《The New Start By Sudar》About the Fiction
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I said i would finish the fiction when it hit 30 or 40 chapters
And start a new more epic one with better experience on
english writing i honestly not bored with the story so far
i have already a good idea about the school arc and where he fights with some organization with the help of people he got friends with but i have to make up somethink for his opness it may sound cruel if but i may or may not make a tragedy to befall him who knows so give me some advice
And lets keep this going
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The Descarrian Abyss: Level One
[2/6/20 : Major rewrites and restrucuring for Chapters 1-4]Framed for the murder of his landlady, sixteen year old Arahn Keys has been sentenced to death. A last minute reprieve comes in the form of the slightly mad cartographer Calan’dal, who hires him and four other death row inmates as bodyguards for his dangerous expedition into the bowls of a labyrinthine dungeon known as the Descarrian Abyss. Should they succeed in helping the deranged elf reach his goal, the legendary Heart of the Abyss, Arahn and his fellow criminals will be free to go. Alongside his new elven master Arahn is joined by Morvar: a half-troll brute, Cathran: a young herbalist’s apprentice who professes her innocence, and Evan and Lem: a pair of thieving goblin twins. Together they descend into the Abyss, knowing they will have to work together or else perish in the bowels of the dark labyrinth, becoming victims of the deadly traps and ferocious creature’s legend to reside within. [This is an early draft. Looking for feedback on characters/story as I work on my ideas.]
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A Story That You Wouldn't Want To Read +
You have read stories, any kind of stories, The Uncommon and the Common, The Popular and The Unpopular, The Interesting and the Uninteresting, The Good and the Bad. Well If one would have to choose which one to write it will always be the first to be mentioned but what would unfold before you if you decide it - will be the latter! Because is nothing more extraordinary than telling what is ordinary! P.S. That's just the author rambling about something, something to draw some readers to read a Story that you wouldn't even want to read. Regarding the pace of how I pass new chapters. Won't be doing for a while
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Birth of the Dragons
Dragons are majestic creatures, free from any conflict and intelligence outweigh even the elves. You must be either a powerful mage or a talented fighter to kill them.Dragons have countless riches and secrets, and stick together often form a family. These families form then larger groups and so has just created one of the most powerful clans.Come and read about story with dragons(story will have 5 more races so don't worry :) ) , magic, hate,love and family bonds.The War will coming to Arcania and only the strongest will survive. Dear readers I wanted to share with you the epilogue of the book I myself write slowly. I've always dreamed to write something and see if I have any talent. Please write your opinion, thoughts or comments, will be very helpful to me :). I will work on my story now and try create something wonderful!!
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Welcome to the Upward Bound System, V.3
They say third times the charm. With every iteration we improve. When the System came to Earth, it changed everything. It is a grand thing used by gods and men alike. What had once been fantasy was now a reality. People believed and so that belief gave ideas the strength to manifest. "Welcome Founder of the SCP Foundation" It stirred the gods from their deathly slumbers. Stirred by an almost mechanical voice promising them new life, and followers as countless as the stars. All it asked of them was for their help. Help with what though? The old gods, the forgotten gods, and the new gods drew breath, and then made their voices heard. On a day like any other Dante was home from college watching the Presidential inauguration with his parents. Little did they know that this day would turn out to be anything but ordinary. That this was the day everything changed. Dante is not your typical MC. While he has a troubled past, he looks forward to the future. Follow Dante, his parents, and the new friends he meets along the way as they traverse this new system world. However, before they can explore this new world they must complete, the Tutorial. (Please note: This tutorial will be part of the story. Rather than a skim of the information, you will get to experience it in depth. So the tutorial will last a good while.) A much slower style of LitRpg than what you would normally find. Follow Dante and his party as they find their world taken over by the system. Welcome people of Earth to the Upward Bound System!... With the system's arrival so too does great danger come... The tools of your survival shall be granted upon you by the system... Please note, I don't own the art. Please enjoy the story, and if you don't please leave a comment and I will try to improve the story for you. This is the second version of this story, so feel free to check out the original and compare the two.
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Dungeon God
Avian having never went anywhere besides his home and work, he finally goes somewhere that's not home or work for the first time and dies. Now follow him as he roams the World of Serenity creating dungeons that are unrestricted and powerful. Do no expect regular updates i release when i have time to write. Do not expect perfect grammar too, i am bad at spelling so feel free to point that stuff out
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The day I became leader of the Soviet Union
A story made by me. Starring me and other people.
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