"Now, I'm all alone." Shasa sighed.
Shasa pulled Saturn out and looked at her bey. Her mind reverted back to her and Shards match.
"I know it wasn't my fault...but I wonder..." Shasa spoke to her bey. Even though Shards clarified it wasn't her fault. Shasa still feels like it was.
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Shasa was then broken out of her thoughts when she heard footsteps. She turned to her left and noticed a tall teenager in a black coat.
Shasa was surprised as she recognized him.
It was Lane Valhalla!
The person who defeated Valt in the Legend Festival Finals. But why was he here?
"You...?" Shasa began, still surprised by his presence. Lane only glared at her and pointed towards her.
"I have some business to deal with you."
"Me?"
Shasa was surprised. Lane actually came to her? This was their first ever meeting.
"Shasa Guten." Lane began. Shasa sweated a little bit as she lifted her head.
"Why do you battle?" Lane asked. Shasa was confused by the question. But also a little bit annoyed.
"I battle cause it's fun! That's why." Shasa answered and Lane gritted his teeth like he heard that answer over a million times and it was the wrong one.
Lane then grinned evilly.
"Well then...let's have a fun battle." Lane said.
Shasa doesn't know why, but she has a negative feeling from this guys presence.
Somewhere
Shasa and Lane were in an abandoned factory it seems, and there was a normal bey stadium there too.
Both bladers were standing on opposite sides of the stadium.
Why did he bring me here? Shasa thought to herself. Lane noticed her confusion and spoke up.
"Will your flare be able to take on mine?"
Shasas eyes widened. So that's the idea? He wants to find out if her flare is strong enough to satisfy him?
Shasa just began to feel angry at this guy. He was using her as a test experiment.
"Flare? I'll blow that out in an instant!" Shasa growled and then turned to her bey. She switched to a solid chassis on attack mode. She wants to burst him and when that happens, he'll learn his lesson of not to use people like that.
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Shasa looked up and saw Lane holding up his beyblade. Shasa was then surprised when she saw that Lucifer had an upgrade.
So it's even more powerful than it was before. But upgrades mean nothing, she'll have to win this battle.
Both bladers got into their launching positions.
"3!"
"2!"
"1!"
"GO, SHOOT!!!" Both bladers launched with full force doing lightning launching and heavily landing on the stadium.
Lucifer quickly overtook the center.
Immediately, Shasa's light blue flare surrounded her.
"TAKE HIM DOWN!" Shasa roared out and Saturn began to surround itself with flare. And quickly attacked Lucifer.
"Yes...that's it! That's what I want! Give me more!" Lane said with an evil smile.
"You asked for it!" Shasa warned and Saturn delivered multiple attacks.
CLASH
CLASH
CLASH
CLASH
CLASH
CLASH
CLASH
CLASH
After one more final collision:
"THE END WALL!" Lane called out a special move and the ring of Lucifer The End glowed, knocking Saturn away.
"What!?" Shasa was surprised.
"Is this all you've got? HOW WEAK!" Lane insulted.
Shasa just felt more angry and determined to defeat this guy.
"WE'LL SHOW YOU WHAT WE'VE GOT!" Shasa screamed as her flare raged around her. Saturn quickly collided with Lucifer. Not letting it break away.
But that didn't last long when Lucifer pushed Saturn into the stadium wall. Also colliding in the other side. Now Saturn was colliding with Lucifer and the stadium wall around the stadium.
Shasa suddenly froze, it was like her entire body went numb as she felt something, something bad was about to happen.
"YOU DON'T DESERVE THAT BEY!" Lane screamed and the collision got harder. Shasa then realized what Lane is trying to do.
"I WON'T LET THAT HAPPEN!" Shasa yelled and her flare raged around her even more. Saturn was able to knock Lucifer away and break itself free.
"Come...COME MY FLARE! GIVE ME MORE OF YOUR PAIN!" Lane screamed and Lucifer quickly charged back towards Saturn and Saturn charged towards Lucifer.
"LUCIFER!" Lane screamed as he powered up and summoned the avatar of Lucifer The End.
The avatar is an upgrade from Variant Lucifer. The head's structure has been altered, the red markings on the head spikes, which have been reduced to five, have been removed, and the head sports an indigo fire on the back of the head. The pink neon lights running throughout his body are now magenta. The vambraces are now pure purple, the claws on the hands are larger and yellow and the pauldrons, hip and back now sport golden-yellow structures. The upper arms are now light-grey. Both the forehead and chest now sports a black sun-style gem with a neon magenta orb in the center. The knee protrusions have increased to three segment, the two lower ones are red, and the upper ones are violet with a green marking on each. The wing protrusions on the back are now large with black with golden-yellow frames and red neon light markings. The tail has been increased to three and the energy wings from the wing protrusions are larger and electrical and the face now sports a mouth with serrated fangs.
Both beyblades collided in the center and Saturn was quickly pushed back into the wall with Lucifer attacking with all of it's power.
"LIMIT BREAK: THE END!" Lane screamed his special move and for a minute, Shasa saw Lucifer change during battle and there was an explosion!
BURST
Shasa watched Cosmic Saturn burst in front of her. Her eyes were wide open, but then...she heard cracking sounds.
BURST
Shasa watched as Saturn got destroyed into pieces right in front of her.
And the painful screaming voice...of Saturn.
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