《The Mad Deity’s Chaotic Trial》Chapter 1: Enter
Advertisement
A collection of groans left a trio of mouths. Up in a large brown tree with white streaks laid the three with limbs caught in the numerous branches. They had to have fallen from higher up to manage such positions.
The first to manage audible speech was a young woman with long hazel hair. There were gold flecks in her disoriented and half-lidded emerald gaze. Her blue sundress was tangled - and in some cases, pierced - by the many branches that had partially ensnared her.
"...everyone alive?" she asked as she struggled to free herself, only briefly getting a glance at how far they were off the ground and where one of her sandals had fallen to. The voice was light in its dulcet tones.
"Wow, you do care, Lily~" said another female's voice - this one slightly huskier in comparison.
The first speaker grumbled. "It's Lilian," she said as she looked up to see the speaker caught in the branches like she was. "Don't let this situation fool you into thinking we're friends, Gwendolyn. I'm just not a fan of anyone dying."
"Just call me Gwen like you used to--"
"Not happening."
Above Lilian was Gwendolyn who was more tangled than she was because of the guitar case on her person. The blond had a couple of purple streaks in her hair and appeared to be similar age to Lilian but they couldn't have looked more contrasting with her black hoodie and distressed jeans combination. Lilian's frown was like trenches dug into her features; Gwen being with her made this more insufferable.
"Sora, are you okay?" asked Lilian.
"I am fine," said Sora, the tanned male that was hung up like the others were, but out of their sight in another part of the tree. His t-shirt was torn from the odd angle he was at and his voice was quite androgynous in tone. "Just staring at the green sky."
The girls looked up. If their uncomfortable position in the tree didn't firmly deliver the point, their view of the above did. This wasn't their world and it wrote off the possibility of preceding events as a surreal dream brought on by Lilian’s utter rage.
I just wanted to ask Michael out for some tea...then Gwendolyn just showed up and ruined that...then...then all this!
==================
Lilian remembered the scene turning from arguing with Gwendolyn in the street to ending up in a dark void facing a mirror with a golden border. Her reflection stared back at her with void-like eyes. It was through this that she realized she wasn’t alone as the reflections of two others were alongside her, each with black stares.
Advertisement
She had quickly turned on Gwen - blaming her for this extension of her bad day - before an echoing voice grabbed their attention.
Interesting...just one thing to test first… went the voice.
Then something happened. There was a feeling in the middle of her forehead. It didn’t hurt, but it certainly made her feel ill. Looking at her demented reflection made her feel worse with the added visual aspect. It was like her forehead was replaced with dough and an invisible finger was poking into it, leaving a deep impression. Gwen appeared to be looking as unsettled as she was. Sora appeared to be having an anxiety attack, clawing at what wasn’t able to be clawed at to stop the sensation. After a few moments of this, the echoing voice spoke again.
You meet our qualifications…
Then the void was no longer solid. The trio started falling. As their consciousness started to fade as they fell, Lilian swore she heard the voice again - this time in her mind.
For what you desire...unlock the gate and hold Chaos in your hands…
===============
Lilian struggled to free herself from the branches, fairly sure she could manage her way down. She managed to swing her white stocking-clad legs to start climbing down. As she neared the ground, however, part of the tree came off in her hand. She flailed a bit as she fell until she got her legs underneath her. It wasn’t the perfect landing as she stumbled about in the aquamarine grass, trying to get her balance. She finally did and at the same time she looked back at the tree she climbed down, she heard a loud thud and a groan of agony. Seeing a leg sticking out from around the other side of the tree, Lilian recognized it as Sora’s.
Lilian rushed around to help him up. She was surprised how light he seemed to be. “Are you alright!?” she asked.
“I’m okay. I think,” said Sora, slowly leaving his crumpled position on the ground with Lilian’s help. His black hair stopped just before the end of his earlobes. “At least I didn’t hit my head. Thank you, Lily-- I mean Lilian.” His brown eyes quickly looked away as he flinched.
Lilian noticed how much he jerked at his verbal gaff. “It’s fine if you call me Lily...sometimes,” she said as she attempted to calm him with a calm smile and gently held him up.
Advertisement
“But I thought--”
“It’s just her that I get mad at about it.”
“You two must have known each other a long time,” said Sora, gaining more confidence in his voice as he was back on his two feet.
“Since 7th grade,” she said with a huff, smoothing a hand through her hair to remove the leaves and splinters of wood from her head. “Thought I’d never see her again after high school ended, but I guess I’m more cursed than I thought.”
“You’ve disliked her that long?” asked Sora, looking confused about that. “She doesn’t seem that bad.”
This was the point Lilian remembered the first time she knowingly met the quiet Sora was practically at the hip of Gwen. Not that they spoke - she was too busy being upset at another sudden appearance of Gwendoyln. “We were close...once,” Lilian said. “But glad you can deal with her. Maybe it can make her leave me alone.”
Lilian walked around the tree again and looked up to see Gwen’s body still struggling in the tree as she finally got her sandals back on. Her smile was swept away with the breeze.
“Speaking of, we should try to figure out where we are and where to go. Gwendoyln, climb to the top of the tree and see what’s around!”
“Finally admitting you need me for things?~” teased Gwen as she tried to kick her way free with her black boots.
“Need - no,” growled Lilian before a reluctant sounding sigh. “But you’re further up the tree already, so can you just do it? We’re clearly in a new world, so we need to be sure where we are. Like I said...I don’t want to see either of you hurt.”
“Fine, but catch my guitar. It’s going to keep getting tangled if I go up further.” Gwen rolled herself out of one of the straps on her black case.
Lilian narrowed her eyes. “I don’t even have my little bag and you have a whole guitar with you? We’re going to stand out so much in this world and make things more difficult!”
“Oh right - you always did love this fantasy stuff, didn’t you, Lil’ Lily,” said Gwen as she finally got her guitar free of the grasping branches and dropped it when Lilian looked ready to catch it. “Who cares about blending in anyway unless you’re trying to impress the pretty elves or something.”
“Just climb already,” Lilian growled as she caught the falling case with more of her previous stumbles without somehow breaking it or herself, being surprised by the weight of it.
Gwen went quiet as she climbed up to beyond Sora and Lilian’s sight. After a few minutes, she was seen coming back down with leaves in her hair. Gwen didn’t look winded from the whole exhibition and had a wide smile on her face.
“Okay first of all, this place is huge - not just the forest, but whatever this place is,” said Gwen, looking down at the other two. “A bunch of little cities, a large castle further out, mountains beyond that, smaller ones scattered around, big flying creatures - it’s nuts.”
“Castle?” Sora thought about that curiously. “Like a place with kings, queens, and knights?”
Lilian was secretly grinning as she was hoping that was the case. She did love this “fantasy stuff”. If only I wasn’t here with her…
“But as far as what is closest that I could see, there’s a town that way with lots of smokestacks and could see lots of bustle. And two villages this way separated by a field. One seems like it’s having a party and the other seems so quiet and peaceful in comparison.”
“Quiet...like dead quiet?” asked Sora. “That way sounds worrying.”
“Or lootable,” said Gwen as she put the guitar back on her back. “But pretty sure there are people there...somewhere.”
“And that party could be a huge fight,” worried Sora. “At least the town sounds normal.”
“Couldn’t get a read on the people in there from this far away - it’s troublesome. No guarantee it’s good.” Gwen sighed.
Then she looked at Lily, who quickly lost her smile once the attention was back on her. Sora was now looking at her too.
They are leaving the decision to me? Or at least my insight?
“Well, if I had to pick one, I’d pick...this way.”
Advertisement
- In Serial30 Chapters
Esper: Search for Power
Dan Martin has a good life. He's respected at his job, and enjoys his work. He is close to his family, and they love and support him. With engaging hobbies, relative financial security, and freedom to learn and pursue his interests, Dan is happy. So it's not particularly welcome when he's selected by an inscrutable and seemingly omnipotent System as a test subject. The downsides: All of this is insane and by any rational analysis he's gonna die. The upsides: Super powers, a cure for a physical disability that had limited him, and above all, so very much to learn (for as long as he can avoid dying). I am very much a beginner as an author, and any feedback or suggestions on how to improve would be deeply appreciated. Chapter releases should be daily for the first two weeks and sporadic after that as I use up my buffer. Please consider this work as a rough draft subject to revision and/or retcon. It is not only my first attempt at original story telling, but at world building and RPG style system design. The latter has been very difficult, even drawing on the brilliant work of many RPGs and LitRPGs for inspiration. Thank you to any willing to give a new story and a new writer a try!
8 167 - In Serial13 Chapters
To change a destiny
Elias is a normal newly turned 18 years old boy living in the slums of northern Sweden, as he survived his birthday and it’s his last chance to a life of... well life. He knows it's a race against the clock and that every day could be his last.But the system is giving him a chance to travel and find his soulmate before it's too late.Will he be able to survive an unfair death and will he find happiness with his soul mate when he finds her? Liam is a not so normal 16-year-old boy from the social elite of the British island and the world. To his father's great disdain it stands clear that Liam's soulmate is from the lower standing classes and has to go on a journey to find her. With pockets loaded with money, he sets off on a journey that will change his life forever.Will he even like his soul mate and will people understand how wrong they are? Follow our two boys on their adventure to find what's missing through a shattered world and everything is controlled by a system that will kill you if you don't find your soulmate before the youngest turns 18. How could this world even run and will they make it?
8 72 - In Serial62 Chapters
Wolf King: Love That Transcends Worlds
(Cover Art is not my own, If the creator contacts me I will take it down immediately.)December 25th 2019, among a cheerful time of the year, family and loved ones gather to celebrate the holidays.Squad leader Sin of the Blood Dragon Mercenary Team, receives a call from his brother in arms Zen. The love of Sin's life had been struck by a car in a hit and run. She was rushed to the hospital and died during operation.Stricken by grief, rage, helplessness and sorrow. Sin gets drunk the night of his lovers death. Upon scrolling through investigation reports on the internet, a pop-up appears on Sin's screen asking."Would you traverse the path of kings, bloodshed and war to save your loved one's life?"Clicking on the "Yes" button another display appears in front of Sin's eyes "You will now be transported to the Desolate Kingdom. Good luck, don't die before you saved your loved one's soul."Thus begins the journey of Sin, a Mercenary Team Leader travels through time and space. Entering into a land influenced by cultivation, and rpg-elements. Where "Might makes right, and the weak shall kneel" To save his lovers life, how many corpses will be left behind?Also retrying my hand at writing stories to finish a previous one left untouched, please bear with me along this road.
8 90 - In Serial18 Chapters
The 7th Lord [HIATUS]
This is the story of a young mercenary who’s adventure will lead him to become one of the 7 great lords of the continent of Siegdrak. On his way to power he will meet various adversaries and allies alike. Join the young mercenary on his adventure as he fights wars, make comrades and sheds tears. All through his rise to become a man who can protect his companions.
8 124 - In Serial10 Chapters
Caught (ON HOLD)
8 162 - In Serial4 Chapters
Fallen Angels (Death Is My BFF fan fiction)
8 147

