《The New Start By Sudar》Chapter 11 Too Much Pride
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We were heading to the smelting area they had a huge furnace for smelting and a lot of tools for different kind of purposes
without question we entered the room and Luke started explaining.
-Now then it is decided that you two are going to compete against each other so i me as the judge in this
competition will tell you what weapon you shall create it will be a simple 2 edged sword with a normal
one sided handle the material to create the weapon and the tools you can make it of is in this room
i will judge by look,durability,strenght and flexibility and if you get bonus propertys on the sword i will count it
as bonus points any questions ?
I was thinking and just nodded to the description of the sword and so Luke said
-Good you have 8 Hours time and now Begin !
At that both me and Lucy moved to the metal ingots on the table I didnt know what the ores were or
what they did i hoped to get the identify skill before coming here but this opportunity was perfect
so i couldnt leave anyways i because i didnt know what ore was what i started tasting it at that Lucy got a
confused expression Luke on the other hand wasnt surprised it seemed like he expected something like this.
The reason i was tasting the ore was because i didnt know what it was but if i would taste it i could determine
what kind of ore it was and after the 7 bite i found iron ore well the taste at least so i choose it and made my way to the
furnace and started smelting it in the mean time Lucy choose her ore she choose 2 types one grey one white like and also started
smelting she probably wants to make a different type of ore.
The smelting was surprisingly fast it took only 1 hour to smelt and i made my casting ready and poured the hot iron
onto it making something like a long iron rod and waited until it cooled down enough.
In the mean time i looked over Lucy she seemed to be really focused and poured the hot ore onto the casting she
looked like she was possessed by something.
After some tiny adjustments to the rod i came to the anvil and started hitting it Lucy on the other hand still fidget
around her piece and sometimes looked to my side with a confused expression Luke also made a complex
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face he didnt seem like he knows what i am doing well i came from a different world and have a lot of experience
and different techniques so it isnt that weird.
After sometime i finished my blade and the handle i burned the blade another time at that Luke seemed to want to
say something but stopped himself until now Lucy also made that strange face is it really that weird i was thinking.
And again i hammered the blade making it a little longer this time and now it had the size of a normal sword
and then i started sharping it and put the handle on i customized the handle a little and made the blade balanced in
all edges and was finished.
On the other hand Lucy was still hitting her rod it took her 4 more hours to finish what i figured is that all of
the tools and equipment had some kind of magic on them that made smithing easier i would normally take me a day or two
to make a sword but here the process just was too fast i am happy about it.
Lucy finished her sword it was a grey colored sword with a weird shaped blade well that was my opinion in comparison
to me sword it looked better mine looked like pure silver with a straight blade then hers and so Luke came and said.
-Well done both of you you made the best you could but now is time for me to judge
-father look at mine first !
Lucy said quick and loud it was like she shouted and for some reason she looked really nervous maybe because i
showed her that i can smith she thought that i might win but either way i dont care and just nodded to her statement
-well so be it give it me
Lucy gave the sword to Luke while holding it he said "Identifiy"
Identification a skill or more like a all purpose spell essential to every kind of crafter in books it said that the
skill when used links with your bracelet and shows you the description but how it really works i have
no idea it was written that you needed someone to teach you for it to use.
-Hmm its a good sword "show description Damon and Lucy"
[box border=1 cellpadding=0 cellspacing=3 width=80% bordercolor=#202020 bgcolor=#f5f5f5][col colspan=4 valign=top width=100% bordercolor=#202020 bgcolor=#f5f5f5]Shadow Steel Sword
Normal
Durability 200/200
Damage 25-40
A Shadow Blade made by the talented young Blacksmith Lucy the blade has a good shape giving the user more range
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and the handle for more flexibility
Property:
+15 Strenght
Has Wither Effect When Cut[/col][/box]
I got a little surprised seeing the window show up so suddenly i am guessing he showed us the description with his
Identification skill like the status window
-Next is Damons Sword
I gave him my sword lookin at her sword i could more or less guess by just looking how good it was but still i am not
worried.
When Luke grabbed the sword he had a complex face he didnt identify it yet but just inspected it he seemed to thing
it was just a normal sword and just
-Identify
After that he was reading the description slowly turning pale and eyes wide with a open mouth both me and and Lucy got
Confused
-What is it father is it that bad
She made a mischievous smile saying that
-You should see for yourself before judging Lucy "show description Lucy and Damon"
[box border=1 cellpadding=0 cellspacing=3 width=80% bordercolor=#202020 bgcolor=#f5f5f5][col colspan=4 valign=top width=100% bordercolor=#202020 bgcolor=#f5f5f5]Iron Sword Of Trickery
Artifact
Durability 850/850
Damage 210
Made By a Unknown Master Blacksmith the sword was made with the thought of a Normal Robust Iron Sword because of
the blacksmiths skills the sword turned out to be anything else Then Normal looking like a plain iron sword with no real
Damage it tricks its opponents making them lower their guard for a opening because of modified handle the swords
flexibility makes use of the users wrist making the sword more suitable for any user.The blade itself looks dull
but in reality it is sharp as if it was made out of mythril and has a shining color to it.
Property:
+40 Strenght
+55 Agility
+25 Wisdom
Has Illusion Effect When Cut
Has Burn Effect When Cut
Has Confusion Effect When Cut[/col][/box]
Everyone was speechless at the sword description but what i thought was
HOLLY SHIT I EVEN HALF ASSED THIS SWORD !!!! (In his mind)
Because everyone didnt say anything and just looked at the sword and then after a minute Lucy and Luke stared at
Damon who gave those stares right back
-ehm eeh hmm
Luke didnt seem to know what to say every moment when he wanted to say something he stopped and thought about it but
Lucy broke the silence
-Hey how did you make a Artifact !
-What !?
I thought when i looked closer i saw that the description said Artifact as in Rarity In my knowledge the rarity was
Common>Normal>Magical>Unique>Artifact>Legendary
It was just under Legendary and then my thought process sped up
What will happen if i really try hard on my next weapon will i get a Legendary Item or !?
My thoughts were in myself and no one could reach me Lucy was shouting at me how i did it and accused me in
cheating but because she saw me smith it wasnt possible in the other hand Luke spoke up
-Enough Lucy
Lucy got quite and Luke spoke
-Damon i have a question did you ever blacksmith even ones ?
While thinking about it i was pierced by Lucys stare and said
-It was my first time
I answered it wasnt a lie in this life it really was my first time if he asked if i was a blacksmith in my previous life
Lucy and Luke just started at me but i could hear Lucy mutter
-No way even thought i tried so hard why ?
After those words they were quite so Luke probably didnt hear them but then i could see tears in her eyes falling down
I approached her.
-DONT TOUCH ME !
Luke seemed to want to say something but was cut off
Because lucy started running out of the smithy i wanted
to chase after her but was stopped by Luke
-Wait damon i probably wont need to tell you that you
passed but...
-Does that matter she just ran crying
Luke seemed to have a confused face but then his face turned Like he was relieved of something
-Hmm yes you should probably chase after her
Luke threw my sword to me in which i nodded and
ran after her i could hear Luke saying some words
-If its you i will entrust you my precious
And so i ran after lucy because of perception it wasnt hard
she was east from here and so i began to run.
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Hello guys i happy that you guys read my novel i wont stop
Until i finish this series every 2 days one or two chapters
And thanks for bright for the item rankings i forgot the word
For it and wanted to ask someone or look it but so thanks
Now about my errors or what is called i forgot its a long word with p or something when i started writing and proof read i noticed that i dont write some words even thought i had the intention to it was really emberassing well i will try to change but it may take a while i study other languages and i myself am mongolian the name sudar is mongolian in mean scroll in my knowledge i am also no good in mongolian language i was born in german and my mother
Teached me russia not really teached but spoke well enough with myself about proof readers i dont know who to ask really i have friend who is good in english maybe he will help until then bear with me plz -sudar
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