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Soaring Dragon Continent, Sky Serpent School

Everything happened just like Li Lan said, she left the school after four days while a mysterious girl enrolled just before she left. This mysterious girl captured the hearts of countless males, while gaining the envy and jealousy of the female disciples. Many inner disciples voiced their opinion to the elders of the school asking how could she just enroll without an exam, and already enter into the ranks of the inner disciples. The elders explained that she had obtained entry through a special method, and that she is already strong enough to enter the ranks of inner disciples.

Qiu Zhen couldn’t help but laugh inwardly, these inner disciples would never find out that Li Lan used her status to have her enroll. If they knew that they would either calm down or blow a fuse, he actually wanted to see what would happened. When Qiu Zhen thought back to how he was somewhat forced to agree, he couldn’t help but want to bang his head against a boulder.

Sure he would get to be around someone who looked very similar to his wife, but they were total opposites. He wished he could go back and punch himself for agreeing to meet her, if he never did then he wouldn’t have been in this situation now. But alas, there are a few loopholes in the promises with Li Lan, and Qiu Zhen would use them to his advantage.

When he thought about the many loopholes, he couldn’t help but laugh, it seems like he’ll have some fun. While thinking to himself, Qiu Zhen decided to pay a visit to Li Huan. With the way she seemed, he doubted that she would leave her house to hang around with others, but when he arrived it was something else.

“Li Haun, come let big bro show you around!”

“Li Haun, don’t listen to him, this brother will help you cultivate, and show you only the best martial skills.”

When he arrived there was a group of male inner disciples yelling to her from outside her house. Her beauty seemed to make these males go head over heels for her, Qiu Zhen didn’t know whether to laugh or cry, it seems like they’ll bother her and stop her from cultivating.

When she arrived at the school, the name the elders were given was Li Haun, but obviously to Qiu Zhen that wasn’t her real name. Her surname was Hau, but this time it was Li, which meant she was using a fake name. ‘Seems like Li Lan is taking every precaution.’

Qiu Zhen pushed his way through the crowd of males, arriving at the door. Just when he was about to knock some other inner disciples started yelling at him.

“Who the fuck are you!? What gives you the right to go and knock on her door, huh?”

“Yeah, get down and go to the back of the line. I have first dibs on Li Haun!”

The males kept yelling saying how they seen her first, or how they were the ones who fell in love with her first. To Qiu Zhen it started out amusing, but shortly after it got annoying real quick. “Shut Up!”

When Qiu Zhen said that, the group of men glared at him with anger. Qiu Zhen started pointing towards people in the crowd, “You, you, and you, you three are so fucking annoying. She has just arrived and you claim her as your own, but none of you dared to come up to her door and knock, but yet you yell at me when I do? Hmph, you should know your place!”

“Fuck you! Nothing but a lowly first ranked Dao realm disciple, and you have the nerve to talk to me like that, don’t make this daddy teach you a lesson!”

Qiu Zhen started laughing and stepped away from the door. “You… my daddy? Ha, you can’t be anyone’s daddy let alone mines. Shoo, come back when you sprout some real hair.”

The disciple who Qiu Zhen was talking to face instantly turned red, it was as if he wanted to blow steam out his ears. “Haha, brother Lu Bing, just get Ye Fa to teach him another lesson. Oh… what’s that? You heard Ye Fa’s name so you’re running away?”

Qiu Zhen stopped laughing, and his eyes turned cold. Swish! His body flashed greatly shocking all the males, and he appeared right in front of the male who said Ye Fa’s name. This disciple was one two heads taller than Qiu Zhen, but Qiu Zhen still stared him in the eye. His eyes held a bit of murderous intent, and his aura seemed as if it was being restrained from killing the male in front of him. Qiu Zhen’s voice sounded, and it was deathly cold, “Ye Fa? Only you would be scared of such a dog.”

The disciple shivered when he heard Qiu Zhen’s voice, making him take a few steps back. He didn’t think Qiu Zhen would actually come down and single him out, but he had the strength of the fourth Dao realm so he wasn’t that scared. “Say that to his face, don’t make it seem like no one knows. Brother Ye Fa was going to murder you, but you had the protection of a sister Li Lan, without her help you would have died. Stop acting high and mighty, if brother Ye Fa hears about this then he’ll kill you.”

Qiu Zhen took one step forward, “Oh really, I was going to die at the hands of Ye Fa… I think not. Here, why don’t you pass on a message to him for me.” Boom!

Qiu Zhen struck the male disciple sending him flying backwards, when he finally stopped he passed out on the spot. His chest was caved in a bit, but Qiu Zhen hardly used much of his strength.

Qiu Zhen turned around and coldly stared at the other group of males whose jaws were wide open almost dropping to the ground. Never would they have believed that a first Dao realm disciple would beat one at the fourth realm, but he did it with only one move. They were passed shocked, they couldn’t even make out the situation. “Now listen, I, Qiu Zhen want you all to leave! Tell Ye Fa what happened, and tell him i’ll be waiting at the life and death arena whenever he wants.”

The group of males felt as if they heard something so great, but it was hard to comprehend at that moment. The disciple in front of them is calling out Ye Fa to a life and death match, and he isn’t even scared. The only word that passed through their minds were ‘Fierce’, but they still didn’t move. It seemed as if their feet was stuck to the ground, Qiu Zhen who seemed so weak before felt like a giant. “Didn’t you hear me!? Move it!”

Once his cold voice was heard again the countless males instantly dispersed, they didn’t want to be next after they seen what happened to the other guy. Qiu Zhen dispersed his aura and went back up to Li Huan’s house and knocked on the door.

Knocking on the door a few times, he had no answer, and his eyebrow started twitching. ‘This girl… won’t even answer the door.’ Without waiting for a reply, Qiu Zhen opened the door and stepped in, when he did Li Huan was seated on the floor meditating. It seemed as if she sensed that Qiu Zhen entered and opened her eyes, “Leave the pills then you can leave.” Her voice was cold and after she closed her eyes once again to begin meditating.

Qiu Zhen went out the house and picked up a few small pebbles before returning to the room. Pew! He flicked a pebble at her, which flew through the air fast and hit her in the middle of her forehead. Li Huan’s head went back and she placed her hand on her forehead, she sent a death stare at Qiu Zhen. “Y-y-you, how dare you!?”

Qiu Zhen flicked another pebble at her, but she dodged it. “Oh, you know how to speak other words, that's good.”

Li Haun gritted her teeth, she couldn’t believe that the person in front of her would actually harm her. “Didn’t you hear what Li Lan said, you are suppose to help me cultivate and protect me. Obviously you are breaking one of those promises, hmph, just leave the pills and i’ll forget about this matter.”

Qiu Zhen flicked two more pebbles at her, but this time the speed was doubled. Li Huan dodged one but the other hit her in the stomach. The force behind that pebble was greater than the one before, she couldn’t help but hold her stomach.

Qiu Zhen glared at her coldly, he couldn’t let his mind be confused, the person in front of him was not his wife. “That is not the way to speak to someone. You, I don’t know who you are, but I know you aren’t that important. You should not at too arrogant if you can’t back yourself up, I might protect you from others, but that doesn’t mean from myself. Second, I didn’t necessarily agree to give you pills, if you were so great you wouldn’t need them to begin with. Lastly, you will address me as master Qiu Zhen when you speak to me.”

Li Haun felt like she was thrown to a wolf, and she couldn’t even protect herself. Where she’s from she was treated nicely and everyone looked forward to what she was going to achieve, but now she has to rely on this ruthless male in front of her. How could she let this happen, but because she can’t do anything by herself she can only hold back her anger. Her teeth made grinding noises before she spoke, “Just give m-”

Another pebble found its way hitting her, and she fell over. Qiu Zhen turned around, “I might protect you, but for cultivation pills… you’ll earn them yourself. As for what grade and rank they are… depends on you.” Qiu Zhen walked out the door, Li Haun needed his protection he didn’t need hers, so why should he be kind to her. Even if she looks like his wife, she isn’t her so he has to force his emotions down and teach her how to behave.

“Qiu Zhen, it’s good to see you again.” A voice was heard from above Li Haun’s house, and it came from none other than Ye Fa. He was surrounded by five males, and it seemed as if he was in a good move.

Qiu Zhen grinned, “It seems you’ve gotten my message?”

Might or might not return to my 2-3 day releases since cbt for that game is over.