《The Start of a Unusual Life in an Alternate Reality(Soul-AR. You know like solar)》I talk to you about reviews and a review on a book i just read
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So this is basically another "i explain things" chapter.
I just want to let you guys know that i appreciate when you guys rate my book, especially when its a good review.
BUT IF YOU ARE GONNA PUT A 2.5 SCORE....
at least write out an explanation as to why i got such a bad score. How can i improve of you dont tell me what i did wrong? Unless you just put that review as a troll.
in theat case..
You can go fuck yourself you dumbass troll. Fuck yourself with a flaming cactus.
Now onto a review i have for a few books ive been reading recently.
Im doing the reviews here in a chapter because when i try to go to review on their fiction pages, it doesnt let me cause it always says the review needs a title.
I CANT PUT A FUCKING REVIEW TITLE IF THERE IS NO FUCKING TITLE BOX.
You have no idea how long i spent trying to find the title box. Im really fucking salty about that shit.
I even tried going to the help pages but it says the help pages are under construction.
Anyway here are my review on the books that i can remember at the moment and feel i should mention.
Also in this i can give a zeroscore unlike with the royalroad review star system. Some books just deserve zeroes.
Emerillia:the traped mind project.
5/5*
Great book. The characters have depth, the story actually has plot, the grammar is impeccable, and i just enjoy how the mc Dave is op yet at the same time the others around him dont get left out due to how they are op themselves.
Apocolypse judgement day
0/5*
No character depth, no rationality, no world building, atrocious grammar, no end goal, unlikeable characters. The mc is of the variety where he is op for no fucking reason. Then the author tries to inster a bullshit story by saying it from an immortal lovers point of view when we have no idea why the fuck we should care. There was no time spent on how he wanted his characters and story to be. Its so fucking cancerous that every person in the Saint Jude Childrens fund would all immediately die out from how cancerous it is. Even if the english language isnt the authors native language, he shouldve at least TRIED to make it legible.
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Then the author has the gall to say that its his second story because he couldnt figure out how to build the world in his first story. Very obviousy they failed to do that in this one as well.
My mc Dorian at least has to learn about how things work before he can even learn a skill. My story at least has some sort of depth. My story at least has an end goal. My world has some personality to it.
I feel offended as an ameture author that someone would post the type of drivel such as Apocolypse judgement day.
Its almost as bad as that one story that was here on royal road a while ago. The author tried to make it a paradoy of every cliche there could be in a fan fic but it turned out absolutely atrocious. The story couldnt stand on its own.
then te author tried to bring in views by creating fake accounts to make fake good reviews. People figured it was the author because the reviews were just as cancerous as the story.
Mythrans Master of all 5/5*
Everything is great about this story. Read it and youll understand.
The Arcane Emperor
5/5*
Clockwork 5/5*
The Rude Time Traveller(i think this was the name)
5/5* its been forever since ive seen an update for tis book but from what ive read, ive loved it.
World Seed 4.8/5
There is very little wrong with this book, but if i did list and issue, it would be lack of character development outside of 4 characters in this book.
Also i really wanted Ackbar to yell "ITS A TRAP!!"
All of Scottie Futch's books here on royalroad from Galatea Crystalim to Blackthorne are 5/5.
Scott knows how to mae his characters likable and even if they are a side charscter, hes built them to have life oftheir own. This dude deserves the recognition as an elite author.
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Lazy Ash 4.5/5
Due to its lack of chapter length and wait time. Wish ths would update faster. Besides that 5/5*
RIGHT now thats all i can remember. I need tongo throughbmy bookmarks but i have so many, my laziness os preventing me from doing so.
THOSE WERE MY OPINIONS AD VIEWS. IF YOU TAKE OFFENSE, STOP WHINING LIKE A BITCH AND LEARN TO TAKE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM.
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITSISM BEING THE KEY WORDS HERE.
Hope you have a nice evening,moring,day, or whatever time it is that you read this and i hope you continue to enjoy my story
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