《Devil Cultivator in an Ability User World》Update~
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*SIGHHHHHH*
I'll be frank with you guys; Recently, I have not been enjoying doing anything related to this novel. I've tried to rewrite stuff but it simply hurts my brain to do it when the chapters are so...generic.
A dude (Grayshade. A chill dude, so please don't witch hunt him or anything) who recently recently (Not that recent but he is the latest person to review the story) reviewed my story and he hit the nail right on the head.
Every bit of the story is a cliche and they're even interesting ones.
So, feel free to call me a lazy twat, rate this story with a 0.5 star rating or just review incredibly badly, but I'm dropping the novel.
I know I'm a twat, don't worry about me thinking otherwise, but I'm not gonna carry on doing something I don't personally like and I wish for all of you to respect that decision.
Sorry for letting you all down.
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