《Heavenly Will》Chapter 12 - Mysterious Expert
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Qing Yun glanced astonished at the scene before him. His body froze with his arm still extended in front of him. He stood like that for a while before he sucked in a mouth of cold air, his body trembled slightly.
The room wasn’t big and had few simple furniture that decorated it, a bed, a desk with a chair, there was also a small dresser with a simple mirror hanging on the wall behind it. But now, all these, thanks to Qing Yun’s seemingly ordinary punch, were destroyed by a gush of invisible energy.
Qing Yun body trembled involuntary, as his handsome face that usually looked dignified and gave of a mature aura, was now filled with boundless excitement.
What the hell is this technique?! Although still filled with excitement Qing Yun couldn’t help but exclaim inwardly. Based on his understanding his power right now should be similar to that of early stages of Houtian realm. How could Qing Yun not be stunned by this? It was the first time he cultivated and he did it just for several hours, but suddenly he could exhibit a power similar to someone who trained for several years!
Even with all this, Qing Yun could feel his power that was similar to an early stage Houtian practitioner, but that was even more unbelievable. A Houtian practitioner shouldn’t be able to display such mighty power. Qing Yun was aware that it was not only because of his physical strength but because of the explosive might that came from his dantian. He clearly felt the crystalline core inside his dantian trembling slightly when he shoot out his punch. Looking at the core Qing Yun could vaguely see a strand of colorless Qi hovering inside it.
Hm, that should be Primordial Qi. The explosive might that was released from my punch should came from this. I never thought that this Primordial Qi would be such an overbearing energy.
The more he thought about it the more eager Qing Yun became. He couldn’t wait to find out more about this [Primordial God Physique] and experience the strength that it will give him. However, Qing Yun felt puzzled about this cultivation technique. Since their descriptions were so similar, he thought that this [Primordial God Physique] shouldn’t be too different from Qing Su’s [Star God Breathing Technique], but that was clearly not the case.
Although Qing Su’s technique was quite heaven defying itself, the power brought by it could still be gauged by this world’s standards which was clearly different from Qing Yun’s technique that had it’s own realms.
Although he was interested in this topic, Qing Yun could just shake his head helplessly. There was no point in thinking about this now as it was impossible for him to find the answer, at least for now.
Qing Yun stretched his body again as he made his way out of the room with his hands behind his head. He found himself in a large courtyard, it was at least several hundred meters wide. There were several two stories and three stories buildings that could contain at least few hundred people. Looking to the side he saw several pavilions and even an artificial pond that contained several species of fish, turtles and other aquatic creatures. This peaceful scenery gave one a warm feeling of being at home.
“Big Brother Yun!” Before Qing Yun could take another step he was stopped by a familiar sweet voice as he turned his head with a smile on his face. Qing Su’s graceful figure was running towards him with her hands behind her back. Looking at her it didn’t seem that her feet touched the ground as she gracefully made her way towards Qing Yun.
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Qing Su smiled as she arrived before Qing Yun, “Do you feel better, Big Brother… Ahh! What are you doing?!” Before she could even react, Qing Yun pulled her into a hug. He didn’t know why but every time he saw her, Qing Yun felt very contented. Aside from those years when they were younger they didn’t spent too much time together, even so he felt a strange feeling of closeness between them. He enjoyed watching her reactions, no matter what expression she made it would be very charming.
“What?” Qing Yun smiled shamelessly as he delivered the same line, “I’m just showing my love for my dear little sister!”
“You..” This time she did not struggle and rested her flushed face on Qing Yun chest, “When did my Big Brother Yun became such a rascal.” Qing Su reached her hands behind Qing Yun and hugged him back.
“Oh, it seems Su’er it’s still Su’er. She won’t abstain to show her love for her Big Brother Yun, even in front of so many people!” Qing Yun said teasingly looking around them. Of course they weren’t alone in this spacious courtyard. There were many young man and women who practiced their martial arts or were cultivating. The youngest one seemed to be around five years old while the oldest was around eighteen to nineteen years of age. Since Qing Yun left his room all their eyes were on him but he didn’t thought it was weird. He already knew that this wasn’t the Qing Clan and he was quite well known around here.
He was already in the center of attention when he appeared and now he could see the eyes of everyone going wide when he hugged Qing Su.
Qing Yun looked at the at the obedient beauty in his arms waiting for her flustered reaction but he was soon left speechless. Qing Su was looking at him with a cheeky smile on her adorable face. Although her face was still a little flushed she didn’t seem to react too much to Qing Yun words as she didn’t mind others seeing them like this.
Qing Yun was baffled, “Whats going on? She had such an exaggerate reaction last time but now…Did something happened while I was cultivating?” Qing Yun was happy to see this younger sister of his behave the same as when they were kids, but he couldn’t deny the fact that he was somewhat disappointed “Ha, her flustered reactions were really adorable…”
“Brother Qing Yun!” A sudden shout was heard as Qing Yun was lost in thoughts. He looked to the side to see a young man rushing towards them. The young man had a handsome face and a well built body. He seemed to be around eighteen years old. His back was straight and with a height of around 1.9 meters, he gave of an imposing aura. Unfortunately his strength could be considered just mediocre at the 4th layer of Houtian realm. At his age, those who could be considered to have at least decent talent would have already achieved the 6th layer of Houtian.
Qing Yun smiled at the young man that bore a close resemblance to Su Xiang, “Mn, this should be uncle Xiang and aunt Yijun son and Xiuying big brother, Su Fen!”.
“Elder Brother Fen, it this younger brother pleasure to finally met you!” Qing Yun exclaimed leaving Su Feng and Qing Su stunned. He laughed softly. “It’s nothing too be surprised about, after all I met Elder Brother Fen before.”
“Hahaha, Brother Yun is really impressive! You were just so small back then but you still remember.” Su Fen laughed loudly and patted Qing Yun’ shoulders, Qing Su already left his embrace when Su Fen shouted. “Good, since you’re willing to call me elder brother I won’t hold back either, from now on we shall be brothers. There’s no need for honorifics between brothers, you can just call me Brother Fen!”
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Qing Yun had a good impression of this honest looking man. Their parents were treating each other as family so there was no reason for them not to treat each other as brothers. He was also Xiuying brother…
“Brother Fen, it’s my honor to have you as my brother!” Qing Yun laughed and patted Su Fen’s shoulder.
“Haha, Good!” Su Fen looked at the young man who gave him a good impression, “But Brother Yun, you really know how to worry others. Aunt Yin and Little Sister Su were really frantic these seven days.”
Qing Yun was confused, “Seven days?”
Qing Su laughed merrily and hugged one of Qing Yun’s arms, “Big Brother Yun, you’ve cultivated for seven days!”
Qing Yun was startled for a moment but he soon understood. It wasn’t weird for someone to cultivate for several months or even years straight, but for his first attempt at cultivation to last seven days…
Su Fen was startled when he saw Qing Su being so affectionate towards Qing Yun. Although she wasn’t exceptionally cold she was always indifferent towards others, especially men. His own little sister being the only exception.
Su Fen let out a strange laugh, “Brother Yun, from now on you should be careful, there would be many young men who will want you're life in the future. After all Little Sister Su is one of the two goddesses of this Tianlong city, there’s hardly any young man who doesn’t wish to woo her.
Qing Yun was startled before he looked at Qing Su. She was giving him a mischievous look as she laughed softly, “Big Brother Yun needs to protect me, if not someone might snatch me away!”
Looking at this merry beauty, Qing Yun couldn’t help but be in a daze before he put on his most serious face and said heroically, “Who dares to snatch you away, if someone dares to have wicked thoughts towards my Little Su they’ll have to get over my dead body!”
“Hehe, Big Brother Yun is the best!” Qing Su smiled gleefully. Her previous bashfulness was completely gone.
By the side, the more Su Fen watched the more astonished he became. He never thought that this seemingly indifferent young lady would fall so bad for Qing Yun. Su Fen was aware of Qing Su feeling towards her big brother. During those past ten years she would always watch over him quietly, but he never thought that her feelings were so strong. Su Fen couldn’t help but sigh helplessly, “It seems there’s a storm approaching Tianlong City.”
“That right, what about mother and others?” Qing Yun asked.
Su Fen smiled, “Father is out of the clan right now, mother should be together with Aunt Yin.” He paused for a moment, “Ah, you don’t have to worry about Aunt, she was already cured of the poison.”
Qing Yun smiled and nodded, “Brother Fen, it’s been a while since I was out, why don’t you and Su’er show me around the city?”
“Mn, you would feel sluggish after so much time, alright Brother Yun let’s go right now!”
With that, they were ready to head out but Qing Yun suddenly recalled something and let out an awkward cough, “Brother Fen, about that room…”
Su Fen looked at Qing Yun puzzled before he realized something, “Haha, Brother Yun you don’t have to worry about that,” he paused for a moment, “Damn, look at me, I didn’t even congratulate my brother for his recovery!”
Qing Yun smiled, “It’s alright Brother Fen, why don’t we have a drink together tonight and catch up to some things.”
“Haha, that’s a good idea Brother Yun!” Su Fen laughed loudly, he seemed very pleased with Qing Yun suggestion.
…..
Not long after the three of them left, two graceful figures appeared inside the destroyed room.
“What do you think Sister Yijun.” Qing Yin asked, her voice trembled slightly.
“This is indeed unexpected. When Qing Su told us I still couldn’t believe, but this,” Su Yijun glanced around the destroyed room, her expression was a bit unnatural, but one could see a trace of glee in her eyes.
Qing Yin eyes were moist as she could barely contain her tears, “The heavens didn’t forsake him.”
Su Yijun smiled, “Qing Yun is her son after all. I never thought he will be ordinary, but when I discovered his crippled body I couldn’t think of any solution, even our Grand Asgard Mistress wouldn’t be able to cure him,” She paused for a moment, “Sister Yin, did Qing Yun meet some expert ten years ago?”
“I’m not sure, back then he would always sneak out and head into the mountains, if he really meet someone it should be then.”
“Back then there was no one who could cure Qing Yun, but he suddenly fell into a coma just so he can woke up with his body cured ten years later. In those years his condition always seemed unnatural, there was no reason for him to be in a coma for such a long period of time, or at least not a reason we could discover. If this state was really induced by an expert to cure him… that mysterious expert should have attained an inconceivable realm.” Su Yijun spoke every word with a trace of admiration.
“But who could be this expert and why would he help Qing Yun?” Qing Yin was puzzled.
“I’m not sure, but this is his blessing. It seems that this expert hasn’t just cured Qing Yun, he also imparted Qing Yun with a powerful cultivation technique. The feeling I got from his Qi is particularly strange, just like with Qing Su, even I’m not able to read his cultivation. It’s highly possible, that expert acknowledged Qing Yun as his disciple, if not I can see why he would cure him but there wouldn’t be any reason to impart him with such a powerful technique.”
Qing Yin and Su Yijun fell into silence. They both wore astonished looks thinking about this.
“Sister Yijun, you really can’t tell Su’er cultivation?”
“No, I think that she should have brokethrough to the Houtian realm already, but I can’t tell her cultivation,” Su Yijun voice had a trace of helplessness, “I never saw such a weird cultivation technique, it should be as strong as our Frozen Cloud Arts but that still doesn’t explain how can it mask one’s cultivation so well. Someone who can take out two such powerful technique…” Su Yijun shook her head.
Qing Yin let out a sigh, “Let’s not think about this for now, if Yun’er has really meet such an expert, that’s his blessing, the heavens were too cruel to him before, he deserve this.”
Su Yijun glanced at the destroyed room one more time before she waved her hand as both of them made their out.
“That’s right, Sister Yin what should we do about the other matter? Now that Qing Yun Cultivation is restored there shouldn’t be any problems.”
“Hehe, Sister Yijun, I don’t think there would be any problems with Su’er!” Qing Yin said with a playful tone.
Su Yijun couldn’t help but feel depressed, “If our Xiuying wouldn’t be so stubborn,” she let out a sigh, “I can just hope that Qing Yun will show us a miracle.”
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