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Chapter that was meant for friday, but never had access to my computer so...yeah, enjoy!

So like, I had this weird dream, it was about this story actually. Never thought I would be into this that I would actually have a dream about it lol, but yeah that dream gave me many ideas.....

Soaring Dragon Continent, Sky Serpent School

A group of beautiful females who were wearing grey robes appeared, each one of these women could make any man want to kill thousands for them. Each one of these women had a blue rose insignia on their shoulder, and in front of the grey robed females was one female who was wearing a dark green robe. Her looks were way above the rest of the females in the group, she could be considered a peerless beauty. Long dark blue hair that stretched down to her ample buttocks, pure white skin, small pink lips, with azure eyes that seemed like it would suck you in.

Instantly being attracted by the beauty of these females, all the male disciples felt a rise on the lower end of their bodies, and their heart beats sped up to an extremely quick speed. As if their heart beats were in tune with each other, all you could hear was ba-dum, da-dum, over and over.

The females disciples who also noticed the beauty of the group of females felt their face fluster, emotions were stirring up in them and they didn’t even know how to react. These female disciples didn’t have the emotions of jealousy, or envy, in this moment what they felt was as if they were being attracted to a force that was higher than anything they’ve ever felt. The female disciples faces turn red, and some of them fainted on the spot, they couldn’t stand up to the beauty that was present in front of them.

Even Qiu Zhen who only took a glance at the group that arrived felt as if his heart was going to jump out of his chest. Qiu Zhen only took one glance, if he continued looking he felt as if he might fall in love with the dark green robed woman. Qiu Zhen has seen many women who can be considered beautiful, but the amount that reaches the dark green robed woman’s beauty can be counted on one hand. Even Qiu Zhen’s wife was just a little bit more beautiful than her, and she was an existence that couldn’t even be considered to be made on earth.

Ye Fa who was so angry that he was ready to kill everyone around him instantly felt his anger subside. When he noticed the group of females, even he had to take countless glances at them before his attention landed on the one who seemed to be their leader. “Li Lan, what makes someone as generous as you step foot into this area. To grace these inner disciples with your presence, they don’t deserve such a reward.”

The green robed woman looked at Ye Fa before he gaze fell onto Qiu Zhen. “Ye Fa, it seems to me that the Death Blood faction is getting more and more disgraceful as time goes on. You actually attacked a disciple who is several levels beneath yours.” When her voice sounded out, it was cold, yet it pierced the hearts of several male disciples.

Ye Fa obviously didn’t want to get on Li Lan’s bad side, he knew what he was doing seemed wrong in the eyes of her, but how could she understand that it was Ye Che who ordered him to do this. Ye Fa couldn’t help but stare at Li Lan’s body, her voluptuous body caught his eye and her chest was sticking out beyond the other female's chest. Just her body alone could attract the attention of any male, but coupled with her face it just made her seem like a heavenly existence.

Sighing Ye Fa said, “Brother Ye Che order for him to be taught a lesson… however, if you were to tell that to brother Ye Che’s face i’m sure he would let him go.”

If Li Lan went to see Ye Che then it would be the same as if she was attending his invitation, naturally she wouldn’t go. Li Lan coldly stared at Ye Fa, before she took another look at Qiu Zhen. Everytime she looked at Qiu Zhen, she didn’t feel compelled to help him, nor did he have the best looks she has ever seen. Sure, Qiu Zhen could be considered handsome, but the men who have tried to court her are all men who are well known and handsome. However, when she looked at him, the look in his eyes had something that drew her closer, and she couldn’t take her eyes off him.

Li Lan snorted at Ye Fa, “Hmph! Ye Che is just a dog chasing chickens because he can’t get a swan. You go back and tell him that if he touches this disciple he will never chase chickens again, let alone be able to call himself a dog, he’ll be honored to be considered a cat.”

Light laughter arose in the disciples who were still around, but under the murderous gaze of Ye Fa, they instantly stopped. They all knew the only reason he didn’t kill them now for laughing was because Li Lan was in his presence, but if she wasn’t they would all be dead. Li Lan is one of the top core disciples in the school, how could Ye Fa compare to her in strength.

Ye Fa put away his black axe and coldly looked at Qiu Zhen. “Trash, the next time we meet, you won’t be so lucky to have the protection of a god.”

When Qiu Zhen was facing Ye Fa, naturally he felt some pressure between them, but Qiu Zhen still had some tricks up his sleeve. In the Sky Burning techniques, there is one move that could have let him win in the duel, but before he had a chance to even begin Li Lan intervened. In Qiu Zhen’s heart, she not only saved him from Ye Fa, but also saved him from showing his trump card.

After regaining his composure under the countless eyes of the beauties, Qiu Zhen no longer seemed phased by their appearance, after all he has had and tasted a woman just as beautiful as Li Lan. Qiu Zhen bowed to Li Lan, “Disciple Qiu Zhen has many thanks for elder sister Li Lan’s help. If this mere first Dao realm disciple can help you in any way please speak.”

Li Lan didn’t save Qiu Zhen because he was in a dire situation, to be honest if it was any other person she wouldn’t dare show her appearance. However, Qiu Zhen attracted her because he was actually brave enough to fight someone who he had no chance of winning against, in her mind she couldn’t let such a brave person die at such a young age. If Qiu Zhen kept being brave and taking challenges above his own, he might lose his life one day, but if he surpasses the challenge then the heavens will shake under his name. Li Lan felt that he has much potential, considering his bravery, she took a chance at protecting him this time.

Seeing, as to how Li Lan didn’t respond to him, Qiu Zhen felt somewhat bitter inside. “It seems as if one wants to get a hold of a heavenly fruit, one must be able to stand above the other challengers.” Qiu Zhen inwardly sighed, and noticed that Li Lan and the group of women were leaving.

“Wait!” Qiu Zhen’s voice sounded out and the male disciples were looking at him as if they wanted to murder him.

Qiu Zhen has stopped a goddess that wants to leave, not only did the goddess save his life, but he has the never to stop her from leaving. The female disciples shot Qiu Zhen a pitiful look, to them it seemed as if Qiu Zhen wanted to keep looking at the goddess he could never have.

Li Lan turned around, and her facial expression made it seemed as if she was annoyed. She only stopped the fight, she didn’t want to have another foolish male trying to court her. When she turned around, she found a small brown bag being thrown towards her.

Qiu Zhen bowed once again, “Again, many thanks elder sister Li Lan.” Swish! His body seemed as if it disappeared, but Li Lan made out what he did, but didn’t speak.

One of the females looked at Li Lan and the brown bag in her hand, she couldn’t help but ask, “Sister Li Lan, what’s in the bag?”

:o meeting someone is always nice :D