《Overdone Book Titles》Sister/Brothers Best Friend
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I wonder what will happen in this story?
Literally, most intros are like this.
'Hi, my name is Sapphire Magic and this is the story about how I fell in love my brother/sisters best friend. Read to find out!'
The second I read that shit, I leave.
That doesn't draw your reader in people, YOUR FUCKING PUSHING THEM AWAY.
IN FACT, YOUR ANNOYING THE SHIT OUT OF THEM!
'Read to find out!'
HELL NO.
If you tell a reader to read your story, they'll be like
YOU CANT TELL ME WHAT TO DO YOUR NOT MY MUM
I can guarantee it 100%.
THEY WILL RUN AWAY SCREAMING.
'YOU CANT TELL ME WHAT TO DO BITCH!'
But, like I said, by the title, we can work out the whole story line.
The best friend comes over to house
Main character stalks them
Gazes after them long after they left
Bumps into the at school
Blush fest
Classes
Lunch hall
Sitting with them
Walks to main characters home with them
Best friend asks on date
MC can't breath
MC nods
Best friend smiles
TEN PARAGRAPHS DESCRIBING MAKEUP AND CLOTHES
Met at romantic restaurant
Have wine and beer when they're underage.
Get drunk.
Kiss
Have sex
I don't see an inch of originality here.
AT ALL.
FOR FUCKS SAKE PEOPLE DON'T FUCKING DO IT!
DIRINK PISS MOTHERFUCKERS!
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