《[Editing] Mr and Mrs Clean Freaks》Editing the Second Book
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I'm actually tired of having to constantly comments where people are just complaining as to why there's so many twins.
In fact, I'll just Let's see if after the second book has finally finished its editing, most of you can stop complaining.
Like I spent endless of hours to write this book but I'm just tired of this. I'm so tired of the constant complaining I get on the comments as if people think I wouldn't be able to read them or anything. But I do, I read each and every single comment everyone posts even if I don't reply to many of them.
Most of you think that complaining doesn't bother authors but it actually does. I've seen the same type of complain over and over again, obviously it'd bother me. It got me into doubting a lot of things, since apparently adding 2-3 twins is too much for everyone.
I really want to thank those who supported my idea before this decision instead of complain.
I'll make a better book so everyone can stop complaining.
After this is posted,
Sorry to those who started reading it recently.
Author-san.
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